Your best one yet! The story was good, and your shot variety is improving. Was there an actual screenplay to this? You should film more coverage. Shoot more close-ups and cut-aways to compliment your master shots, making your shot variety greater. Remember continuity and the 180 and 30 degree rules. One more thing: Some of your shots lagged and were a little repetitive. Be a little more selective of what you keep when you edit. I liked this alot!I'm glad your churning out films! Keep it rolling
yeah we barely had much time to film this, because we all had different schedules. im surprised we were even able to get this one out! yeah, we forgot about that 180 and 30 degree rules but we are learning everything through experience. Thanks again for the feedback!
you know what, before happyslip entered on yt life, she is married already with child
mikoji123 1 year ago
This is ugly. Its a fake banana phone this is Epic Fail
almobja 2 years ago
LMAO...for some reason youtube recommended this vid to me...funny shit...happyslip rocks...rob is hot :P
jakartytatt 2 years ago
a ring ring ring ring ring banana phone da do da dadoodle do
Timmie3054 2 years ago
worst vid eva
eous55 3 years ago
poor poor robert. =[
Snorlax119 3 years ago
good work cuz!
chrismojares 3 years ago
johns face comes up half way through the video..... yeah
heyoldman77 3 years ago
nice job Rob! Mango Juice!
jakoolaction 3 years ago
MANGO JUICE!!!! yeahhh!!!
robmasta09 3 years ago
try and guess who dis is
jakoolaction 3 years ago
uhhh...the only dude i remember in the military is Lazy187.
robmasta09 3 years ago
its soul
jakoolaction 3 years ago
Your best one yet! The story was good, and your shot variety is improving. Was there an actual screenplay to this? You should film more coverage. Shoot more close-ups and cut-aways to compliment your master shots, making your shot variety greater. Remember continuity and the 180 and 30 degree rules. One more thing: Some of your shots lagged and were a little repetitive. Be a little more selective of what you keep when you edit. I liked this alot!I'm glad your churning out films! Keep it rolling
ssffims 3 years ago
all improv my friend all improv :)
MelMojares 3 years ago
hey man thanks for the advice!
yeah we barely had much time to film this, because we all had different schedules. im surprised we were even able to get this one out! yeah, we forgot about that 180 and 30 degree rules but we are learning everything through experience. Thanks again for the feedback!
robmasta09 3 years ago
Given the time constraints, this turned out well!
ssffims 3 years ago
Love Your Video ;-) Great JOb...Hope YOu WIn
lialie07 3 years ago
Love YOur Video..;-)
lialie07 3 years ago
Heh.
outkastpinoy2005 3 years ago
haha the beggining is really funny!
microphonejones 3 years ago