Zeus- Father

[xL3g3nd12igox]

Good...If your christian keep doing this...who cares about what people think. You got to understand that if your rappin about GOD then it should be for him and not for money? Cause I guess RAP is about cussin and getting into young people's minds which is kind if ridiculous cause that what people like to hear? Personally, I like it. It's good but talk about more real life events or stories and or GOD. But, with a good beat and rapping a little better cause it does sound like your talking...

[krayAK47]

I like the message of the song but you song like ur talking though the whole song but ohther than that good job keep it up. Remember you only can improve good luck buddy.

[Youchiable]

not for me sorry dude...

[AJandtheArgonot]

@BigPureOne its my own opinion if you dont like it too bad. Its his own fault for inboxing me this trash.

[MrWdotS]

Fuck everyone thats asking why they got inboxed u clicked on it and u came here he dint make you...Zeus keep it bro...these punks dont know music all they wna see is u being signed to the elite in order for them to listen to you.

[xxLowryd3rxx]

Why the hell was i sent this wack ass rap??

[starrman1997]

HATERS:

(H)aving

(A)nger

(T)owards

(E)veryone

(R)eaching

(S)uccess

[chessinfantry]

@starrman1997 i think u are confused kid, let me explain why "people be hatin yo" its probably cause they took the time to listen to the guys song and commented that its honestly not good, in fact its terrible....my guess is ur probably another talentless wannabe in denial to the fact that ur just not good, keep dreaming tho kid but also wake up and be honest with yourself...i dont think people really care about his success hes just not good...period

[starrman1997]

@chessinfantry, I usually ignore "IGNORANT" people such as yourself but I figured I have a few minutes.... first of all I'm probably old enough to be you father (which I wouldn't want to be) don't let the 1997 in the name fool you, second, you say I'm confused because I posted "HATERS"?, Sounds to me like you're the one confused, as far as me being talentless (LMAO) you continue living your miserable life hating on people and I'll continue living my life, I gotta flight to catch "HATER"

[chessinfantry]

@starrman1997 ur confused cause u think people who dont like whatever u do just dont want to see u succeed. im saying that u should accept ur not very good and improve. truth hurts kid if u cant handle it than dont ask for it than whine cause ur in denial.... dont be mad at me crybaby, it is what it is......shit : (

[starrman1997]

@chessinfantry Do you see why I called you "IGNORANT". listen to yourself, it's not my music, I'm not a rapper or try to be one, and for the record I'm very successful at what I do and I have the bank account to prove it...........I tell you what , this will be my last comment to you, I'll let you have your 5 minutes of fame on Youtube, it's pretty obvious you have some serious issues, I meet assholes like yourself everyday, so you go ahead and continue with your poor miserable life "HATER"

[chessinfantry]

@starrman1997 look kid, i know ur just being a stubborn lil teenybopper who will rebel all day against reason, but i think ur retreat is evidence that deep down u get what im sayin. im sure everybody in ur world is "IGNORANT" and "HATING YO" but maybe u should analyze yourself and give in to the possibility that ur not that good....im speaking in general i dont know what u do im just making a point.....haha oh and u just slipped and made it so obvious u want to be famous....no wonder u mad kid

[geweher1]

its diffrent ill give it that im not big into religous rap... when i got here it was 665 veiws. does that mean im the 666 veiw?

[HiphopNila]

Hey man, if you read your comments, dont. Haters hate, just look at the like/dislike bar and decide if you need to work on it.

[chynagirl4]

like it

[BigBossLawl]

Please don't do a dub take when you are tone deaf, cause you can't keep your pitch consistent... for fuck sakes...

[jvolness7]

This could definitely use some work, but I like the message. Keep working at it, man!

[shotgunsrbest]

The next person who in boxes me something that deserves to be locked up in a box and dropped to the bottom of a construction sight porta potty. Will get a thunderous right back hand to the fucking ear.

[kparakpolicguy]

okay, First, not gonna say it's good and also not gonna say it's CRAP(although it's leaning more to that side). Dude u got a message but obviously not being packaged well.It's like your trying to sound like bone thugs and 2pac together---> not a good mix, you should go back and listen to how other rappers have delivered their message.listen to Venni Vetti Vecci (jarule first album) or DMX (dark and hell is hot). they have enuff tracks to guide you on how to pass a message to GOD. peace!

[lmsilvias14]

keep following your dream and don't let anyone stray you from your beliefs... friendly suggestion would be to add more emotion and pitch changes through out the song! good luck and best of wishes...

[sessionmessiah]

I don't mind it... not every rapper has the same style... this is a SONG...doesn't matter the approach in it, , we shouldn' t rush to judge it, maybe this type of spiritual rap is the future hah hah...

