psh Trixie's a washup, who openly admitted she lied about the ursa major, that point is moot.
Twilight wasn't in "magic" school, she was in a school for extremely gifted pony's, and while yes she would have failed, the sonic rainboom put her into trance.
Trixie does show magic, Twilight does real magic. They're both amazing until you realize one is smoke and mirrors (figuratively of course)
I like your lyrics, your voice isn't all that great, though. I think you shouldn't try so hard to imitate female voices, just use your normal voice so it will be less grating =D
@Lavasharks1 Feel free, but understand that I'm probably not gonna use all of it. I'll likely mix it in with my own lyrics. I'll give you full credit for whatever I do use of yours (or anyone's, for that matter).
I also would like to see more epic rap battles. A PMV is much more work than a scrolling banner, so it's your call, but a PMV would be more satisfying. Ideas:
Celestia vs Discord
Pinkie Pie vs The Joker
Applejack vs Rainbow Dash
Rarity vs Beyonce
I think Twlight won this one. After all, Trixie did indeed epic fail vs an Ursa minor and then flee Ponyville.
I agree, PMVs would be way better. Also, if you need help with lyrics for some of them I'd be glad to help. Hell, I've already written all the lyrics for Rainbow Dash vs. Applejack.
Im Switching up my Style like when discord came into the series, completly unknown with a multitude of trixies, your character is weakly defined youd think the writers would have at least kept bookworm subtlety in mind. Im powerful, and great, and well performed, lest you know. ive battled more majors than one could ever hope for im positive your faking it and ive never ran before and ill be back to make you meet your maker! ~ Trixie sung to Shakespeares second stanza for ERB 12
Meh. Well written, but you sound nothing like Twilight. Or Trixie for that matter. Just get a voiceover program, that way, you can change your voice into anything from Darth Vader, to Discord. (Just NO REBECCA BLACK.)
Scrolling lyrics were illegible near the end. Maybe static lyrics would work better?
Like near the end when Trixie gets faster, you could have a lyric pop up in the center and then another underneath it before changing to the next line. That way they wouldn't just appear for a millisecond either.
Not as cool as I hoped it would be... But I think if you edited your voice a bit or got some Twilight/Trixie impersonators, it would be THE BEST THING EVER.
I'm the director of the voice acting team of the MLP fangame "Fiends from Dream Valley" and I'd like to try recording my own version of this. Can you post the lyrics in the description, please?
Maybe you should have two people rapping, not just yourself. Assuming your inspiration was the Epic Rap Battles of History, Nicepeter couldn't do them by himself. Get yourself an EpicLloyd to help you out. Or at the very least try to make the two voices sound more different. Sorry for the constructive criticism, I did think it was fun, just not very professional. (By the way, I can do a hell of an Angel bunny impression if need be. If you turn off your speakers, you can probably hear it. :D )
Next should be Gilda vs. Pinkie Pie. That feathered bitch is going down.
Also, I think this has a lot of potential but you just have to slow down. The first two parts were ok, but each of their second rhymes were just too fast to really keep up with. Great job and keep up the good work! If you take some of the feedback here to heart, you'll do really well!
I want the beat tell me the name of that song!!
koolaidman148 1 week ago
would have been better if you didn't try to crack your voice everyline if you sung normal i think it would have been epic
grayfox311 1 month ago
Rainbowdash vs. Applejack
PCking001 1 month ago
psh Trixie's a washup, who openly admitted she lied about the ursa major, that point is moot.
Twilight wasn't in "magic" school, she was in a school for extremely gifted pony's, and while yes she would have failed, the sonic rainboom put her into trance.
Trixie does show magic, Twilight does real magic. They're both amazing until you realize one is smoke and mirrors (figuratively of course)
Twilight > Trixie
Was there ever any doubt?
LordofCruxis 1 month ago
*Sees who's going to be next in description.*
Please be gentle.
DragoSonicMile 1 month ago
Why does this seem like I heard the lyrics before?
As if it were from comments (Derpy VS Major.)
XxNeoPrincexX 2 months ago
The forth wall, where did it go?
RadekBirdFan 2 months ago
Doctor whooves vs nightmare moon
DelfinoDude 2 months ago
trixe won but twilight didn't have a chance
jokermaniacJS 2 months ago
now do Rainbow Dash VS. Zecora
DXIndustriesInc 2 months ago
Discord VS Celestia is a must have.
