your pacing is flawed, however made up for your passion. This is also a soliloquy, prudent perhaps you should try breaking the fourth wall and deliver the words more direct.
I agree with you but also didn't really believe the second half. I've played him several times (I'm an English actor) and the whole point of the ending is that Macbeth has talked himself out of killing Duncan. This being said I couldn't see the reason for your fast paced finish as he should be resigned to hide behind his weakness.
Thank You for your criticism and I truly appreciate it from someone that has played the part several times. I've loved Shakespeare ever since I was a boy and attended a performance of Henry V at the college of William and Mary in Virginia. I'm sure you are classically trained and if you've posted any of your stuff I'd love to see it. Speaking of being an English Actor-Have you ever seen Branagh's Henry V? Amazing!!
Thanks for giving me some inspiration in which to say this soliloquy :]
I have an english project where I need to memorize and perform the speech, including with emotion. I really like the part where you show regret at the "plague th' inventor" part :D
@DarrenDeBari thanks! I got a 98 :)
justcheer19 10 months ago
Awesome-Great Job!!
@justcheer19
DarrenDeBari 10 months ago
I have to recite this tuesday for my english class
justcheer19 10 months ago
Do a Great Job!
@justcheer19
DarrenDeBari 10 months ago
your pacing is flawed, however made up for your passion. This is also a soliloquy, prudent perhaps you should try breaking the fourth wall and deliver the words more direct.
This being said, i felt this was a good job
tropicalEU 1 year ago
Much appreciated-Both Criticism and Compliment
@tropicalEU
DarrenDeBari 1 year ago
@tropicalEU
I agree with you but also didn't really believe the second half. I've played him several times (I'm an English actor) and the whole point of the ending is that Macbeth has talked himself out of killing Duncan. This being said I couldn't see the reason for your fast paced finish as he should be resigned to hide behind his weakness.
Very passionate though, not a bad job at all.
philld8279 11 months ago
Thank You for your criticism and I truly appreciate it from someone that has played the part several times. I've loved Shakespeare ever since I was a boy and attended a performance of Henry V at the college of William and Mary in Virginia. I'm sure you are classically trained and if you've posted any of your stuff I'd love to see it. Speaking of being an English Actor-Have you ever seen Branagh's Henry V? Amazing!!
@philld8279
DarrenDeBari 11 months ago
Thanks and Good Luck with that Monologue MishielsNotFishy_:)
And Thanks chillamayne!!
DarrenDeBari 1 year ago
Thank You and Best of Luck with that Monologue-:)
DarrenDeBari 1 year ago
Thanks for giving me some inspiration in which to say this soliloquy :]
I have an english project where I need to memorize and perform the speech, including with emotion. I really like the part where you show regret at the "plague th' inventor" part :D
MishieIsNotAFishy 1 year ago 2
Its sad this only has 961 views. Great job my friend.
-chillamayne
chillamayne 1 year ago
i like this
tommygun415 2 years ago
Shatneresque, Shatneriffic, Shatnertastic, Shatneristic, Shatnermazing!!!
lgomez222 3 years ago
Well done bro!
MindbreakOne 3 years ago
k00l!
MindbreakEnt 3 years ago