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  • i write and sing my own..hmm i need some help w gettn heard n beats.not sure how to go about gettn heard

  • And just fly/In the air with the wind beneath my feet(Fly)/In his arms, sense of security(And just fly)/To the clouds, take me to number 9/No kryptonite can destroy this feeling inside(And just fly)/Save me from the villains that cause me so much pain(Fly)/What would it be 2 trade places with Lois Lane(Fly)/When he finds me I'll give him all I can/Waiting on my Superman

  • forgot to add in your information ft rachel green from friends (tv show)

  • I like this alot...imma have to do a response to this.

  • broken stories made up sorries yeah you sorry but it means nothing you cant erase the reckless emberresment that you fed to me i can makean ocean with the tears ive cried you think youre innocent but look into my eyes......

  • i am serious !! i am a really good songwriter, singer, and rapper. i can do it !

  • Look I'm looking to get out there and I like your beats I sing and write hit me back up

  • srry the one on the top is part 1 and one on bottom is part 2

  • Im so so sorry Please Forgive me Please Im sorry (instrumental) CHORUS You follow me me im waitin I follow you your waitin A black hole in creation A whole ‘nother dimention You follow me im waitin I follow you your waitin Our friendship is now fading Our friendship is now fading
  • Tears falling

    Runnin down my cheek

    Heart broken

    Pickin it up piece by piece

    And fear runnin

    All about through my brain

    Souls stolen

    I always knew your were insane

    CHORUS I thought you’d forgive me Im so so sorry I thought you’d forgive me

  • posting i escape everything but the preparation of my destiny, the days of revelation and remain strong as i pretend to be and way stronger. save songs for, the end of things prayed longer. instead of dreams i evaide thoughts for, fame riches and alot more. they think im writing for their approval but i'm not LORD. I've come through the darkness like a glowstick, couldn't shine till i was broken, from high i have been noticed. why have i been chosen? there are so many signs heaven has unfolded.

  • hey im lauren... i made lyrics to this sng and ill be putting them up later i hink their pretty good an im very serious about my music!

  • Hey what's ur email I used to sing now I just write would like beats

  • Singer songwriter here looking for hot beats for a demo get at me

  • Reminds me of Haru Haru by Big Bang

  • wad up -- <MsAdrinaJ--DID YOU PROUD--YAL SHOULD HOOK UP--

  • baby i told you once, i would never go back for another night, not for another fight, baby i tried, you lied, you said you'd never break my heart, but you threw a noose around this love and tied it tight, i'll never tell you twice, this last bit should suffice, i'm gonna keep it short and sweet, baby this is good bye

  • I love it... I would love for someone to write me lyrics to this....email... onelix@yahoo.com

  • i write music, R&B and Hip-Hop, but i write it for other people.. i record it once and re-record for who buys my songs.

  • i like your beats do you no how to make rap beats to im workin on my ablum and i will love to use 2 of your beats im a song writer and rapper but i like rap more how much you sellinb your beats for if you go to renny records im under renny5rb thats me

  • if you talking rap i could freestyle some hot shit if you talkin about singin i cant sing but i could write go to renny records and tell me if you like anything everything is freestyle im goingto make a freestyle song off your beat and tell me if you like im a great writer and it would sound more better if i write it

  • 202-705-0002 coy

  • yo i can show u my skills....i can write to any beat...it come natrually...i done lived through it all...hit me up 202-705-0002 coy

  • yo i can show u my skills....i can write to any beat...it come natrually...i done lived through it all...hit me up 202-705-0002 coy

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  • Hey you say u looking for writer, trust me I'm all you need, and i really want to put this on me mixtape, so write back soon as possible

  • i freaking love the fact that rachel (jennifer aniston's character from FRIENDS) was in the beginning

  • Something I been working

    (boy)

    I didn't mean to hurt you but I know sorry dont mean shit, every time I tried to explain you always had to walk away. I know that is impossible to take back what I did to you that day, girl Im a human I make mistakes.

    (Girl)

    I know you are a human and you are allow to make mistakes, but if you did it yesterday you dont have to do it again, the same mistake that once change our lives it hurt enough to never look back,

    (there is more but u dont have more space)

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  • use this free hiphop beat! /watch?v=DGbbRK89qe4

  • No drums..?