Also, who knows? Maybe their VAs might be willing to, for lulz? Who knows?
BahamutXER 2 months ago 3
discord vs celestia would be awesome
texastomcat86 2 months ago
trixie wins
iaml3642494 2 months ago
I like your lyrics, your voice isn't all that great, though. I think you shouldn't try so hard to imitate female voices, just use your normal voice so it will be less grating =D
Archimonde259 3 months ago
this is seriously one of the greatest things i have ever heard in my entire life
Giovannino357 3 months ago
Trixie won....that's not saying much though.....
WolffeGaming 3 months ago
Twilight Won, But Trixie put up a good fight.
beastmiester 4 months ago
Can we submit our own raps for you to use?
Lavasharks1 4 months ago
@Lavasharks1 Feel free, but understand that I'm probably not gonna use all of it. I'll likely mix it in with my own lyrics. I'll give you full credit for whatever I do use of yours (or anyone's, for that matter).
GigaNerd17 4 months ago
I also would like to see more epic rap battles. A PMV is much more work than a scrolling banner, so it's your call, but a PMV would be more satisfying. Ideas:
Celestia vs Discord
Pinkie Pie vs The Joker
Applejack vs Rainbow Dash
Rarity vs Beyonce
I think Twlight won this one. After all, Trixie did indeed epic fail vs an Ursa minor and then flee Ponyville.
*brohoof*
MrZork1974 4 months ago 2
whats tht remix of simple and clean in the background its either simple and clean or passion either way what is it called
ZJLXN 4 months ago
Actually, Twilight has the same mark as Photo Finish. It's not one of a kind
Isoscelescube 4 months ago
I agree, PMVs would be way better. Also, if you need help with lyrics for some of them I'd be glad to help. Hell, I've already written all the lyrics for Rainbow Dash vs. Applejack.
neonal18 4 months ago
uh.... Kingdom Hearts?! This video just got almost 20% cooler
rapto5050 4 months ago
PINKIE PIE vs. DISCORD
Lovingeachother 4 months ago 5
Discord v.s. Q..........
Aang9482 5 months ago
Discord v.s. Q..........
Aang9482 5 months ago
THAT WAS AMAZING!!!
Jazmillenium 5 months ago
And then that one song from that one game that was playing in the background was stuck in my head for the next week and a half.
Flaskgarg 5 months ago
Wait, did Trixie just imply that Twilight is a pedophile?
sterlingdragon123 5 months ago
Rocky v.s. Tom
Yes it will be ridiculous.
sterlingdragon123 5 months ago 8
Twilight!
ArchaicWarlock777 5 months ago
DERPY VS PINKIE! (cupcakes and muffins)
Or Dash vs Pinkie. (because yknow, cupcakes?)
hironada 5 months ago 4
Im Switching up my Style like when discord came into the series, completly unknown with a multitude of trixies, your character is weakly defined youd think the writers would have at least kept bookworm subtlety in mind. Im powerful, and great, and well performed, lest you know. ive battled more majors than one could ever hope for im positive your faking it and ive never ran before and ill be back to make you meet your maker! ~ Trixie sung to Shakespeares second stanza for ERB 12
rocker818181 5 months ago 4
We need a PMV this.... NOAW!!!
BrandonJoesFilms 5 months ago
trixie win's hooves down. sparkle you got served. now i believe the bet was you now ow trixie you plot bitch
holloways99 5 months ago
Steven Magnet against DIscord. Shits gonna go down.
pbandtjelle 5 months ago 2
HOLY SHIT YES I LOVE THE EPIC RAP BATTLES OF HISTORY
frubban 5 months ago
APPLEJACK & RAINBOW DASH BATTLE!
Wereshaman 5 months ago
Ponies are infecting everyone on YT. I LOVE IT
TheMrowlPie 5 months ago
I want a Higher quality vocal recording of this.
aragrist 5 months ago
I think celestia vs. Luna would be pretty cool!
or nightmare moon vs. Discord.
