I don't really think the video was that slow myself, I think it was more a matter of pacing. So maybe it seemed slow, but not to me. I think it's quite enjoyable myself. :)
Liked it, v proud, keep goin you still have untapped talent. Emma must be a riot great surname, the irony is not lost. Good stuff NUMMAGE. Lets see more.
the animation coulda been done better. such as the beginning when he (or she cant rlly tell) was walking. the feet were animated weirdly. and the whole story of it didnt really make sense. and was a bit too slow. perhaps you could have gone a bit different and been more creative to make it more appealing to the viewers and the song itself.
Now now chaps. Each are entitled to their own opinion - I would say to @puremage000 not sure why you keep commenting on a video you hate so much. Your opinion is appreciated but I think you also need to accept that other people have differing opinions. A lot of hard work was put into this by the creative team so whilst we can have different opinions I think we can also appreciate creativity even if its not to your taste. Constructive criticism doesn't really seem to help anyone!
@puremage000 Because its not shit, its actually very good. Dont think you realize how much effort you need to put into getting good animation. I doubt you can do any better.
@puremage000 lets see you do better?? i know you wont post anything because you like putting down other people because you're jelous you cant do it yourself
@puremage000 no but considering you couldnt do any better how about having a bit of respect for other people and their atempts everyone starts off bad but they get better you dont seem to get the fact that this gets featured because its GOOD! people get to see this and give CONSTRUCTIVE feedback not "this is shit" so they can make it better now FUCK OFF and troll someone elses video
i think this animation has some potential, but i really think it needs a LOT more work on timing and animation. one thing: don't make a movie fit the music. you can tailor it a LITTLE to the music, but just make the movie before you choose the music, otherwise, in this case specifically, it is slow and slightly boring and the same shots are used over and over. also, the color scheme was great but the boots REALLY shouldn't look like that when someone walks (pointed when flung back)
@FidelityEverling Actually, she doesnt seem to be walking properly, she seems to be dragging her feet, which explains why the boots are pointed, she IS hauling a heavy sack too.
for a split second i thought she killed something. with red hands and a bag....and the song with the whole trouble thing. >.< other than that, the vid is so sad.
@blaqkie77 I think that one of the cooler things about animation is the artistic freedom to represent things differently than they are in real life... Wouldn't you agree?
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lol i thought she had a dead body in that bag at first, cause it looked like she had blood on her hands.. but then i was like.. oh =P overall, good job
Beggining: Dammit I hate taking the trash out this late and night, so heavy too, ugh wtf.I Hate my parents.
Middle:Only our family would have to sail a friggen boat to mainland to drop off some garbage.AWWW and I got spaghetti sauce all over my hands! Stupid chef Boyardee...I-is that bag moving? OMG WTF IS THAT THING.Oh god, its staring at me, just keep your head down and don't move.
End:HOLY CRAP THERE ARE MORE OF THEM. ummm oh god, it looks like a tumor with eyes. just play dead and sail away.
@vinceat852 I'm not retarded if the music alone wasn't enough to tell me this was going to be a sad animation putting melancholy in the title let me in on that. I get all the symbolism, mainly because it beats you over the head with it. taking out your baggage,cutting,etc the whole shebang. i was just adding a humorous twist to an otherwise depressing animation, these are the thoughts that went thought my head as I watched it and made me chuckle. i just interpreted it in my own way.
@vinceat852 Sorry to be long winded here but i feel i need to stress a point, i actually really enjoyed the animation, mind you the walking animation was a bit funky, but overall the tone and breadth of it was in my opinion good. the song was slow and thoughtful and thusly the animation was following suit. though, I feel almost like the animator was leading me by the hand saying "Do you get it yet? She is depressed, get it?"
Small nit picky things I'm sure, but hey, that's just my opinion.
Hmmm.... I have to say I really liked the style and the song payed a nice compliment to this. Paired with the song, the color scheme completely added that melancholy feel. The animation over all was a little too slow for me. It seemed like it was stretched out for the song (Idk if this was supposed to be a music video). Regardless, nice work.
@uzzellart thnx a lot for responding...yeah for the first time i didn't read the descripition so i had to ask who was the singer...very pleasant voice that it's making the clip enjoyable and truelly melancholic....nice animation that makes you travel;) keep up the goodwork;)
Why is her hands bloody? I kinda figured she killed someone to save that little critter, but I'm not sure.
