I think this was a pretty good video, all i see you need to do if adjust the position of some of the shots. The widescreen is a little off. In AE just press P on your footage, and then in the right numbers(the ones on the right) move that till it looks good :D
Also a hostage taker wouldn't have left a gun right next to him. and the shell or in your case CO2 cartridge wouldn't have landed in front of him. Try working better on your angles and get more people. I will see what you have done later if i come across you guys in the future
Also a hostage taker wouldn't have left a gun right next to him. and the shell or in your case CO2 cartridge wouldn't have landed in front of him. Try working better on your angles and get more people. I will see what you have done later if i come across you guys in the future
Also a hostage taker wouldn't have left a gun right next to him. and the shell or in your case CO2 cartridge wouldn't have landed in front of him. Try working better on your angles and get more people. I will see what you have done later if i come across you guys in the future
Also a hostage taker wouldn't have left a gun right next to him. and the shell or in your case CO2 cartridge wouldn't have landed in front of him. Try working better on your angles and get more people. I will see what you have done later if i come across you guys in the future
@ExecuteExpensiveStuf I could make a way better video dumshit i have a canon 5d mark2 , Adobe master collection, MAcbook pro, imac way better than this shit hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaaha gayest fucking video i have ever seen
Great work. But I do want to point things out. You need to improve your cinematography. That was the biggest flaw I saw in this film. Second, audio. Your audio was very inconsistent. There were too much 'room noise' variations and it was hard to hear what you were trying to say many of the times. And there were other FX issues, like color grading and correcting. I suggest you watch Freddiew2's tutorials. They are REALLY useful. Otherwise, great job. Hope I didn't sound too hostile. Keep it up.
good stuff, but i do think the angles of the camera could have been better, the sound is sorta unclear, and small details like that could have improved the quality of ur vid. im probably being outspoken since im trying to make a short action film (and boy is it it hard!) but those sorta things come with practice. Overall i thought it was excellent and i enjoyed watching it.
btw, how did u get the chance of filming in that school? (if that was a school)
@MisterMushi I myself totally agree about the camera angles, but all shots were stationary on objects since we had neither a tripod or three people. (x
and yep, it was at a school. Patrick, the taller guy, his dad works at the school so we got in.
umm...was this in a school? how did you get fake guns into a school?
AndJusticeForAll1231 2 weeks ago
@AndJusticeForAll1231 Yes it was, and we did this on a weekend, for one of our actors' dads works at the school!
ExecuteExpensiveStuf 2 weeks ago
+1 like and +1 subscriber. Great vid man.
parkerryce 2 weeks ago
I think this was a pretty good video, all i see you need to do if adjust the position of some of the shots. The widescreen is a little off. In AE just press P on your footage, and then in the right numbers(the ones on the right) move that till it looks good :D
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Also a hostage taker wouldn't have left a gun right next to him. and the shell or in your case CO2 cartridge wouldn't have landed in front of him. Try working better on your angles and get more people. I will see what you have done later if i come across you guys in the future
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Also a hostage taker wouldn't have left a gun right next to him. and the shell or in your case CO2 cartridge wouldn't have landed in front of him. Try working better on your angles and get more people. I will see what you have done later if i come across you guys in the future
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Also a hostage taker wouldn't have left a gun right next to him. and the shell or in your case CO2 cartridge wouldn't have landed in front of him. Try working better on your angles and get more people. I will see what you have done later if i come across you guys in the future
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Also a hostage taker wouldn't have left a gun right next to him. and the shell or in your case CO2 cartridge wouldn't have landed in front of him. Try working better on your angles and get more people. I will see what you have done later if i come across you guys in the future
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@BigjohnSuton It's not about you have! It's about what you can! I bet you fail... NOOB
MotioncontrolCrea 4 weeks ago
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MotioncontrolCrea 4 weeks ago
@ExecuteExpensiveStuf I could make a way better video dumshit i have a canon 5d mark2 , Adobe master collection, MAcbook pro, imac way better than this shit hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaaha gayest fucking video i have ever seen
BigjohnSuton 4 weeks ago
@BigjohnSuton Okay then. I see no videos from you so I assume you're just a liar. I'm blocking you.
Have a nice day.
ExecuteExpensiveStuf 4 weeks ago
Great work. But I do want to point things out. You need to improve your cinematography. That was the biggest flaw I saw in this film. Second, audio. Your audio was very inconsistent. There were too much 'room noise' variations and it was hard to hear what you were trying to say many of the times. And there were other FX issues, like color grading and correcting. I suggest you watch Freddiew2's tutorials. They are REALLY useful. Otherwise, great job. Hope I didn't sound too hostile. Keep it up.
MeltedFilms 1 month ago
@MeltedFilms Thanks a lot for the constructive criticism, didn't sound hostile. This is the stuff that will help me get better!
ExecuteExpensiveStuf 4 weeks ago
good stuff, but i do think the angles of the camera could have been better, the sound is sorta unclear, and small details like that could have improved the quality of ur vid. im probably being outspoken since im trying to make a short action film (and boy is it it hard!) but those sorta things come with practice. Overall i thought it was excellent and i enjoyed watching it.
btw, how did u get the chance of filming in that school? (if that was a school)
MisterMushi 1 month ago
@MisterMushi I myself totally agree about the camera angles, but all shots were stationary on objects since we had neither a tripod or three people. (x
and yep, it was at a school. Patrick, the taller guy, his dad works at the school so we got in.
ExecuteExpensiveStuf 1 month ago
keep it up guys
TheFunnynewz 1 month ago
Loved this.
SonounMancini 1 month ago in playlist More videos from ExecuteExpensiveStuf
Pretty good brodda
JarynTheBear 1 month ago