actually ur angle sense is good... the storyline and directing fail only... and one more thing.. DONT COPY the short video "leave me" la, that 1 is classic d haha
i think you all should write a post on the director's view of this movie, the real meaning of this short movie. Or am i the only one who couldnt understand the movie well enough?
I agree with the critics that this movie isn't as good as it was hyped up to be&lack of money shouldn't be used as an excuse. However I feel we shud respect tis video that he put out thru hard work & effort. No one starts out being the best. Not even famous Hollywood directors. Sure many think his videos are not that good now, but who's to say that won't change in the future? I make productions on Youtube frequently as well&I feel we should support his passion instead of flaming unnecessarily..
You can always 批评, Please give Constructive Comment... 批评 with 'Hidden Motive' is Bad. From your 批评, We all Know What kind of People You are. Moreover... We all Read Comments like "集合跳海吧你们=去死", Do You think this is 批评 ?
Seriously if you ONLY want to see sweet comments, there you go: THIS SHORT FILM IS SO AWESOME! WE WANT MORE VIDEO LIKE THIS. PLEASE! (means don't you effing make improvement, we like your not-up-to-standard video, thanks)
If you take this as your DREAM (so big deal), accept honest comments too, to make improvements, try not to block ppl that telling the truth to comment.
If your dream is not worth for you to be criticized, please, don't waste your time. You will never success. Full of mercy!
The movie quite touch but im not realy understand the whole story.
"The white tomyam girl" looks so hot and so pretty:) Requesting cp production come out the next short movie with her!! im ur fan and i want to be the white tomyam girl fanclub.
what kind of movie is tht? n sitting side road n seeing the iphone for so long?n seeing the same pic... n y sudenly can be suck in the phone??? no logic at all... i think better go home n slep, don wast ur time there.... fren met up stil can laugh???so fake... honestly this mv is suck!!! especially tht main actress suck!!! EOKJ.
@ShyApril2 at lest i din show the world my english suck..... most of ur comment r suck..... is only few thumb up. haiz... sad. haha... ofcox i nothing been produce by me,cox im not a suck producer.....
Looks like 'Thumb Up' mean a Lot to U. U only Care on How Many 'Thumb Up' your Post received... So Childish. Mmm... also, a Not-So-Good Producer produced some Products and Dare to Share it here, but Not-a-Suck Producer like U, Produce Nothing, but only Give Suck Comment over here and be Self-Happy with a few 'Thumb Up'. Silly & Moron.
if u cant take it the bad comment, better bac home slep!! see u shoot bac every bad comment, u lose dude!! everyone don like ur movie!!! n u make evryone hate the movie even more!!!
Again, I'm Not from CP Production. Lose and Win over here is a Childish Game. Wakeup, Dude... Time to go to School, Time to do something Great & Time to Earn some Money. Don't Waste your Time over here ! So Pity of U, U only know "Suck" and "Back Home Sleep".
In everyone's dream, they wish to tell people their stories.
In everyone's journey in life, they learn different things.
And I bet to all those people commenting here in this video is here because they want to see someone else's dreams, and I believe ya'll would NEVER have the courage to do something like this, EVER.
So when you fail yourself, don't complain about others.
If you want others to know how you feel, don't be rude. =)
black iphone become white iphone? using the same kenari?? accident didnt injure at all? ( have god protect?) and meaningless ending, if gt part 2 pls give some attention to the props that u guys using, dun aboard it, it can affect the whole movie, and hope the face expression and the language using will improve... btw, nice angle shooting...
outtakes:from 0:40 and 6:46 can clearly see that u use the same car and the black iphone suddenly change to white iphone. well, both of the problem is acceptable as this is a low budget short movie... the main problem of the movie is the ending, should end with more sensible way. the story genre, actor's expression and feeling before and after 8:18 does not make any sense and connection... well this is my personal opinion, it depends on how u think. Btw, good try...
ah, i think someone is kinda mis-understanding something here. ok, first of all, i never mention myself as a penangite or from any state in malaysia. so don't judge me (before you fully decode my comments, shame on you). Well, what i was saying is that if your film is so "not-up-to-standard' please don't dream of getting sponsors and all... because those people with bunch of MONEY wouldn't want their money to be wasted on this kind of (i repeat: "not-up-to-standard') film. Got it?
