YAY NOAH FINALLY STOOD UP TO KAYLA... I JSUT WISHED NOAH WOULDVE PUNCHED HER IN THE FACE!!! LOLZ I feel sooo srry for Carnell... its 2 cute 2 b feeling like that. I can't wait for the next story!!! I LUVED IT!!!
cool loved it awesome so many words to explain and get that next part going because i cant wait and it was goood! i wonder if after her makeover how many boys will like her! ecspecially carnell!!!
oh my goodness carnell really cares about her no she shouldn't get a make over why would he brake his i-pod and try to brake his computer i mean damn i kno u mad but don't be brakin exspensive stuff brake the cheep stuff
omg u go noha haha thats good 4 kyla and umm poor nellz he sounds like hes gonna go emo on us any second now lolz yay noha gonna get the makeover and theres nothing wrong with natural beauty once in a while kayla lolz 5 stars
Oh yea Noha finally told Kayla. Gosh I feel bad for Carnell. I wonder whats gonna happen after the makeover. Oh and I know she did not answer my call...lol jk. Love the story
u go noah i cant believe she stuck upp to kayla i wonder what carnell is gonna say wen he sees noha has changed i wonder if they gonna fall in love i wonder if they do fall in love what will kayla say i wonder wen the next chapter is comeing out i wonder how many chapters there is gonna b i wonder how u com upp with this stuff.....hhmmm these r the questions that haunt me
yeah she finally stood up to Kayla..its about time...and poor Carnell..dang Noha why, just forgive Carnell...poor guy. OMG i bet Carnell is gonna be evn more shocked after her knew make ovr...that was good nd i totally loved it
I would NEVER do that to my iPod!!! lol
Loved it!!
NewBoyzFan1o1 8 months ago
Go Noha!! :)
JacqueenaLaLaLa 8 months ago
HA! if iwas noha iwoulda done wayyyyy worse.
it involves an abyss. ithink ileft my evil plan as a comment on chapter 8 if not 7. lolz
Carnellsbabi1 1 year ago
thats right noha
flygirls64 2 years ago
Proud of Noha thats how you did it!!..lol
loved it 5*
bebogirl43 2 years ago
3:49
dhoney456 2 years ago
hi wat is da name of da first song?? i love it......and i'm deeply in love with your stories..hehheh
xoxoxo
Chocomania16 2 years ago
it's try again
supershawty113 2 years ago
thank u so much..xoxo
Chocomania16 2 years ago
ur so welcome =)
supershawty113 2 years ago
Omg i got a little bit of time on the computer...anyways woohoo noha get that makeover gurl strut your stuff
mszbreeding 3 years ago
Get it Noah lol
Poor Carnell he is so lost :( I wish I could give him a hug. I love Bryan through this whole stroy lol. Really good stroy chicka!!!
PanaminaProductions 3 years ago
H3Y...
WEN ISz DA 11 ONE COMIN OUT?
SeXyRooCkstar 3 years ago
definitely todayy.
OneToughCookiee 3 years ago
Wow awesome chapter I wonder if people will treat noha different if she gets a makeover.......
CarnellzGurly4Lyfe 3 years ago
that was really good now tell me something what in world happened to chapter11? lol
mizzghettoangel 3 years ago
awhh im qlad noha stood upp `xD
loved it.
* qirl yu really dont need a make-over.
carnell loves you for youu <3
smileitskayla 3 years ago
yehh go noha she finally stood up for herself....i wonder how she is gonna look with that make-over...o hope not like kayla:P....5*
tellem123dkt 3 years ago
NO NOT THE IPOD!
i dont care how mad i get throwing away my music is like commiting suicide.
Noha you don't need a makeover
I loved it
myzippy2 3 years ago 4
Ma Babyy ! Hes
sad he ran aw.omg that gOt tO me
Carnelly BOO ! lmaO Dustin Talkn bOut
"Who's fighting" THat BOOGER FACE !
Dag I Hope Her & Carnell get 2gether .
&& & lmao fished the gift card Out .
hmm shuld i call that Number ?? HAHAHA
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
LOOK Bitxh ASS HOE .If Carnell
dOnt want yOu ! .
yOu dOnt have tO wear Make-up
tO lOok Pretty ! sum PPl need it .
But yOu dont ! .i dont wear make-up .
lOl =D THAtss wuzz GOODiE !.
HOOORAHH ! Yayy TEAM NOHA ! ;-P
She stOod up tO the "Big bad woOf"
Oh they Knew YoUr name
all along Noha .
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
what is the name of the intro song?
Shunte012 3 years ago
boom boom boom by B5
OneToughCookiee 3 years ago
Woot Woot!!! GO NOHA. (:
WH3W, I'M SOOO GLADDD SHE FiNALLY STOOD UP TO H3R B#TCH OF A SiSTER. UH-OH SH3 BOUT TO GET PURTY. LOVEED IT
puertoricanprincezz 3 years ago
YAY NOAH FINALLY STOOD UP TO KAYLA... I JSUT WISHED NOAH WOULDVE PUNCHED HER IN THE FACE!!! LOLZ I feel sooo srry for Carnell... its 2 cute 2 b feeling like that. I can't wait for the next story!!! I LUVED IT!!!
jenice13 3 years ago 3
Man that was short..but i know how you get lazy Nat =P haha..i luved it!!! yay she gettin a makeover!! BEAT HER AZZ NOHA!! lmao!!