And... DEFINATELY twilight
13thdoc 5 months ago
Meh. Well written, but you sound nothing like Twilight. Or Trixie for that matter. Just get a voiceover program, that way, you can change your voice into anything from Darth Vader, to Discord. (Just NO REBECCA BLACK.)
TheJellyroll101 5 months ago
Calm down you two, there plenty of me to go around.
CaptainHalodude 5 months ago
Twilight > trixie.
Applejack Vs Rainbow Dash
Also requesting standing subs rather than scrolling ones.
Unformed8 5 months ago
Scrolling lyrics were illegible near the end. Maybe static lyrics would work better?
Like near the end when Trixie gets faster, you could have a lyric pop up in the center and then another underneath it before changing to the next line. That way they wouldn't just appear for a millisecond either.
DubbleM900 5 months ago
Twilight Sparkle is the clear winner.
Spheremaster0001 5 months ago
the great and powerful trixie won off course
HOLIMOUNT 5 months ago
As much as I'd like to say Trixie won because Trixie is Trixie.
It's gonna be Trixie but with a reason this time. Them last verse was epic.
Mgat1452 5 months ago
Trixie won.
signer0001 5 months ago
I've actually written one of these, shame I don't have sound equiptment :(
Apocalypsedetonator 5 months ago
Luna vs Celestia
Rainbow Dash vs. Applejack
Derpy vs. Dr Whooves
Dragonas77 5 months ago
The voices, they burn. Lyrics are awesome.
Paradox042 5 months ago
Now do a battle between Discord and Zecora :D
r0ninKai 5 months ago
Spike Vs the owl
make it happen
bdkbmd 5 months ago
*Facehoof*
BuggedPc 5 months ago
Twilight won. Hooves down.
SilvaSteve2011 5 months ago
Pinkie Pie vs Pinkamina Diane Pie
wtftacooo 5 months ago
I wanna see a troll battle, between Celestia and Discord
AceTimothy0421 5 months ago
Not as cool as I hoped it would be... But I think if you edited your voice a bit or got some Twilight/Trixie impersonators, it would be THE BEST THING EVER.
DeclanKun 5 months ago
Fluttershy vs Discord! I'd like to see a little Flutterrage in that oversized phallic symbols face ^_^
RaphaelRavenwing 5 months ago
Is there some way you can post the lyrics on the description? Makes me want to sing in Twilight or Trixie voice now..
TrickDanceParadise 5 months ago
trixie won hooves down
pattap3 5 months ago 2
ok...
MLPFiM 5 months ago
love the lyrics, but I feel like it would be awesome if there was more people working on it, (voices, graphics) but overall love it
crayon151 5 months ago
I'm the director of the voice acting team of the MLP fangame "Fiends from Dream Valley" and I'd like to try recording my own version of this. Can you post the lyrics in the description, please?
Yamino 5 months ago 20
@Yamino HOLY SH** SURE! :D
GigaNerd17 5 months ago 16
My eyes started hurting while I was reading those words. I got all of them, but, just barely.
PlasticoBro 5 months ago
Maybe you should have two people rapping, not just yourself. Assuming your inspiration was the Epic Rap Battles of History, Nicepeter couldn't do them by himself. Get yourself an EpicLloyd to help you out. Or at the very least try to make the two voices sound more different. Sorry for the constructive criticism, I did think it was fun, just not very professional. (By the way, I can do a hell of an Angel bunny impression if need be. If you turn off your speakers, you can probably hear it. :D )
kyleangus 5 months ago 3
Twilight
FSinWCR 5 months ago
That was a LOT better then I thought it was going to be. Brohoof sir! *monocle adjustment*
BilkTheDestoryer 5 months ago
Doctor Whoofs vs DISCORD
RandyRacoon1 5 months ago
I lol'd at the awesomness xD
QueenCynder 5 months ago
singing just a tad TO FAST!!! nice lyrics though
AmericaAbridged 5 months ago
Twilight wins with a score of 275,366!
Trixie loses woth a score of 23!
I vote AJ and Dashie next. Totally.
redsalemence222 5 months ago
Trixie wins.
It's a universal constant, nothing anyone can do about it.
Coruptin 5 months ago 2
TWILIGHT WINS.
FLAWLESS VICTORY.
FATALITY!
NotAGoodUsername360 5 months ago
YES.