Are You one of the Investor ? If Not, Please Don't say something 'On Behalf' of them. I don't Understand Why a "not up to standard" Film, Can Not ask for Sponsor ? Sponsor can Invest their Money into any kind of Film Project as well as they are Happy to do so, Right ?
oh ya,'Pinpoint' not PING point or Pingpong or whatsoever.
If u're talking on behalf of this production team, you are acting like a monkey begging for bananas after fooling around thinking that u're awesome. But if u're an outsider, i think you are cool. And omg, the story line is not even their original story line, take a look at this Vimeo> Leave Me by Ryan Dunlap, u'll find something so familiar, and so worth to invest. I hope their dreams come true, but not nightmares of course.
I'm Sorry, I'm Not from CP Production. I'm Nobody over here... I just feel that Your Comment to this Production is Over and very Rude. If a 'not up to standard" Film can receive Sponsorship, that mean, their Network is Good. Sponsor are not Paying for the Film but pay for their Passion and as Encouragement. U Jealous ?
With that, of cause, I know What and How to prepare a Film Production Budget and We are talking about 2M or 3M kind of Production. What will be your Film Making Budget ?
槟城人拍槟城片算是贡献啊？
What is this ? U don't feel Proud, If we have a World Famous Film Maker whose from Penang ?
pretty nice video... just some parts need to take care of...
firstly is the story flow... somehow I get to feel what you want to bring out, but the message is not really strong enough... and can't fully understand also...
secondly, the part that the main actor sitting beside the road and having some reenactment. That part is taken longer than it suppose to be. And the main actress disappear without stated clearly where she went... she can be dead, immigrate, disfigurement, handicapped or more
Nice one!it is a good try! appreciated what u guys did!! but I not really understand what the mv trying to express( I unable to link up the title and the content of this mv.)first of all, I thought is esonx taking up the thing in the car and not camelia? and what really happened to camelia?then what is the purpose that ensonx sucked into the iphone4?(btw,this is a good idea)the msg that try to reach audience is not really strong enough,btw thanks cp production bring us such a nice movie!!!
best scene 6:16
Bätz headshot!
--easy going---
BestSensaiEro 3 weeks ago
actually ur angle sense is good... the storyline and directing fail only... and one more thing.. DONT COPY the short video "leave me" la, that 1 is classic d haha
normalevil 1 month ago
i think you all should write a post on the director's view of this movie, the real meaning of this short movie. Or am i the only one who couldnt understand the movie well enough?
wilsonlaimusic 4 months ago
i support penang ppl and penang production
however, the storyline is not good and still a lot need to be improved
some actors' acting, errrrr.............haiz
xiaolunwang 4 months ago
I agree with the critics that this movie isn't as good as it was hyped up to be&lack of money shouldn't be used as an excuse. However I feel we shud respect tis video that he put out thru hard work & effort. No one starts out being the best. Not even famous Hollywood directors. Sure many think his videos are not that good now, but who's to say that won't change in the future? I make productions on Youtube frequently as well&I feel we should support his passion instead of flaming unnecessarily..
kyushen 5 months ago 6
相信在剧里和幕后的一班, 都是带着一份热诚来完成每一个制作. 其实不管一个制作是多么地好与坏, 重要的并不是结果, 而是在拍摄的过程, 大家都尽了自己的一份力, 所以何必在乎别人怎么看呢?
善恶批评对于一个电影工作者, 都应该是推动力, 而不是泄力. 没有一部电影是完美的, 有缺点, 才可以不断改进. 只要大家的目标一致, 相信日后肯定会拍出更有质素的短片.
derayzimaging 5 months ago
演员演技不好还可以当作是喜剧来看
但是
剧情好烂噢...... =______=
不过同是Penang朗，支持!!
blue1060 5 months ago
You can always 批评, Please give Constructive Comment... 批评 with 'Hidden Motive' is Bad. From your 批评, We all Know What kind of People You are. Moreover... We all Read Comments like "集合跳海吧你们=去死", Do You think this is 批评 ?