[Da1337DoOD]

I dont like it. Dont get me wrong dude, but its just not the style I like. Try doing Slim Shady style rap cus u clearly has some skills ;)

[iXxXi0BlancRoi0iXxXi]

make a more professional record bro and i definiately will download this track ;)

[DXsunboxnreviewings]

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[roxrockman]

I like it. Tho I'm half asleep still, itz all good! :)

[AJandtheArgonot]

why did someone inbox me this crap?

[justinacordova]

@AJandtheArgonot agree, the intro sounds like japanese. The rest, sounds like...just talking. Having said that, keep it up guy. Listen to some Jeezy, and get hard....AND WAIT ARE YOU CHRISTIAN? You need to think about what rap is. It's anti-establisment and you are rapping about the most ancient of establishments? Maybe you should just stop. Or start talking about real shit, not your crying to god. #hater Don't inbox me again.

[HolyMisfit]

@justinacordova That was the most ignorant comment I have ever heard. Listen to some Jeezy? Like what? YOU need to listen some real music and stop filling your head with trash.

[justinacordova]

@HolyMisfit Sit.and.Spin

[HolyMisfit]

@justinacordova R u a guy or a girl? Justin or Justina?

[HolyMisfit]

@justinacordova Stop and Open you eyes.

[MrWdotS]

@justinacordova fuk jeezy

[TheDamien420]

@justinacordova~ jeezy sux, he ain't hard either...he's just anotha puppet 4 da industry...u must luv lil' wayne 2, huh...gay ass rappers. and 4 homeboi, keep it up...u should do a song about illuminati

[TheHappy117]

@AJandtheArgonot its not bad just try to keep stuff for ya self and dont be postin shit nice beats GHTVzues

[AJandtheArgonot]

@TheHappy117 i can post whatever the fuck i want. Run tell that.

[TheHappy117]

@AJandtheArgonot hey atleast he aint a pussy like you to post some of his rap why dont you run and tell that bitch

[AJandtheArgonot]

@TheHappy117 So im a pussy for not posting rap? You are pretty stupid aren't you. Your the pussy for using empty insults what are you a little kid? This is horrible.

[TheHappy117]

@AJandtheArgonot naaw u have the empty insults all you doing is runnin your mouth

[AJandtheArgonot]

@TheHappy117 Go play in traffic little boy Im done.

[TheHappy117]

@AJandtheArgonot Yeah thats what i thought

[AJandtheArgonot]

@TheHappy117 ohh this kid is tough. LOL what a loser.

[TheHappy117]

@AJandtheArgonot your the loser still living with your mom

[AJandtheArgonot]

@TheHappy117 Wow your pathetic what are you twelve? No wonder you think this is a good song. Im done dont forget to eat all your veggies.

[TheHappy117]

@AJandtheArgonot naaaw im way over twelve wat does veggies have to do with this stay on the topic

[AJandtheArgonot]

@TheHappy117 you have the I.Q. equivalent to a twelve year old so if your adult I apologize the system has failed you.

[MrWdotS]

@AJandtheArgonot fuk u

[AJandtheArgonot]

@MrWdotS no fuck you sir.

[thacraziac]

Good song homie

[katroulas666]

Very good song dawg....for real!!!and cause i write lyrics and rap 3 years now (i dont say i am experienced or somethin)but i would like to listen your voice with a lil more.....nerve is the word???you know??a lil more "angry" more powerfull!!!!like not so much singin at your verses i would like more spit your lyrics!!!greetings from Greece!!

[Showbert1]

Never Give On Your Hopes And Dreams And Before You Know It You Made It

[MrSteven1981ish]

Dope spits mayne real shit search D HOGG DA BEAST

[3000Kings]

its hot man keep it i like this You will make it keep god 1st.

[10qaws]

cool pumpin my blood right on

[MrWalterb]

good song dude

[LookRealty]

This song is a total hit! You have a new fan dude. Well done again! Time for the record industry to take notice of your talent. You are getting better and better! Again, Kudos!

[0223mattias]

good one !

[ThaNooZ]

i agree with krocialblack, the beat and lyrics are good, the vocals too but just little too loud. Good song though, i played this song at work in the coffeeshop and the people there thought it was pretty good too

[krocialblack]

The vocals are a little too loud and you might need to add a little echo into it. The lyrics are great, beat the vocals is just too loud over the beat and sound a little amature. Now i'm no musical expert i'm just trying to perfect you. Put your vocals and and beat at a 50-50 rate next time, not a 50-70 and you'll sound like a pro.

[fresh224ful]

i cud dig it

[noestoyfacil]

the recording sucks

improve it please :)