Lynzinitus 2 months ago
hmm I wonder what her face looks like :D
LeaClaire1996 11 months ago
look at her feet
ryanjanlara 1 year ago
I don't really think the video was that slow myself, I think it was more a matter of pacing. So maybe it seemed slow, but not to me. I think it's quite enjoyable myself. :)
codymarmon 1 year ago
Liked it, v proud, keep goin you still have untapped talent. Emma must be a riot great surname, the irony is not lost. Good stuff NUMMAGE. Lets see more.
riddickpitch 1 year ago
@riddickpitch Thank you very much. It was my first ever animation and as you can see, not everyones cup of tea, but it won't stop me:)
Thank you for your support :)
uzzellart 1 year ago
the song and the sybolism were great but the animation was very lacking
lowdai 1 year ago
What the hell just happened!?
The description says she's carrying her Troubles in that bag, but it looks like a fucking mutated penguin!
And what did that mutated penguin go to? It's weird Purple Parents!?
You need to describe this better, but it completely lost me.
Did she kill someone? Is that why her hands were red?
Telephone09itis 1 year ago
it's impressive that she can point her toes like that in Ugg boots. :) sad but cute cartoon. really good song too.
TheLitkid 1 year ago
True from life
Abiggell 1 year ago
you're amazing ... don't stop here :-)
lot2004 1 year ago
the animation coulda been done better. such as the beginning when he (or she cant rlly tell) was walking. the feet were animated weirdly. and the whole story of it didnt really make sense. and was a bit too slow. perhaps you could have gone a bit different and been more creative to make it more appealing to the viewers and the song itself.
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baandahc4 1 year ago
uhhh not very creative. the song was pretty and i liked the color scheme tho
futurefashionista101 1 year ago
It was a veeery nice video...and the song was beautiful :3!
snapoclap5 1 year ago
Now now chaps. Each are entitled to their own opinion - I would say to @puremage000 not sure why you keep commenting on a video you hate so much. Your opinion is appreciated but I think you also need to accept that other people have differing opinions. A lot of hard work was put into this by the creative team so whilst we can have different opinions I think we can also appreciate creativity even if its not to your taste. Constructive criticism doesn't really seem to help anyone!
emmapayn 1 year ago
It's called "Trouble" by me, Emma Payn - MySpace Emma Payn for more. E
emmapayn 1 year ago
<3 it
wt's the song?? need to know it!
bebeet1 1 year ago
Well I wish my troubles were that cute. xD
shyrie15 1 year ago
46 Orcas dislike this video
Faustoteinmor 1 year ago
...so thats how penguins get there
mouldycrouton 1 year ago
La música es hermosa n_n
bauty12 1 year ago
I really liked this, especially the music.
carole216 1 year ago
Very pretty! and poignant.
1footonthedawn 1 year ago
WITCH! Lights off!
transformersfourme 1 year ago
Brilliant!
bunsinspace 1 year ago
awesome
MrRedDigger 1 year ago
weird animation buy it's alluring
ImpMarsSnickers 1 year ago
I should have clarified, the song is written and performed by me, Emma Payn
emmapayn 1 year ago
Thanks for lots of lovely comments on the music and on Miss Uzzell's creative eye.
In response to questions regarding the music you can hear more at MySpace Emma Payn
emmapayn 1 year ago
... I don't get it :(
leonidasx666 1 year ago
One who took time for another.....how sweet!
syncwithmusic 1 year ago
@aniBOOM yes, I suppose. But it threw me off a bit. Shape shifting shoes? I don't normally see that in cartoons. ;P
blaqkie77 1 year ago
wat did u use flash and after effects for
pikadayout 1 year ago
why does she look sad when she gets rid of her trouble
geek2thextreme 1 year ago
bad. dragged out shots, over use of zoom. and choppy movement.
sampsonstudios 1 year ago
why does shit like this get featured....
puremage000 1 year ago
@puremage000 Because its not shit, its actually very good. Dont think you realize how much effort you need to put into getting good animation. I doubt you can do any better.