ShyApril2 6 months ago
post-production stage 啊~音乐是不是全部都是compose的？如果你说是的话，如果没有错的话，那个人被吸进iphone过后的音乐是Batman Begins的soundtrack，你们没credit它，会侵犯版权的，这是under copyright
law。editing的话，有些转scene太突然，连接不到。不应该放进去的scene没有删掉。
拜托不要自我感觉良好。接受批评才能让你下一部短片有进步。
cutewunsim 6 months ago 3
Seriously if you ONLY want to see sweet comments, there you go: THIS SHORT FILM IS SO AWESOME! WE WANT MORE VIDEO LIKE THIS. PLEASE! (means don't you effing make improvement, we like your not-up-to-standard video, thanks)
If you take this as your DREAM (so big deal), accept honest comments too, to make improvements, try not to block ppl that telling the truth to comment.
If your dream is not worth for you to be criticized, please, don't waste your time. You will never success. Full of mercy!
RODDIEtheROYAL 6 months ago 2
@RODDIEtheROYAL
I hope You Understand What is Encouragement Comment and What is Rude Criticise. You can give Honest Comment, but Don't be Rude.
ShyApril2 6 months ago
無頭無尾的... ><"
dadayeap 6 months ago
Please tell me the white tomyam girl's Name??
she look like one of our teen star in my country.
What's her name?? i want to be her fanclub.
kawaii, yuubutsu!!
彼女の名前を知りたい。
(I would like to know her name.)
ぜひあなたとメールを交換したいと思っています。
けてくれ。
Help me, please.
mavintaz 6 months ago
The movie quite touch but im not realy understand the whole story.
"The white tomyam girl" looks so hot and so pretty:) Requesting cp production come out the next short movie with her!! im ur fan and i want to be the white tomyam girl fanclub.
mavintaz 6 months ago
what kind of movie is tht? n sitting side road n seeing the iphone for so long?n seeing the same pic... n y sudenly can be suck in the phone??? no logic at all... i think better go home n slep, don wast ur time there.... fren met up stil can laugh???so fake... honestly this mv is suck!!! especially tht main actress suck!!! EOKJ.
charmmyjclai 6 months ago
@charmmyjclai
Please Go Back to School to Learn your English before Posting here... People will Laugh at you... In the Comments, beside Suck only Suck.
Really, Please... Your English Suck !
You are Not Good as well, Nothing been Produce by you so far ?
ShyApril2 6 months ago
@ShyApril2 如果你要制造很好的短片，你的pre-production stage 要计划到很好。
首先是你的剧本，不能太肤浅。对白要有一定的水准（因为你的video如果要适合各阶层人士的胃口）。故事的flow，act 1, act 2, act 3 没有好好地放。开头，高潮点，低潮点，怎样解决。对了，你的故事发展不是很顺利，让人联想不到为何这个会发生，那个怎样解决了，没下文？带过了？什么都没有交代清楚，让人看了一头雾水。
production stage还可以啦。拍摄手法没什么大问题咯。就是演技有点诠释不到你要带出的意思和感觉。有几幕有点在拖时间。还有，那两个parkour的人和强盗出来做什么？有点多余。而且当你很伤心到沦落坐在街上时，你还有心情穿美美坐在那边？不是应该胡须都忘了刮，几天没冲凉的状态吗？
cutewunsim 6 months ago 5
@ShyApril2 at lest i din show the world my english suck..... most of ur comment r suck..... is only few thumb up. haiz... sad. haha... ofcox i nothing been produce by me,cox im not a suck producer.....
charmmyjclai 6 months ago
@charmmyjclai
Looks like 'Thumb Up' mean a Lot to U. U only Care on How Many 'Thumb Up' your Post received... So Childish. Mmm... also, a Not-So-Good Producer produced some Products and Dare to Share it here, but Not-a-Suck Producer like U, Produce Nothing, but only Give Suck Comment over here and be Self-Happy with a few 'Thumb Up'. Silly & Moron.
