The Monkey's Paw

[howdy832]

im doing this for speech.. im ending it completely different though.at the end, mrs white is practically screaming, the knocking is continuous and getting louder, so it builds a bunch of tension Mr white picks up the paw and screams "i wish for the knocking to stop!!!" and then there is dead silence. it makes it REALLY creepy. i love it

[yonikhil2011]

uuuuugh!all the characters except herbert are 20 yrs younger!

[ugaaa5]

good effort!

[H057IL3]

Thanks, you just saved me an hour of reading an english project!!

[arfalon]

@MrBKRandy

It's vital to spend the money and get an external mic attached to the camera, a boom for it, out of sight [and a sound person to deal with it]. NEVER use the camera mic.

Forget bad accents; they make for laughing in the wrong places; go ahead and modernize it [use your own voice, as it is].

A lot of hard, GOOD work [writing, rehearsing, editing, time] is wasted here, as one cannot hear a lot of the dialogue.

[dharasick]

@arfalon

I didn't film this. I only edited it for a friend. I had nothing to do with the production of this school project, only post-production.

[lilcutie961]

odd-kward

[MrBKRandy]

terrible sound quality

[dharasick]

They all blow up.

[lilcutie961]

@dharasick oh maa goddd

[Sanaygau]

What happens when they open the door?