NoteDeath010 1 year ago
@puremage000 just because you dont like it doesn't make it shit if i was shit it wouldnt get featured would it?
chaz9123 1 year ago
@chaz9123 no it gets featured because the uploader is a youtube partner, doesn't mean its good.
puremage000 1 year ago
@puremage000 lets see you do better?? i know you wont post anything because you like putting down other people because you're jelous you cant do it yourself
chaz9123 1 year ago
@chaz9123 did you ever see me say I could do better. No i said why does this shit get featured.
puremage000 1 year ago
@puremage000 no but considering you couldnt do any better how about having a bit of respect for other people and their atempts everyone starts off bad but they get better you dont seem to get the fact that this gets featured because its GOOD! people get to see this and give CONSTRUCTIVE feedback not "this is shit" so they can make it better now FUCK OFF and troll someone elses video
chaz9123 1 year ago
@chaz9123 look at you getting so fucking serious, taking my comment so personally, the video is shit. END OF.
puremage000 1 year ago
pretty flimsy boots
sheeshow155 1 year ago
Man, that walk cycle looks messed up...
kernelj 1 year ago 2
So....is trouble a blob??
andreascyu 1 year ago 2
@andreascyu notice the blood on her hands
invblu 1 year ago
does anyone notice that there is something wrong with her legs?
88multicolor 1 year ago
Zzzzzzzz...
MikeBellinger 1 year ago
i think this animation has some potential, but i really think it needs a LOT more work on timing and animation. one thing: don't make a movie fit the music. you can tailor it a LITTLE to the music, but just make the movie before you choose the music, otherwise, in this case specifically, it is slow and slightly boring and the same shots are used over and over. also, the color scheme was great but the boots REALLY shouldn't look like that when someone walks (pointed when flung back)
FidelityEverling 1 year ago
@FidelityEverling Actually, she doesnt seem to be walking properly, she seems to be dragging her feet, which explains why the boots are pointed, she IS hauling a heavy sack too.
NoteDeath010 1 year ago
@FidelityEverling I appreciate your constructive criticism :)
aniBOOM 1 year ago
i dunno. not that good imo.
pyroblade734 1 year ago
feet don't work like that.
GakkiSai 1 year ago
for a split second i thought she killed something. with red hands and a bag....and the song with the whole trouble thing. >.< other than that, the vid is so sad.
vinegar1991 1 year ago
Seems unfinished, the walk cycle needs a lot of work.
Skandornon 1 year ago 2
Quite boring, to say the least.
MyPersonalVendetta 1 year ago 2
She walks weird. xD
And the little creature things were cute. :'D
Iambenjoz 1 year ago
I don't understand why with each step, the shape of the shoe completely changes. Last I remember, shoes + feet do not do that.
blaqkie77 1 year ago 3
@blaqkie77 I think that one of the cooler things about animation is the artistic freedom to represent things differently than they are in real life... Wouldn't you agree?
aniBOOM 1 year ago 4
This time the anotation should say "Click to watch another emo animation" xd
ddPMsProductions 1 year ago
lol at her feet... who actually walks like that? xd
ddPMsProductions 1 year ago
Why would someone walk like that? That's tarded
xoxoSPOONSxoxo 1 year ago
WTF??!!
matthewrodigo1 1 year ago
someone didnt teach her how to walk right. she like flicks her foot back O.o
beerpacman 1 year ago 9
@beerpacman How you know she's wrong?
drainu1 1 year ago
What a perfect combination! The setting was perfect for the mood of the song. Give me chill down my spine.
khmerforvaver 1 year ago
@khmerforvaver Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it!
aniBOOM 1 year ago
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annaenpopannaen 1 year ago
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ratsrulb 1 year ago
@ratsrulb wow lame, that doesnt work for me anymore -.- curse you youtube
Kiloueka 1 year ago
Interesting, but SO ...like too slow music and animation for me :/ sleepy...
hellzBrother 1 year ago
lol i thought she had a dead body in that bag at first, cause it looked like she had blood on her hands.. but then i was like.. oh =P overall, good job
emeraldqueen911 1 year ago
Melancholy definition: Dull or boring area or room
pootiy 1 year ago
Walking animation is pretty lame.
Elflovag 1 year ago 4
ty bbe and its creative
pikadayout 1 year ago
Beggining: Dammit I hate taking the trash out this late and night, so heavy too, ugh wtf.I Hate my parents.