ShyApril2 5 months ago
@ShyApril2
u also can bac to school to learn how to produce better movie or bac to bed.....
charmmyjclai 6 months ago
@ShyApril2
if u cant take it the bad comment, better bac home slep!! see u shoot bac every bad comment, u lose dude!! everyone don like ur movie!!! n u make evryone hate the movie even more!!!
charmmyjclai 6 months ago 3
@charmmyjclai
Again, I'm Not from CP Production. Lose and Win over here is a Childish Game. Wakeup, Dude... Time to go to School, Time to do something Great & Time to Earn some Money. Don't Waste your Time over here ! So Pity of U, U only know "Suck" and "Back Home Sleep".
ShyApril2 5 months ago
To The Cast:
艺术 - 不需要理由，继续加油！！只有聪明人看得懂的电影不一定所有人会喜欢 =)
winandwon 6 months ago
In everyone's mind, we have our own stories.
In everyone's dream, they wish to tell people their stories.
In everyone's journey in life, they learn different things.
And I bet to all those people commenting here in this video is here because they want to see someone else's dreams, and I believe ya'll would NEVER have the courage to do something like this, EVER.
So when you fail yourself, don't complain about others.
If you want others to know how you feel, don't be rude. =)
winandwon 6 months ago
-.- the story line is Lame. The ending more Lame.
Fishingseven 6 months ago
black iphone become white iphone? using the same kenari?? accident didnt injure at all? ( have god protect?) and meaningless ending, if gt part 2 pls give some attention to the props that u guys using, dun aboard it, it can affect the whole movie, and hope the face expression and the language using will improve... btw, nice angle shooting...
atafik 6 months ago 2
镜头focus一些部分很ok，就是剧情和对白很随便，剧情很明显是抄的，其实可以花一些心思写些小故事，抄的通常都会弄巧反戳 ，把重新编过的对白搞乱了。
既然有时间拍，不如先构思story board进程中修改到完美为止再拍会比较好。
慢慢加油啦 ．．．．．
yeahlyl 6 months ago
outtakes:from 0:40 and 6:46 can clearly see that u use the same car and the black iphone suddenly change to white iphone. well, both of the problem is acceptable as this is a low budget short movie... the main problem of the movie is the ending, should end with more sensible way. the story genre, actor's expression and feeling before and after 8:18 does not make any sense and connection... well this is my personal opinion, it depends on how u think. Btw, good try...
horatio702 6 months ago
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horatio702 6 months ago
7:43 Tomyam girl你演的最好！！！
其他全是垃圾。。。
kjoojin 6 months ago
口口声声说拍电影要很多钱，需要人家赞助。我是看不到你们这部‘电影’到底到底需要用到多少钱。灯光器材那些能够在利用，也不用花很多钱。但是，看看你们自己的作品，哪一个金主回想抛钱给你们？倒不如去找一些作品比较不错的来投资！
video拍的不好不是钱的问题，大哥。是剧本，对白，故事，不要那么肤浅～～ 这部所谓的电影真的很中学生程度。
多看看别人的电影。不要因为槟城没人拍电影，你们就想当英雄。我相信你们可以进步的，但是，请千万不要自以为做得很好，拜托。。。丢脸。
RONNIEtheROYAL 6 months ago 24
@RONNIEtheROYAL 我超级赞同你的说法 :)
cutewunsim 6 months ago
@cutewunsim 谢谢你的赞同，但可悲的是，这个post的owner 经不起批评，block了我在这里说话的权利～我想，他们根本不想进步～ 没关系，有眼见的人都知道他们的程度到哪里。但是，丢的是槟城人的脸，爽的是他们自己。
RODNIEtheROYAL 6 months ago
@RODNIEtheROYAL
我觉得在这里丢脸的是你吧 =)
要导演想好他的剧本，倒不如你想好要说的话？
winandwon 6 months ago 3
@winandwon
RODDIEtheROYAL 6 months ago
@winandwon
谢谢你的建议，显然你不懂剧情到底是从哪里抄来的，所以我建议你还是多看点影片增加自己的见识，再来这里丢一丢脸 =)
RODDIEtheROYAL 6 months ago
@winandwon
不妨参考一下这个 Vimeo > Leave Me by Ryan Dunlap (2 years ago)
我们知道模仿是学习的开始，但在电影界，模仿就是抄袭，抄袭就是copyright infringement。 保重哦。 =)
想好请律师了吗？
RODDIEtheROYAL 6 months ago 3
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winandwon 6 months ago
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winandwon 6 months ago
@RONNIEtheROYAL
First, What do You know about Movie Filming ?
