[Short Story] My Untold Love

[mrscookiestar]

you LOVE ME CUZ I WATCHED IT ALL :DD

[saiyong19]

i so so so sorry?

broken english

[KarolinaKetaBunny]

And he stood there and watched as she got stabbed one at a time? .__.

[XxcrystalestradaxX]

I'm not lame I'm me!! xD lol I LOVE YOU TOOOOO!! :) and i'm a new subscriber!! this was cheesy but who doesn't love cheese?? :D

[19tonho]

lol ugly plastic girls NICE VID

[Bunnyslipperz16]

Me: oo looks like a good video...

AFTER VIDEO

Me: o__o........ i need to pwn somthing..

-off to maple-

[Bunnyslipperz16]

omg MINE LOOPED

[8monica101]

Haha ILY2<3

[609lani]

i liked the story but sorry lilmissangelaXD i culdve added som parts 2 make it a lil better

[emmybug1999]

im not lame lml xP

[MrFreshcola10]

UGH. now i have to find iluvsugarz comment ):<

[JulietteBites]

Who the fuck names their child,

Felisha?

[HuskyLover811]

1:09

[AbsolutelyToxic]

Okay... You told a guy i didnt really like that i was cheating on him, so I'll kill you! Bit overboard, eh?

[xXMelodyx3luv]

Let Me Tell You About My Cousin's Love...): It's Very Sad. MUCH MORE SAD THAN MY STORY! HERE I GO: One Day, My Cousin Lisa Found A Cute Guy Sitting Alone Looking Lonely So She Asked Him If She Could Join. He Looked Up And Smiled Sadly. She Asked Why He Was Sad...He Hugged Her Like A Love Hug. She Blushed. Then He Said That He Lost His Gf. When She Heard That, She Asked If They Could Be Friends. They Were Forever! Even Started Dating! :D But She Had Heart Attacks All Of A Sudden.You Are Pro! :)

[aa20128]

and whats the song at 04:50?

[kpoplover300]

@aa20128 the song is called ' bella's lullaby'. <3

[aa20128]

what song is played at 1:09? like starting there?

[Lilsmilyboi]

@aa20128 speranzaria

[xXMelodyx3luv]

I Was Just Like You. I Had A Best Friend Like You. His Name Was Ryan. He Met A Girl That WAS Prettier Than ME! I Felt So Sad. I Thought Of Him Everyday. Then When They Only Dated for 3 Days, The Girl Cheated And Did Porn With The Cute Guy I Like A Little. He Started Flirting On Me And Then The Girl Tried To Do Porn Stuff With Ryan But Refused. He Took Me And Declaired His Love. Your Love With That Guy Was Kinda Alike My Love With Ryan. But He Died..Thanks For The Good Memories. 5/5! :')

[MissEmoTeddybear]

Awww I hate Vanessa shes a fucker..... :(

[PinkRose12371]

wtf y did Jeff just stand there and watch her get hit!?

[Amylovesfood]

@PinkRose12371 I know right,i was just like WTF?!

[xXMelodyx3luv]

@PinkRose12371 he scared -_-

[HiddenMelodyy]

oh god im crying... LOL ):

[cheesefriesification]

dude that was awesome, and the funny thing is that my name is anna :D but i dont know anyone named jeff :(

[fantageprincess123]

This isn't a short story O.O" Its like 12 mins XD And its suppost to be 2-3 mins if its short xP (Not being mean I loved it XD)

~Kyleigh.J.

[L4ughMyButt0ff]

i like her hair at the end

[xxVicky143]

9:48

Video: "are you still watching this?"

me: my answer is yes .

10:19

Video: "haha ily if you watched it all"

me: thanks .

[emilycaine555]

not mean i wish people under stand T-T i am nice not mean but apulytley great sowie for telling everyone this little story of me T-T

[emilycaine555]

great story i just hate the fact of u puting yourself down p.s the rest is great. tehe u sould not put yourself down. i think u don great by the way i'm emily violet gina caine and im 10 but in a fuw day i will be 11 im having a disco / pool party tehe at school am the tough girl that everyone be nice to but everyone jut think i'm mean cous i'm tough but it not true. i may have hirt a fuw people but when i was weak thay ued to bash me and i stick up for people who don't have friends >-< i'm nice

[purplelolip0p]

Nice story ^^!

[RandomMatrix1]

(at the end) awwww... yay ... pokerface

[HuskyLover811]

1:09

[chipmunkchipmunk1]

OMFG UR CHARACTER LOOK LIKE MINE! XD <3 it XD make more

[skeletongirl239]

does all these short stories end up with someone in the hospital?

[littlekitttie1412]

this is like my 9th time watching it

[sashakitty81]

awesome story!

[ixMelissax]

Aw, I have a BFF name is Anna...

[iTzJWalker]

If the Jeff was behind Anna & saw Vanessa was going to kill her..

Y didn't Jeff came up & stop it? -w- that is the only worst part.

[TheAlinah700]

fianlly a happy ending :)

[eptgen]

lilmissangelaXD is so modest

[Mrtuonglai]

I hate how the leader of the mean girls are sort of pretty but the other girls are always ugly.

[HolyWhiteAngel0798]

I have a question??? WHAT IS LOVE???!!!!! ^ ^

[gottaluvmusic99]

haa, yes vanessa should of died........ this is a great story i don't know why u think its badd???

[4everpandaz]

y did he just stand there and watch them stab her o.o

[HahaLaffyTaffyX]

I'm with u candii lol :D

[Hippomonsquirrelquip]

Seems a little unbelievable... You should've made vannessa hire a hit man ;D

[bakugan0912]

LOl a little grammer but its cool :)

[Eynarah]

i watch it till the very end where you said "HAHA ily if you watched it all! " xDDD

[WiteProductions]

My thought as I saw vanessa and her friends trying to hurt Anna : DIE VANESSA YOU CRAZY!