  • Hi this Cornell Pittman of PITTMAN INTERTAINMENT very interested in the track contact me by email pittmanent@att.net or call 574 310 9697

  • This is sick! Has anyone got the beat? Please if you do holla back at me thankyou in advance xxxx

  • ta melodia...genialne

  • i aint mean to hurt ya, hell maybe i did/im sorry either way but sorry dont mean shit,,,/whats done is done cant take back what i did/how u fix a broken heart somebody tell me quick/if my intention was to hurt ya it wasnt like this/i knew u'd b upset had every right to b pissed/but i never thought u'd jump off a bridge into ya death/i went to ya funeral chin in my chest/head down eyes closed heart full a regret/tears runnin down my cheeck all the way to my neck/

  • I'm sorry, that I wont pick up the phone, i cant get to ya, i wont know, if i would rather be aloneeee- yeah, i cant seem to, get my head around what i wanna do, with me and you, you just arent the same, who knows maybe im the blamee... you ask me what is wrong, i just smile and say that im fine knowing its a lie, behind my big brown eyes, i cant deny taht im so sorry, i never wanna hurt you honey, but its just over i cant take this any more, and its makes metorn its over

  • i want dis beattt if its still availibleee if yu would like to hear da lyrics let me kno ill put it on you tube wen i get it copy rightedd

  • baby Listen ta what im saying . Im on my kness and im praying . belive me when i say . that our Lov . to me . isnt worth wasting .. i get so scared just thinking . bout what i would do . from the very moment that i found you . god knows
  • . that i wouldnt know what to do without you . im sorry . for everything that you had to go though . its wasnt spouse to happN like that . id be the one who would risk everything ta get ya back . Somtimes the truth is sad . But you know just as well as i do . that you cant change the past .
  • email me at jcrazyj69@yahoo.com i write and sing am looking for music to use

  • i think i have a song

  • Verse1:(Female)It's only been three years & now im living in fear.

    I can't go out with my girls, He's got too much control of my world.

    I feel so sorry now, That I ever made this vow

    And I don't knowwwww howwww I said I don't know how

    I'm gonna make it out.

    If you want the rest of the song email me at Sesimps@aol.com & tell me if you liked the song.

  • It was a game kool at first now its lame shit it hurt,thr tha rain on this earth,fuck a trade keep ur curse,bitch im paid better worse,stay engage feel that jerk,turning pages freakin clerk,burning cages or get merk,amazing tastes pop a perk,in ya faces know what im worth,look at them aces under that skirt,fast pacing

  • I do everyting but i cant explain/ ima try to analyze why shit the same/ im so high, paralyzed/ tell me who feel strange?/I hit it twice still i don t gain anythin/ my aim is so distant,my pain resistant/ my minds in a cage filled rage/I try to steal the stage from some another "strange"/So im to blame coz i stage an act thats abstrat maybe I'd sell a million, i make a billion/ stop readin, ima villan/ my souls speakin/ listen, take it in N dont repeat my sin.

    shakir1234567 7 sekunder sedan

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  • If your feeling me Y u lie to me y always cheat you u never be Here at home wit me Y u always leave I cook you dont eat and you always sleep Boy ur hurtin me you dont even see that you're taking me someplace i dont wanna be and you never ask only one relaxed all this time has passed going nowhere fast silly games all the time No pleasing you None of the time Its time you learn You had your turn and now you trying to beg me to say
  • Im Sorry that your ur not rubbing me kissin me touchin me n huggin me all night and loving me right Im Sorry that that you be telling me lies not takin the time to wine and dine and get inside my mind dine Im sorry Im sorry Im sorry
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  • I came across your instrumental and was inspired to write something to it. I hope you like it. I posted it in your video responses. Your music is off the hook. Mr Tibbius the song writer.

  • i can make this song a seller if u didnt have the voices on it

  • Dude imma singer...nd i wanna know how much it would cost to buy this beat...its sick

  • Thats Rachel From 'Friends' lol Just Heard Her Say it To Ross,

    Damn shes fine

  • matamugu at your service lets get together mon like when your in the studio good day johnmichaelgolden@yahoo.com or gmail same as

  • matamugu at your service lets get together mon like when your in the studio good day

  • lets get at it ....show tonight in clearwater beach if you can make it where are you located call 727645-5845 ask for johnmichael Reggae Hall Of Fame 

  • ill get on it and send it to ur email- wats ur email?

  • i am a very good singer write me and we will talk about getting together i know plenty of producers and ect.

  • yo i can make this song 4 u hit me up on myspace hoodteamblue@yahoo.com

  • Hey what's good family my name is kervin and i'm really feeling this beat an di'm a up and cumming singer and i working on my first cd and i was wonder fi we can talk about your beats and maybe work 2gether on some tracks but give me a holla

  • @kerdy26 yeah that's what's up i can do that and if i'm havening any trouble finding u then you can hit me up on facebook under my full name kervin d. edwards or myspace too.

  • i can write to this songg ! i write songs for a living lol

  • yo i can kill dis beat 4 u so ima write 2 it and let u c wat i got

  • This is the type of beat that inspires me to do a song to it.

    REAL good beat man.

  • hello im gingie and i had alwaise wanted to sing song but the thing is i never got the chance to...so if you like i would love to sing your songs...get back at me..