Do You know anything about Film Investment & Budgeting ? How many Movie Films have You Produced ?
If Not, Please Shut your Big F Mouth Up !!
Second, Comment a Film Making by just Ping Point on Story Line sound very very Childish and 肤浅 !!
Last, I would like to Ask you… As a Penangite, What have you done for Penang so far ?
You are here as Penangite Do Nothing but Talk Rubbish to Criticise a Passionate Man !!
ShyApril2 6 months ago
@ShyApril2
ah, i think someone is kinda mis-understanding something here. ok, first of all, i never mention myself as a penangite or from any state in malaysia. so don't judge me (before you fully decode my comments, shame on you). Well, what i was saying is that if your film is so "not-up-to-standard' please don't dream of getting sponsors and all... because those people with bunch of MONEY wouldn't want their money to be wasted on this kind of (i repeat: "not-up-to-standard') film. Got it?
RODDIEtheROYAL 6 months ago
@RODDIEtheROYAL
Are You one of the Investor ? If Not, Please Don't say something 'On Behalf' of them. I don't Understand Why a "not up to standard" Film, Can Not ask for Sponsor ? Sponsor can Invest their Money into any kind of Film Project as well as they are Happy to do so, Right ?
ShyApril2 6 months ago
@ShyApril2
oh ya,'Pinpoint' not PING point or Pingpong or whatsoever.
If u're talking on behalf of this production team, you are acting like a monkey begging for bananas after fooling around thinking that u're awesome. But if u're an outsider, i think you are cool. And omg, the story line is not even their original story line, take a look at this Vimeo> Leave Me by Ryan Dunlap, u'll find something so familiar, and so worth to invest. I hope their dreams come true, but not nightmares of course.
RODDIEtheROYAL 6 months ago 2
@RODDIEtheROYAL
I'm Sorry, I'm Not from CP Production. I'm Nobody over here... I just feel that Your Comment to this Production is Over and very Rude. If a 'not up to standard" Film can receive Sponsorship, that mean, their Network is Good. Sponsor are not Paying for the Film but pay for their Passion and as Encouragement. U Jealous ?
ShyApril2 6 months ago
@ShyApril2 你自己应该是此短片的导演吧？要不然就是production组里面的其中一个成员吧？拜托，还要开一个别的帐号来这里反击。看看你的语气和骂人的点，听起来你好像真的是亲身经历hor？想问回你你知道什么是电影投资和预算方案吗？不，是应该问你知道什么叫电影制作吗？RM800++这叫倾家荡产啊？你有卖楼卖房卖车吗？你像阿牛吗？而且你的钱会花在哪里？800+不是花在买车吧？相机？iphone啊？油钱啊？还是tomyam面？？！你买几碗哦？
还有，槟城人拍槟城片算是贡献啊？很伟大？你有捐钱帮到槟城的发展吗？就连帮槟城宣传的效果都没达到，反而让我们看到槟城的人经不起批评。有点破坏我对槟城人的印象了~
经不起批评的话，不要上传网络让大众看到~你可能可以自己在自己的小圈子，让那些支持你的人说赞就好了~那么你就不会受外界批评的气。
cutewunsim 6 months ago 4
@cutewunsim
I'm Sorry... I'm not from CP Production.
But, a Film Maker, I own a Production Team.
