What They Don't Know - [Chp.1]

[argentinachika]

im loving this xD reaally really cool :D

[triplemrsjonas]

so good(:

[JonasBrothersClubb]

ooo its getting good :D make more jonas buddi :D if i can say that xD

[bianca960903]

wow. dying for more . thats the kind of writer you are. :D off to the next chapter!!

keep writing!!!!!

[xoxluvjonasxox]

awesome!!!!!

[princessdj3]

Sorry i was about to read the wrong story!!!lol!!!im not really feeling good! so i decided to read this chapter and maybe the second one before i go to bed.looks pretty good!

[justxaddxcaffeine]

dude, you're stories are

thaa BOMB. like BOOM. :D

[iluvnickj27]

i love it!

[JBareOFFtheCHAINXO]

OMJ !! This is completely amazing !

Post more sooon !!!

[iwantskittles]

More!! This sounds crazy good!!

[uRockMyWorld63]

Did I already comment?

hmm I don't remember.

anyyywayyy

guess what!?!?!?!?!?!

I FREAKIN LOVE IT ALREADY!

POST MORE POST MORE

POST MORE!

[deskjwet]

i love it plz post more

you always know how to write so well

love all your other stories too

***Hayden***

[WishUponAJonas]

aww thank you!!

that means alot to me =)

[alyssacc5196]

oooo more please

[peacelovejonas505]

awesomeness!!! sounds so good!! please hurry with more! =]

[PeacexLovexJonas23]

I CANT WAIT FOR MORE ITS SO AWESOME!!!!

are you gonna keep writing jonas brother love story??

<33 Caitlin Marie

[WishUponAJonas]

thanks!!

and ya

of course i'm going to continue it! XD

[PeacexLovexJonas23]

awesome your stories are a BLAST B-L-A-S-T double exclamation point period dot dot dot lmaooo wow im really hyper right now!!!!

<33 Caitlin Marie

[CosmoGrl76]

post more soon please = ]

[roxysurfingirl]

ooooh, :)

[haleylovespattinson]

whoa

love it !! :)

[bobbillybert]

I like it so far! Plese write more!!!

[jbdiamondx]

awesomee :)

[argentinachika]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! this is sooo effinn cool..seriouly:]

i cannot wait to c who HE is..xD

EPPPPPPPPPP!

[DianneLozada]

OMG I loove it :) I can´t wait for the next one.

[Elineuh23]

Great first chapter! I can't wait for more to come !!

[stefs24]

looks good.. one thing.. you have that u turned seventeen over the summer but ur best friend is still 15? you said she didnt turn 16 for another two months? thats the only thing that didnt really make sense to me, otherwise.. it sounds interesting.. i would keep reading

[WishUponAJonas]

woops...

let me go back and look at that ;)

[WishUponAJonas]

oh

that's what you mean!! lol

i know it doesn't make sense..

play along with me =P

[emma2006]

sound great i cant wait!!

[terexajbfan]

Woow really like it!!!! you should continue

[aDctd2luv4ever]

awesome x 10!!

[oneloveejbs]

awesome!

[soontobemrsnickjonas]

i love it but please please please please please ect. cont. your oter series i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it but this one is amazing too love it :)

[333sim333]

This sounds really good! I can't wait for more, but not to rush you. Masterpieces take time :)

OH AND I BET that she saw the MUFFINMAN! either him o SIMON cowell! it has to be! lol can't wait for more!

[djmufasaisoffdachain]

sounds good

[NewL30]

hmmm i was gonna guess joe cause at first all the pics were of him but then i realized there were pics of kevin and nick at the end so now i'm not so sure lol. i really should stop guessing. i'm always wrong anyway lol.

can't wait for more!

[WishUponAJonas]

ahah

you make me laugh..

thanks for reading!! =)

[AaronJohnsonsWellFit]

oh my gosh, it's amazing! you have to make this!!!

[WishUponAJonas]

thank u!! XD

i will

[tam709]

thats sooooooo cool!!!!! im seriously loving it already lol

[WishUponAJonas]

=)

thanks so much!!

...i am going to go catch up on your last few chapters now lol

[uRockMyWorld63]

Sounds AH-WESOME( :

haha. Post more soon( :

[volleyballorilldie]

sounds amazing. :] please post soon.

[anicolem09]

wow! sounds good. keep it coming

[jbluv4life]

sound really good!!! cant wait for next part!!!

[floridababe91]

i love it!!!!

ahhh post soon plz!!!!

[iluvdalejr88]

wow i like it please post more!!!

[fuentes619]

I like it and there's a jessica and i'm a jessica :) hah.

[xxlovexxJONAS]

i loveeee it [:

im gonna take a good guess that "him" is Nick ?

but thats justt a guess.

post more soon :D

xoxo,

Emma♥

[jemilylover]

omg

you so have to make this

[LilAznChic771]

OOOOOOHH

i likee it :D

<33

[Vontavia09]

I like it!!!

I really do!!

I think i have a good feeling about this one!!

[pokemonwarrior10134]

That is going to be a real good story i can't wait to read more in to it

[cpwlvr121314]

ahhhh! sounds amazing! <33

[acdc2142]

awesome I loved it really good can't wait for the next lol!!! :D

[321JonasGirl123]

OHHHHHH

will u post tonight

i really like it

im guessing "him" is Joe?

haha

[WishUponAJonas]

lol

did the many pics of him give it away =P

[321JonasGirl123]

kindav but they were HOTTTT

will u read my story Cant Have You? and comment? idreally like ur pinion