CountryKid1010 5 months ago
Is is possible to pull a muscle in your eye? Because I think I just did.
BrickishStudios 5 months ago
obviously twilight won she didn't have to resort to sex jokes. next, gotta be RD and AJ
qwert13y 5 months ago
where can i get that background pic cause its just so awsome!
Mechaze3 5 months ago
That was awesome.
Oldenheimer1913 5 months ago
I liked Trixie's more personally and i gotta say Applejack and Rainbow Dash should be next!
chiyoxosakafan 5 months ago
In celebration of season 2, I suggest Discord vs. Zecora. She'd probably send him packing with her rhymes.
That failing, Discord vs. Pinkie would probably be hilarious. Any rap involving Pinkie would be.
thecatoninetales 5 months ago
I think Trixie won this one...
Also, you need to get someone else to voice one of the characters...Right now it sounds like you're battling yourself.
LudgeONRS 5 months ago
Dat scrolling text at the latter half of the rap... My eyes... Christ, man...
Hirosashii 5 months ago
Twilight wins.
AJ vs Rarity, Spike vs Owlowiscious, or Hoity Toity vs Photo Finish, are my votes for next.
Rekiara 5 months ago
the words they were so fast *collapses*
blackwolf5002 5 months ago
Damn, if that thing about the stars is true, Trixie sure gets around.
xSh0ckWaVe 5 months ago
Go through the Mane six first I'd say, but I'd love to see Sweetie Belle versus Scootaloo. Or a 1v1v1 CMC rap battle.
TheSweetestBelle 5 months ago
Trying to read the lyrics gave me cancer
ToxicPunkRules 5 months ago
the fast bit was well executed, but with a scroll bar it didnt work
I'd go for lyrics appearing rather than scrolling
And I hope this goes well :) You clearly have talent
OneAndForAll 5 months ago
I liked it, the bar was hard as hell to read.
GaryMF0ak 5 months ago
Twilight Sparkle
joverby1 5 months ago
"And unlike you, I don't have erectile dysfunction"
Futatrixie? e_o
iBringDaLULZ 5 months ago
I hate to admit it, but Trixie won that one. :/
Next should be Gilda vs. Pinkie Pie. That feathered bitch is going down.
Also, I think this has a lot of potential but you just have to slow down. The first two parts were ok, but each of their second rhymes were just too fast to really keep up with. Great job and keep up the good work! If you take some of the feedback here to heart, you'll do really well!
Doombah 5 months ago
SLOW IT
THE FUCK
DOWN
Lynk3 5 months ago
Discord vs. Trollestia!
leeshajoi 5 months ago
I was going to say Twilight but Trixie brought it back in the end. I just can't choose! DX
DarkTailsTheFox 5 months ago
Even though Twilight is the best pony, I think Trixie won that battle...
I38VWI 5 months ago
dash v gilda? yes please.
calamusdash 5 months ago
We so need to get the voice actors to do these.
FoobyZeeky 5 months ago
pinkie pie vs fluttershy?
My body is not ready.
Fatcat275 5 months ago
I say Twilight won. Also applejack vs. rainbowdash
samus011 5 months ago
When I read the title, I was like o_o. When I watched the video, I was like XD
MrAmerica1995 5 months ago
Pinkie Pie vs. Big Mac
MasterPeanut94 5 months ago
I think you should start making PMV's instead of that shitty bar and awesome image.
MinusMan561 5 months ago 41
@MinusMan561 Oh you mean music videos WITH the rap battles... Yeah, that would be awesome!
jongyon7192p 5 months ago
I vote Twilight
WolfTwili 5 months ago
lol
nothing about being named after "twilight"?
still, i fly a purple flag
dwreanchinotan 5 months ago
Think GPT won... but not sure XD
Pinkie Pie vs Fluttershy next? Yay~
RaraoskrNoKishii 5 months ago
I hate to say it, Twilight, but.....YO JUST GOT PWNED!!!
Shadowfan206 5 months ago
Nicely done brony!
I say Twilight won, her ryhmes and insults were much better than Trixie's.
And I can't wait to see Pinkie vs. Fluttershy!
Mray901 5 months ago
Twilight won. I wanna see Applejack & Rainbow Dash next!
lowproductions92 5 months ago 72