  • Ima post my video on here and plz subscribe

  • It’s very hard to explain the way that I feel

    Colors are so vibrant, sounds are so real

  • All i can see is the bruises she covers up with the make up behind the scenes her mary k dealer dont care she just tryin to cake up she only want her cash in her pocket knowin home girls man is whoopin her ass and dont stop it its bullshit im in the classroom asking ?'s if she ok if she want me to help her and she say please dont intervene he is big and he is mean and if he is drunk its 2 times worse im hurt no dont touch my rib cage last night thats where he released his rage it hurts now worse

  • @01vizzle1 omgshh that was so good

  • hey man what's up my name is kervin and i am real serious about writting and music i love 2 sing and i want 2 make it big one i love tha beat man keep doing your thang

  • Hey was up man my is kervin and i' m been singing since i was a 11yrs and i been trying to put together my first cd and been looking 4 some fresh beats and came across this one it's a real nice beat and i been singing 2 it trying to come up with a song this beat is hot.

  • i could work with this

    

  • hey can i use this beat i promise i will upload tha video i just need ur approval that i can use this beat

  • i got you.

  • i got this beat on smash contact me and lemme know if you mind me using this

  • ayo this a rnb track what the heck yall writing about one talkin he goonna kill himself the otha talkin bout i got yu pregnant it was one nite stand like wtf...dat aint serious shyt

  • i think i can help you out with it is it ok if i make up a gong with your instrumental let me knoe please and u will hear it yanko

  • that girls voice is rachel from friends

  • hey i wrote to your beat .

    so get at me and ill send it to you =)

    *POETRY*

  • mane i luv it get at me

  • yo every time we argured and every time you cried/i fought my way to the top gazing through every wall and then hitting the end/hope youd see us just as a joke cuz im blowig more thank coke/ had our bad moments but when it comes to life and death id be there for you cuz/my gun hit your heart harder than steal my bullets where worser than a tank htting you ahhh lilkiller

  • love the instrumental i dubbed it its on video resposes if u wanna check took me like 1 hour lmao and got pssed all the way through it started sober and was psed by the end hahaha check it ppl :P

  • I love this instrumental so much that I could sing to it...

  • ola mi correo te dejo para hablar sobre ese tema carlos_bcn16@

  • ola yo canto y con pongo

  • you should get at us, if you are serious.....the beat is good

  • I've made a reply to this instrumental on my page. please check it out and let me know.

  • loooove this instrumental.

  • i wish i could sing to this kinda music UGH!!!

    ima try any way

  • rookie"

  • i like this could u work with me as making some tracks 4 me i sing i just need the beat i can work this track 4real please reply

  • i got you

  • hey i am a RnB singer. i write my own songs and sing.I really like this beat. i want to make a song to this beat if you have time comment me back soon as possible. i want to make this TRACK it hit. Thank You

  • im a singer

    and i like the beat

    can i take this

    im from germany

  • i have a song for this it popped in my head lemme know when you wanna hear it

  • luv it i did a song on it its sorry of what i did jai fait un album avec merc pour ton aide

  • whatsup my name's bdotcarrdie, I'm not much of a singer but a hell of a writer and I'm interested in working with you. I'd appreciate a response, thanx in advance.

  • Yo me and my partners came up with some stuff for this.! We serious, trust us. Can you send us tha beat so we can record tha song and post tha video.? Tell us what you think when you listen to it.!

  • Nice track... ^_^

  • I could write to it!!! Omg! I love writing music and singing as well! This is really hot!

  • i just lovee thiss soo muchh, i just have to come backk to it like every 2 weeks and listen :)x

  • you still need a writer....if u let me we will turn it into more dan jus a song 2 hear...it wiil b a song that they'll remember

  • still needa writer?

  • omg omg i need this i might only be 12 but thats good i need this i will give u credit i am already sighned and my producer will give u money from my next tour payment deal? pls pls pls

  • im sorry i wasn't enought i thought you and me were in luv u lied to me broke my heart it was sad i never thought we'd b apart i'm sorry i hurt u but look what u did you hurt me too now my heart is in 2 can't u see i love u but i guess it never mattered u always left my heart bruised up and battered u want me to say sorry after u left me didn' even look back ain't that sad but its alright i just got to move on be strong i guess we would always be friends nothing more now my heart is sore

  • Some lyrics I wrote. I know you will come back to me. I love you. And I know you love me. But the changes in our lives have pulled us too far apart. And we snapped. But I want you back. I wanna fill your lack of thoughts with me. [Girl] (Cries.) No... I can't your a totally different person than me now. I used to think of you as somebody that would never, ever hurt me. Ever.
  • @alexbenzedrine hey i love this beat i would like for u to contact me if u need a female singer/rap let me know at djamiladesousa@yahoo.com

  • This Is A Good Beat, When You Get A Chance Can I Get This Instrumental? I Got Something Good For This Song.

