I really enjoyed that you chose the true noir medium to capture your story:black and white. You chose some excellent angles in your shoot, but there were foibles that drew attention to themselves. Think before you pan. Does the audience easily understand why you're doing it? If the audience is looking through the eyes of your character in the pan, shoot a medium or close up shot of her head turning before and after the pan. It provides continuity. Check your edits before final cut. Nice job.
Marvelous! I liked the idea of the old black and white style..good job
QClubs 1 year ago 2
awesome! i love ur jacket
0gabigirl0 1 year ago
holy cow richter, that was cool
t261785 2 years ago 4
I really enjoyed that you chose the true noir medium to capture your story:black and white. You chose some excellent angles in your shoot, but there were foibles that drew attention to themselves. Think before you pan. Does the audience easily understand why you're doing it? If the audience is looking through the eyes of your character in the pan, shoot a medium or close up shot of her head turning before and after the pan. It provides continuity. Check your edits before final cut. Nice job.
tvviewer46 2 years ago 3