Betrayal - Part Two

[hinata559]

lol

[CharmedX321]

Love the running down the street reminds me of THE BILL.

[rstudiosfilms]

@CharmedX321 Haha. Not quite what I was going for - but I have had other comments saying it's very 'TV' like. ;) Hopefully my next film comes across more cinematic.

[FrostByte10101]

The Colt Pistol thingy the guy pulls out of the draw is mine! Woot Woot!

[CrescentStudios]

Wow. There were a few problems with it, though. The guns and police uniforms looked fake, and there was a mild continuity issue (how could the boss immediately tell that Ryan was outside?), and the plot was a little confusing (probably because I didn't fully read that bit at the beginning), but apart from that, I loved the shots and angles, and credits. Oh, and the location was perfect for that film. In anything else it would have looked pretty manky.

[tinyboy123]

I think he knew that Ryan was outside because he heard the gunshots, the reason why he thought it was Ryan is probably cos he'd sent the other two on a job and Ryan was also the last person he'd talked to.

[x0z0x]

Rob =)

Nice one

[theniallhoutenshow]

I loved the story and the editing. It was really gripping.

Unfortunately the acting ruined it. And the police uniforms' really took away from it.

Apart from that. It was really good and I can't wait to see more of your stuff :)

[Deadmeatproductions]

That was really impressive. I love the style you edited the movie with, it felt really proffenssional and slick. Altough I hated the lack of blood and gore, I need some red in my movies to in enjoy them DAMMIT!

[flobotnum]

Hi, i saw found out about this from indy mogul.

very impressed guys! excellent work :)

Emily

xxx

[ZacharyDuhamel]

R u going to make part 3?

[rstudiosfilms]

No, I doubt it. I want to move onto a different project but my friends were thinking of carrying on the story... I'll let you know...

[tyrakthedestroyer123]

What does "the organisation" do?

[rstudiosfilms]

Well, It's not that important to the story, really. It imports and sells drugs illegally.

[tyrakthedestroyer123]

I didn't think it was that important, it was just really bugging me. Great video by the way.

[thebaloob123]

nice!, it was hard to hear with some of the accent's (I don't live in the UK too) and there was a bit too much back round noise (try getting an external mic) but it was terrific. only problem was, if the organization could have been taken down like that, it wasn't much of a gang.

[willsoccer725]

NOOOOOOOO!!!! THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!!! The fake blood was amazing.

[rstudiosfilms]

Yep, one of them we won at a fair thing and the others were toys I'd bought with logos and the ends painted black.

[kidrobotcp]

Nice. I'm assuming that the guns were toys painted black? Where did you get them? (I live in the UK too).