Poetical Vision #2- Three

[LittleMissScooter]

He told me. I still question these dreams. This reply I receive It's just not very good... Child, I'm having these dreams The child, awakening from sleep. The things which will be versus what would. He told me and I've dreamed. It's just not very good. (excerpt from "Part Two") I wrote that under the inspiration after reading a friend's poem "Dreams", this friend who sort of resembles you.

[BooderMcDoo]

thats awesome stuff. youre pretty dang good!!! thanks for the comment and the view.

[LittleMissScooter]

Definitely. Always feel free to ask if you'd like to hear more of my other poems.

<3 Sandy aka scooter

[Nanalew]

No help in logic only help in art -- i love this line.

well done, samwise.

[BooderMcDoo]

that is probably my favorite line as well. i smiled and got a little excited when i came up with it. and thank you for your compliment Shawnana

[JohnsHouseofFun]

nice.

i like that you did subtitles instead of reading it out loud. it felt like an old war movie, with a scene of a soldier writing home...with electronic music in the background

[BooderMcDoo]

lol, i never thought of it that way. im glad you liked it my friend!!!