StuntinStar 3 years ago
awe, nellz really does care about her,
and she's just pushing him away,
poor noha, and poor nellz,
love the story siss,
5/5*
loveandee 3 years ago
great love it :)
ezigbonne 3 years ago
this was a great chapter....loved it<3
can't wait for the next one
SlovesCnell 3 years ago
cool loved it awesome so many words to explain and get that next part going because i cant wait and it was goood! i wonder if after her makeover how many boys will like her! ecspecially carnell!!!
popoil9663 3 years ago
oh my goodness carnell really cares about her no she shouldn't get a make over why would he brake his i-pod and try to brake his computer i mean damn i kno u mad but don't be brakin exspensive stuff brake the cheep stuff
Bryanwifey100 3 years ago 2
Lmaoo
Break the cheap stuff
haha :)
xPhreshhPrincessx 3 years ago
lol u rite
popoil9663 3 years ago
Kayla got wat she needed lol
=]]
ilovb5andu 3 years ago
plz plz plz i want tha next chpter now
B5loved 3 years ago
I'm proud of Noha standing up for herself. And I'm happy Kayla got caught. lol
rocking chapter. 5 stars
MissKellyBreeding196 3 years ago
WONDERFUL! i cant wait for the next one!!!
marjksf 3 years ago
OMFG AAAAHHHHH I LOVED IT!!!!
Souljagrl17 3 years ago
omg u go noha haha thats good 4 kyla and umm poor nellz he sounds like hes gonna go emo on us any second now lolz yay noha gonna get the makeover and theres nothing wrong with natural beauty once in a while kayla lolz 5 stars
kaslab1 3 years ago
she finally told kayla off!!! get it girl!!
kayla finally got caugh thank gosh!!
dag she went straight cold on carnell tho...he shuda known she wouldnt wanna speak to him..
OH OH MAKE OVA TIME!!
Nellz1luva 3 years ago
damn natalie..I LUVED IT!! lol!!
kimmys89 3 years ago
WOW she needed to finally stand up to kayla...i feel soooo bad 4 carnell :( hes gonna end up goin crazy!
Qtee4eva16 3 years ago
Luved It 5/5* Wow Carnell Actually Threw Away His iPod Wow I Would Never Do Dat i Can't Live Witout My iPod
Kulkat98 3 years ago
omg tht was hella good
i loved it sooo much i really
want to know wats goin to happen next
tht is how good it is
gurl keep it up
dont u stop
5 stars
CillaGirl94 3 years ago
OMG she stood up to kayla :)
but poor carnell :(
mickey2398 3 years ago
she finnallly stood up to kayla loved it
hiuty1 3 years ago
great.knt wait til the next chap.
pialuvdustinbreeding 3 years ago
Oh yea Noha finally told Kayla. Gosh I feel bad for Carnell. I wonder whats gonna happen after the makeover. Oh and I know she did not answer my call...lol jk. Love the story
lacrossebabe6 3 years ago
u go noah i cant believe she stuck upp to kayla i wonder what carnell is gonna say wen he sees noha has changed i wonder if they gonna fall in love i wonder if they do fall in love what will kayla say i wonder wen the next chapter is comeing out i wonder how many chapters there is gonna b i wonder how u com upp with this stuff.....hhmmm these r the questions that haunt me
angelluv8 3 years ago
Lmaooo i wonder i wonder i wonder xD
OneToughCookiee 3 years ago
Omg Loved IT
Noha Told kayla Of SweetHeart Its About Time
Noha Finally Getting A make OVer Ole Lord
angelasweet3 3 years ago
that was good she finally stood up to kayla HAHAHAHAHAHAHA thats what she get.
Shunte012 3 years ago
yeah she finally stood up to Kayla..its about time...and poor Carnell..dang Noha why, just forgive Carnell...poor guy. OMG i bet Carnell is gonna be evn more shocked after her knew make ovr...that was good nd i totally loved it
Ulukau808 3 years ago
great ,excellent ,wonderful
randizzille 3 years ago
i feel bad for Carnell :[
i wonder what Carnell is qoinq to say when he sees Nora's tranformation.` (:
5/5*
xdOpemamiix3 3 years ago
noha finally stood up to kayla!!!YAYYY!!!!loved the chapter!!!
datfptchick 3 years ago
ooo itz gettin all good:)
LilMissTink09 3 years ago
aww no noha y u do that
yay she finally stuck up 2 kayla!!!
lov the story
xoxlilmissunshinexox 3 years ago
loved it first 2 comment and rate
i love me!!
southcountygurl 3 years ago