Middle:Only our family would have to sail a friggen boat to mainland to drop off some garbage.AWWW and I got spaghetti sauce all over my hands! Stupid chef Boyardee...I-is that bag moving? OMG WTF IS THAT THING.Oh god, its staring at me, just keep your head down and don't move.
End:HOLY CRAP THERE ARE MORE OF THEM. ummm oh god, it looks like a tumor with eyes. just play dead and sail away.
LordPenguin7485 1 year ago 22
@LordPenguin7485
Ha Ha
uzzellart 1 year ago
@LordPenguin7485 lol
aniBOOM 1 year ago
@LordPenguin7485
it's an extended metaphor. the fact that music score is an original composition means that it's not an actual story per se.
it's beautifully crafted with an excellent soundtrack. the animator deserves more credit.
and no, I am stauchly not an emo music fan. but I still think that it's good.
vinceat852 1 year ago
@vinceat852 I'm not retarded if the music alone wasn't enough to tell me this was going to be a sad animation putting melancholy in the title let me in on that. I get all the symbolism, mainly because it beats you over the head with it. taking out your baggage,cutting,etc the whole shebang. i was just adding a humorous twist to an otherwise depressing animation, these are the thoughts that went thought my head as I watched it and made me chuckle. i just interpreted it in my own way.
LordPenguin7485 1 year ago
@vinceat852 Sorry to be long winded here but i feel i need to stress a point, i actually really enjoyed the animation, mind you the walking animation was a bit funky, but overall the tone and breadth of it was in my opinion good. the song was slow and thoughtful and thusly the animation was following suit. though, I feel almost like the animator was leading me by the hand saying "Do you get it yet? She is depressed, get it?"
Small nit picky things I'm sure, but hey, that's just my opinion.
LordPenguin7485 1 year ago
Thank you everyone for all you kind comments :)
I used Photoshop, Flash and After Effects.
uzzellart 1 year ago
@uzzellart Well done, Rachel! Thanks for sharing your methods.
aniBOOM 1 year ago
wat animation software u use cuz i wud luv to make my own animation
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iluvgerard628 1 year ago
Hmmm.... I have to say I really liked the style and the song payed a nice compliment to this. Paired with the song, the color scheme completely added that melancholy feel. The animation over all was a little too slow for me. It seemed like it was stretched out for the song (Idk if this was supposed to be a music video). Regardless, nice work.
TheJazzyT 1 year ago 2
@TheJazzyT Cool, glad you liked it! Yes, it's a music video for Emma Payn. Sorry if it was a bit too slow for you.
aniBOOM 1 year ago
is this dido singig?it definetely sounds like her...well nice animation;)
elvisunder 1 year ago
@elvisunder It performed by Emma Payn as it says in the description.
FebruarySoul 1 year ago
@elvisunder
Hi the song was written and performed by the very talented Emma Payn
uzzellart 1 year ago
@uzzellart thnx a lot for responding...yeah for the first time i didn't read the descripition so i had to ask who was the singer...very pleasant voice that it's making the clip enjoyable and truelly melancholic....nice animation that makes you travel;) keep up the goodwork;)
elvisunder 1 year ago
Powerful. I cried because it was like I was seeing my daughter. :(
sybeve 1 year ago
i just faved it. nice work. as always
tomacalin86 1 year ago
Fantastic stuff, love the boots at the beginning especially!
eviltwinartworks 1 year ago
cool & sad
MrocznaMaska 1 year ago
brilliant!
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alcaponis 1 year ago
@alcaponis It is funny how you think you will get something. When there is not even a referal link.
NathanWubs 1 year ago
Very beautiful song. The music and the animation were made for each other. Terrific job on this... congratulations.
mrberryyou 1 year ago 3
@mrberryyou Thanks! Great job by Rachel.
aniBOOM 1 year ago 2
@mrberryyou I think they are both great but doesn't really work together.
gmh87 1 year ago
Bravo!
bloodyblood90 1 year ago
One of the best movie!
penpen125 1 year ago
beautiful.
just
beautiful.
satansbraten27 1 year ago
nice
TimTinaInesMarlene 1 year ago
@TimTinaInesMarlene nothing to add...
TheNugglas 1 year ago