"Buff Bear has Nothing to Fear" by Hosanna Yoh-Animated story project CA4

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good intro music but volume levels bounce; need more energy in the title, author, and ded page; good animation on buff bear; zoom to the sun does not make sense at .45. would have been nice if the feet move. 1.02 buff bear runs but he does not; good leaves falling; need to cut you out of the green screen with pen tool; where is your story twist? story is predictable; what is the moral of the story? good puppet tool with buff bear but could have done more animation with the other characters.