Campus Cops

[dottibody]

good atempt i just think its too long for something like this. the chinese food part was good tho. i wish the dude that took the close made a bigger deal about the hoodie

[Dancingchickenmovies]

Good movie, although I would suggest that you vary the shots a little more then add some more music.

Altogether a very good movie, though.

[WhenYouveGoneGuru]

Yeah, i should have gotten more coverage of close ups and such.

I disagree on the music though.

[Dancingchickenmovies]

It's just that the audio feels kind of empty in some places, but that's just my opinion

[WhenYouveGoneGuru]

It probably needs more ambient noise. I've seen films of about this length loaded up with a different song for every scene and its not appealing.

I guess the phone conversation would work with a few ominous tones.

[WhenYouveGoneGuru]

...Oops. Sorry. I can fix that at some point if you want.

[flyersucker7]

Thanks for spelling my name wrong Pat!