  • this makes me wanna cry deadass, ii love dhiss !

  • this is real nice;yupp imma songwriter and a singer;i actually have a group and a tight idea hit me up

  • hey i sing alot of r&b im ganna try to write a little to this then post it on youtube,.. tell me what you think when i get it done.

  • hey i write music and looking for some singers and hot beats now!! im going to venture out with this one so Im very humble when it comes to my song writing peace and love write me

  • I wrote a song to this beat its nice

  • hi

    good job !!

    i made som rnb beat

    So you can hear it in my channel

    and don't fotget yo subscribe plz

    ^^ ii hope you like it

  • hey whats good my bro went to america got talent theky told him he was to advance for the show and that he should just try to get signed your beats sounds like the beat we need to do just that so holla at me if you intrested in hearing what we got.

  • i can make this song come to life...belive i n me....can i have a link to dowload an be able to write for it...i dont have a computer at my house id love to have to beat to walk around with .... apreshiate your work =] embrace your dreams =]

  • nice sample of rachel and ross breaking up there.. :) gr8 stuff man

  • yooo i can sing..

  • lol thats off friends haha

  • i got a mix yo hot

  • nice beat bra

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  • hayyyhayy cxan i please use this beatt ???????

  • love this instrumental so much it has inspired me again...

    peace all!

  • Its beautiful... 5stars,

    I bet the full version of the beat is dope.

    Also: added to my favorites ;)

  • can i use dis beat for a song ? :) i have some good lyrics to go with it

  • I don't usually do this but I thought up something in a few minutes

    I remember all the days we spent together,

    I was on my hip-hop,

    you were on your soft rock,

    we had difference tastes but thats what made us attract one another,

    Looking into your eyes having you look right back,

    something we had it was beautiful,

    you even took time out to listen to my raps,

    you acknowledged my goal,

  • I never felt so much in love before,

    but I was dumb,

    I kept on hurting you more and more,

    which is why I'm no longer with my loved one,

    I dedicate this to you,

    Because no matter how much success I have you'll always be in my head,

    I wonder if you miss me as much as I miss my boo,

    without you this man is dead,

    this isnt finished but yeah haha

  • hmm dis beat is iiyt u know...cud write bare nice lyricz 4 dis..:)

  • i did a video responce , look it up look it up look it up !

  • uyy ke instrumental mas bakana a lo bien ufffff lastima ke por la copialina le tengan ke kolokar esos ruidos jeje pero bien ... : ) bendiciones

  • kan I use this beat for my new song? By the way, yes i'm mc.

  • this beat actually made me think about my ex girl for some reason...fire....make sure you check out my channel...im puttin out some hot beats too....let me know what yall think...keep dem beats comin!!!!

  • baby the first time i saw u i couldnt talk dis goes to my girl nathalie she can walk the talk i now u want it slow i no u never got a lover like me who got all that flow i no i got u all over the door but babe i can give u galor we can get so small we can do it in the draw babe i no how u feel i no how u like it my name is smitty i can strike it im never gonna hurt u im always gonna love u babe i hope u dont cut my heart in two

  • thia is sick ima a song writer nd a singer i jus wrote a sng to dis omg.. holla at me

  • i jus wrote a song to this and everybody sayin that shit hot might record it so everyone can see

  • i am a song writer if you want one and a singer

  • wish it didnt have those backin voice sound effects

  • soy cantante y conpositor me gustaria hacer ese tema que me ha inspirado mucho

  • este es mi numero 645068963

  • carlos_bcn16@

  • could i get this beat? (:

  • All fo real.Good looking out lol

  • excuse me but i think it's just stupid writing this dude hasn't logged in since a year ago don't think he's seen this :s alltho' this's freakin' hot!

  • Hope you enjoyed my video for your track. Holla at me :)

    Unyqe

  • Lmao i already got haters lol stand in line with the rest.If u was real u would of left a comment hiding behind ur star lol.

  • im really wanna sing for you hahah but i live in holland im sorry :( but you're beat is GREAT

  • can i get this and use this i got a song writter=n to it and u got it in a longer segment

  • hey could i sing to this beat i'm making an cd and i like this beat alot and i will put it on youtube and give you the credit

  • hey can i get this beat i like it alot and i'm making a cd and i'll put it on youtube and give u the credit .

  • baby for once ill admit/

    i wana say im sorry and i really mean it/

    never thought u you would find out my secret/

    about the holiday inn for a 3 day weekend/

    i should've covered my tracks when i came home/

    didnt think u would see the credit bill or the records of the cell phone/

    i couldnt comfront u and the truth is i know im dead wrong/

    and theres just no excuse im not the one u was made for....

    .alil sumthing

  • hey, can i remix this instrumental? as in, make the verse longer and cut down the chorus.

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