It is a quite stirring reading. Reminiscent of how acting students are trained in Beckett's long monologues, such as Not I or Catastrophe, the repeated emphasis and clipped ends. It is a method in which poets write, yes? The extreme attention to repetition is on purpose, even just a pronoun can guide the poem so convincingly in various directions. WE is the poem; the rest is just kind of transporting the reader from one "we" to the next.
I am grateful for your readings and I like your putting the author's photo, the words and a significant picture into the video. It, along with your reading, gives me the delight of fully be immersed in the poem.
amazing. you read that so well. it must have taken a lot of work so well done. Normally to listen to a poem being read badly just ruins the whole thing, I'm sure if I'd heard THIS read badly i wouldn't have understood it. But, as it is, I can hear everything she is saying in this poem- and I love it.
It is a quite stirring reading. Reminiscent of how acting students are trained in Beckett's long monologues, such as Not I or Catastrophe, the repeated emphasis and clipped ends. It is a method in which poets write, yes? The extreme attention to repetition is on purpose, even just a pronoun can guide the poem so convincingly in various directions. WE is the poem; the rest is just kind of transporting the reader from one "we" to the next.
AAwildeone 2 months ago
I am grateful for your readings and I like your putting the author's photo, the words and a significant picture into the video. It, along with your reading, gives me the delight of fully be immersed in the poem.
bizintin 2 months ago
It does sound like love making...your phrasing takes you into the rhythm of gasps, moans, bodies moving! Excellent!
ettiesgirl 4 months ago
i don't agree with the "we"s. too much liberty in this reading, i have to say. the emphasis was too distracting.
(your "sex without love," however, was absolutely brilliant.)
verjinyuh 1 year ago 3
Extraordinary. . My heart leaps and gives wing in the soaring joy of these words.
bizintin 1 year ago
exquisite....
reliablebow 2 years ago
Wow !
greycom123 2 years ago
That was BEAUTIFULLY rendered. Thank you ever so much!
goodboid 2 years ago
amazing. you read that so well. it must have taken a lot of work so well done. Normally to listen to a poem being read badly just ruins the whole thing, I'm sure if I'd heard THIS read badly i wouldn't have understood it. But, as it is, I can hear everything she is saying in this poem- and I love it.
alanna4858 2 years ago
you read that better than she does! gorgeous.
souljaEXVOTO 2 years ago