Looks like fun. The editing though made the spatial layout of the scene confusing. Maybe sticking to one action line and keeping the camera to one side of it, between the cuts would have been better. Another awkward thing is that there is no rythm to the cuts. Some cuts feel too long and others too short. Maybe having lots of 3 second cuts would have made a better beat. Dont mean to be negative, just give some helpful pointers. Then again, what do i know :) Cheers
It was good I liked it, but there some minor flaws. The noise would've been really important and the kidnappers didn't show too much force, like when that dude heard something, the other one just put that dudes arms behind his back. The kidnapped victim couldve like tried to scream or something, he didn't seem like he didn't care that he was kidnapped lol haha. But I liked it it was still really good!!
Looks like fun. The editing though made the spatial layout of the scene confusing. Maybe sticking to one action line and keeping the camera to one side of it, between the cuts would have been better. Another awkward thing is that there is no rythm to the cuts. Some cuts feel too long and others too short. Maybe having lots of 3 second cuts would have made a better beat. Dont mean to be negative, just give some helpful pointers. Then again, what do i know :) Cheers
WhatWouldBukowskiDo 3 years ago
the guy shouldve covered the other guys mouth when he pulled his hands behind his back. such a disappointing video.
OutlawedSailor 3 years ago
Wow. Such a disappointing video. I would've given this 5 stars if the guy would've covered his mouth. But, sorry. 1
cinnomoncandy 3 years ago
It was good I liked it, but there some minor flaws. The noise would've been really important and the kidnappers didn't show too much force, like when that dude heard something, the other one just put that dudes arms behind his back. The kidnapped victim couldve like tried to scream or something, he didn't seem like he didn't care that he was kidnapped lol haha. But I liked it it was still really good!!
Bell660 4 years ago
I liked it. A very complete little film. Was curious though, what made you decide to do this as a silent?
mightyman25 3 years ago