u've got tallent...but wat u neeed to do is put som more heart into it...dont just say the words...look at the other rappers music and see how they rap that mite giv u an idea
i saw your comment on another video, so i listened to this song and got a little bored.. it's like the same beat over and over again and your voice is a little dull, but lyrics are good!
you need to do exactly what chuckojc94 said. take the background track down.. get more raw beats with bass not so much the modern beats these days and pronunciate more.
It's good and you would rip the grime scene up if you keep practicing and making more but a bit of advice, try and take the background track down a bit lower cause I could hardly hear half of it cause the background was so loud, but overall, some real potential right here.
Saw your comment on another video decided to have a look. Quite impressive lyrically. However some advise is that you need to put abit more eunthsasiam into your rapping, don't just say the words. you don't wanna sound like an old school mc. you got potential just put brains down on paper and imprivise in the song you'll do well. keep it up tho
@Greazy241 Also don't go for the look of being 'mature' your young, therefore use young and talent effectively. try go for better beats aswell. not hard deep ones.
your good plz dont fuck it n go mainsteam like that prick chipmunk
deanrow89 8 months ago
keep it up ,forget the haters =)
IceSubeZero 8 months ago
u've got tallent...but wat u neeed to do is put som more heart into it...dont just say the words...look at the other rappers music and see how they rap that mite giv u an idea
foluke12wilson 9 months ago
@foluke12wilson thanks for the advice listen to my new track time to shine am sure ur opinion will change :D
Greazy241 9 months ago
hey luv ur accent where're u from?
whydontyousayso13198 9 months ago
@whydontyousayso13198 london
Greazy241 9 months ago
@Greazy241 u dun sound like a british ( not in a bad way)
whydontyousayso13198 9 months ago
@whydontyousayso13198 where do i sound like am fro, then
Greazy241 9 months ago
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whydontyousayso13198 9 months ago
i saw your comment on another video, so i listened to this song and got a little bored.. it's like the same beat over and over again and your voice is a little dull, but lyrics are good!
lUvAdDiCt2711 10 months ago
@lUvAdDiCt2711 thanks for the advice i wont be using that sort of beat dah otfen
and thanks for the support
Greazy241 10 months ago
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WaveyArtist 10 months ago
you need to do exactly what chuckojc94 said. take the background track down.. get more raw beats with bass not so much the modern beats these days and pronunciate more.
dkzwengert 10 months ago
It's good and you would rip the grime scene up if you keep practicing and making more but a bit of advice, try and take the background track down a bit lower cause I could hardly hear half of it cause the background was so loud, but overall, some real potential right here.
Blairg100 10 months ago 5
@Blairg100 thanks for the advice and for the support
Greazy241 10 months ago
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swingler440 10 months ago
Saw your comment on another video decided to have a look. Quite impressive lyrically. However some advise is that you need to put abit more eunthsasiam into your rapping, don't just say the words. you don't wanna sound like an old school mc. you got potential just put brains down on paper and imprivise in the song you'll do well. keep it up tho
Chukojc94 10 months ago 9
@Chukojc94 sfe bro
Greazy241 10 months ago
@Greazy241 Also don't go for the look of being 'mature' your young, therefore use young and talent effectively. try go for better beats aswell. not hard deep ones.
Chukojc94 10 months ago
@Greazy241 sfe?
TheOriginalGermanKid 10 months ago
@TheOriginalGermanKid it basically means thankyou
Greazy241 10 months ago
Nice track, keep it up!
SimranE13 10 months ago
Says - "Went In"
YoungMazeTV 10 months ago