Your voice didn't sound as good on this as your other videos - off day? Regardless, I kind of feel that your voice is reaching its limits during the verse - it seems like it's almost too low for you to get it consistently. Also, some parts sound like you're not sure what note to sing... I understand that this version may not be in its final stage.
Other than that, I do think this version is more bittersweet, but if one pays attention to the lyrics in the original...
Yeah, I realize I don't sound as good as the other video... I'm beginning to think maybe that one was a fluke, haha. As for the low notes, I guess I was trying to sing louder to get more of my voice than the piano (since the piano is way louder than I can sing) and I pushed my voice too much? I dunno.
Amaaaaazing. i like this one even more than the original, and i dunno wot these people r on about, ur voice sounds great! :¬)
whereisthelove12324 2 years ago
Aww.
I love it.
I have to agree that your voice isn't at it's greatest here, but the way you executed it got to me anyway. <3
wakingdown 3 years ago 8
Sound quality is better on this one. Lovely.
CacklingPomegranate 3 years ago 6
This is really touching. I always tried to imagine this song while I read BMB, and your adaptation is perfect! So pretty.
CacklingPomegranate 3 years ago 7
wow this version IS really sadder than the other...good job!=)
EllyOrNessa 3 years ago 5
... then one can see how sad the lyrics are and get past the "poppiness" (albeit only slightly) of the original version.
destructicon500 3 years ago 5
Constructive criticism!
Your voice didn't sound as good on this as your other videos - off day? Regardless, I kind of feel that your voice is reaching its limits during the verse - it seems like it's almost too low for you to get it consistently. Also, some parts sound like you're not sure what note to sing... I understand that this version may not be in its final stage.
Other than that, I do think this version is more bittersweet, but if one pays attention to the lyrics in the original...
destructicon500 3 years ago
Yeah, I realize I don't sound as good as the other video... I'm beginning to think maybe that one was a fluke, haha. As for the low notes, I guess I was trying to sing louder to get more of my voice than the piano (since the piano is way louder than I can sing) and I pushed my voice too much? I dunno.
Thanks though, oh loyal "fan".
weirdduck88 3 years ago