With that, of cause, I know What and How to prepare a Film Production Budget and We are talking about 2M or 3M kind of Production. What will be your Film Making Budget ?
槟城人拍槟城片算是贡献啊？
What is this ? U don't feel Proud, If we have a World Famous Film Maker whose from Penang ?
Just look at Dato Jimmy Choo, he is from Penang.
ShyApril2 6 months ago
Who is the white tomyam girl? not in credit??
zebra110 6 months ago
shit! iphone again
this time must get iphone 4
zonlee181 6 months ago
Well, I prefer the movie is ended at 2:57 and the title change to "为自己和心爱的人，请绑好安全带"。
momokangx 6 months ago 16
flat -_-a, but nice attempt
kheong87 6 months ago
9.35 Explanet? penang has this place meh? Esplanade i heard before lar
yikifi 6 months ago 2
……看不明白.
ZoeyLzy1222 6 months ago
first few minute is okay , but after the accident ...=='''
VampireKidzz 6 months ago
benana01011 6 months ago
@benana01011
不批评不会进步，是说的很对。。。
可是批评到叫人去死，这还叫批评吗？
而且，身为华人的你们，一篇用华文写的批评文章，写的那么烂，你们还是华人吗？？羞耻！！
ShyApril2 6 months ago
@benana01011
Oh ya... You are Banana (banana 01011), No Wonder... 一篇用华文写的批评文章，写的那么烂.
你身为华人，又身为槟城人，那，你又为华人和槟城作了什么？
你也不好丢我们华人，槟城人的脸好吗？
我也真替你的爸爸，妈妈，爷爷，奶奶，公公，婆婆，家人，朋友，华文老师，感到丢脸倒极点了。
怎么会有这种人生存在这美丽的小岛上。。。而且，还会有人给他Vote Up.
ShyApril2 6 months ago
black iphone become a white iphone ?
evfoo 6 months ago 4
rubbbbb ish,,
MadridCity1989 6 months ago
eat tomyam can be happy?????
MadridCity1989 6 months ago
02.28 fuck lal... nonsense
MadridCity1989 6 months ago
continue... the sitting beside road part is kind of weird... it might be better if he crying in hospital with bandages or reenact in some corner...
in term of videography is pretty cool... angle shot seems nice...
anyway, it's just my opinion... hope it won't offend you...
HuanTheIntelligent 6 months ago 4
pretty nice video... just some parts need to take care of...
firstly is the story flow... somehow I get to feel what you want to bring out, but the message is not really strong enough... and can't fully understand also...
secondly, the part that the main actor sitting beside the road and having some reenactment. That part is taken longer than it suppose to be. And the main actress disappear without stated clearly where she went... she can be dead, immigrate, disfigurement, handicapped or more
HuanTheIntelligent 6 months ago 4
idea from Source Code movie
cwtan1107 6 months ago
@cwtan1107 i prefer from canon mark III >.< fully copy and paste
MrMavenTan 6 months ago
'esplanade'
ShilleNide 6 months ago
is this a production team? or random video making individual?
RONNIEtheROYAL 6 months ago
thumbs up....
stareternity 6 months ago
more video please ^^
SkyKsKing 6 months ago
lol... same white car... cut budget ke?
ModernEarWax 6 months ago 2
vimeo(dot)com/4220803
lyerid 6 months ago 2
u copied the story from some english vimeo vid ....hmmmm
lyerid 6 months ago 2
不错噢~~
xiaobei11 6 months ago
Nice one!it is a good try! appreciated what u guys did!! but I not really understand what the mv trying to express( I unable to link up the title and the content of this mv.)first of all, I thought is esonx taking up the thing in the car and not camelia? and what really happened to camelia?then what is the purpose that ensonx sucked into the iphone4?(btw,this is a good idea)the msg that try to reach audience is not really strong enough,btw thanks cp production bring us such a nice movie!!!
Haur0514 6 months ago
Nice
ngchianchyn 6 months ago
Nice 1 CP..nice!! Hope u will get sponsor ya..i will help u to share it out~~
gurlz918 6 months ago