The Philosophy of Liberty (remade)

[voldemeg]

I have to say I'm glad you remade this, the original was a little cheesy with all the colors and fonts and the odd music. This is clean, easy to understand, and it appeals to my design aesthetic with the modern colors and animations. I do agree with some of the other comments that perhaps no narration, or no on-screen text would be a good idea, as having both tends to be somewhat distracting. If you do lose the narration some light music could be nice.

[Malthus0]

I am afraid this fails to beat the original on the level of art, or propaganda, & of cource the point was to keep the orignal content so the only reason to remake it would be to make it better on those levels.

[ostralopithicus]

Thanks for your efforts! The more varieties, the more reach.

[vspqbd]

I like your voice. :)

[Krampfarsch]

i clicked on "like" but i like the original much better

[myusernameisluc]

Kudos for trying, but I didn't like this video. I found the visuals more confusing than explanatory. While trying to fathom what they meant, I lost focus on the text.

[davyjames]

The music in the original gave it a real sense of drama, without at least some music the gaps between you speaking are too barren.

[ericfontainejazz]

Thanks. This stuff is really simple. I wish they would teach this stuff on Sesame Street.

[tocardx]

I like that you made the attempt, but this is full of fail.

You didn't really speed up compared to the original... so there's no benefit there...

The visuals are just confusing and much less representative than the original...

and your English (specifically accent) needs a lot of work for you to be the voiceover for this.

I think maybe you have the editing talent to make a better Philosophy of Liberty video but this video was not it - for sure.

[bugsz1]

Exactly!