[luigipou]

vanessa is a mothefucker

[AlysonMusicXD]

awww



[2010nema]

ur lame >:O rawr!!!!

[bookaky]

finally one that doesnt have any body dieing. if you want another happy ending story type in the search box love always last short story

[JumpForRockx]

happy ending ^.^



[ShadowSilverX]

lol thats a funny name GiGi

[TheNewJul]

the first part explains my life....i love this guy but he has a gf. theyve been going out for so long now and he seems so happy. but...it doesnt seem like she loves him at all. the only difference this[the beginning] has to MY story is tht my crush's gf isnt cheating on him [i hope] and when he told me he was going out with her....i cried.

[xMyleeful]

i subbed luvv yaaa<3333333333

[cutekitten741]

luv it!!! =3

[asafor6]

bitch vannesa

[iFunnySox]

whatever happened to bros before hoes or something lol.

[ShinigamiXMS]

lol i watched it all, and ily u too :P <3

[smilez4everyone]

:O why u tell us to go to 1:09? i love the part wen did all those funny scenes :DD dont block it T^T

[MakeItMine101]

Whats the songs?? Can yew comment on me!!?? Pwease i've been asking it to alot of people but They dont answer :( Pwease comment on that to mee ^_^

[ShinigamiXMS]

@MakeItMine101 they're all up there in the descriptions 0.0

[cartoongirl64]

Is this maplestory?

[sakuragurl9]

ur warned spell wrong u speel worn o.o''

[HuskyLover811]

I am writing a love story....... kinda like this one but its different. I am looking for cool ideas, to help my story be really unpredictable and exciting. Please respond!

[iGiraffeXD]

yup



[lilyoojii0730]

i watched it till the end cuz iluv lady gaga

[Krisjoy122299]

LOL IF THE ENDING WAS LIKE THIS:

Anna, We know each other since preschool. You are very special to me. I want to say this: Anna, will you ma- *Vanessa walks in* YOU BITCH! *Stabbs Anna*

Not relli funny, but if that was the ending i'd be all like "WTF" or "LOOOL" >-<

[xXxAngelxDemonxXx]

Jeff walks so damn slow. Lol. But i love this story XD

[UberGlossy]

Fuck Jeff, dint do anything when he saw what happen when Anna got attacked by the bitch.

[itzMiserableYou]

@UberGlossy At least he brought her to the hospital instead of crying beside her.

[C0OKl3Z]

hw'd you make the annotations?

[C0OKl3Z]

hw'd you make the annotions?

[mwex0]

"jeff, why are you so blind"... its casue you never told him D:< duh.

[MsPlaidz]

@9:28 I only stayed tuned for da music :]

[kohhuiyu]

omg jeff could have jump up of his hiding place n save anna, or anna could run away!

[DearCupids]

That tune is so famous.. :]

Brings back good memories.

OT: i thought it was pretty decent.

[TeeonKneeFan]

my name is Anna and i had a experience just like their was a guy i liked secretly and he was going out with a girl that was using him for his popularity and she hit me and told me to stay away from him but i did not and he was my boyfriend

[TheMMV4life]

You know what makes me angry? He didn't even help her when the girls were cutting her, like WDF don't you want to help her?! xP

[TeeonKneeFan]

@TheMMV4life i know if i were him i would barg in and help Anna, and brake up with vanessa!

[iluvsugarz]

o.O why didnt Anna run? she just stood there so she culd get cut? lmfao..

[rainbowedangels]

@iluvsugarz I don't find that find that funny >:(

[ChangShuMei1]

@iluvsugarz Anna Is Just Being Stupid 8)

[bfhdude]

wats the song at 1:10

[gimmeurcookiez]

@bfhdude I think its Speranzia lol I prob spelled it wrong D:

[xcl0udwingZ]

stupid vannesa :P

[fizzlebrizzle33]

in 01:24 it says be been not we've/we been

[xXrockstar499Xx]

yay happy ending THAT MEAN VANESSA yay for anna

[paaaatticakes]

jeff saw everything and didnt do anything about it..

[JamieMS1000]

AWESOME :D

[maxim2465]

i wish vannesa died THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN SO AWESOME WHOS WITH ME HUH!!! LOL that would have been soo cool if she died tho RIGHT

[annabel2400]

im annabel and i used to be with a guy named jeffery o-o coincidence :O

[XzacharyTendoX]

@annabel2400 Coincidence? i think not.

[Candiil3]

Video without someone dieing :D YAYAY (:

Well maybe , if Vanessa died, itd be okay(;

[Mrtuonglai]

@Candiil3 You know what? You'd be such a bitch if vanessa did......NOT DIEEEEE

[shinyabraham1]

Awww that sad face is soooo cute couldn't help it :D

[chuayx5]

Jeff:you are the bestest friend anyone could ever have and i'm the wrost for letting you get hurt

Jeff:i so so so sorry

Anna:its okay

Jeff:no its not

Jeff:wait who said that?

Anna:i did

LOL

funny WHOS WITH ME??

[iLikeoreo01]

@chuayx5 LOL. :D

[StarfireBlackRose]

@chuayx5 lol yeah it was funny

[msiPSCxP]

:o i watched the entire video.

[ZoeLovejoy]

please dont do stupid introductions. i just want 2 see the dang video.

[iRJellow]

Why does...Vanessa always have to be like the "bad" girl. o_o -my name is Vanessa- SCREW IT D:<

Good job btw, no one dies ^-^

[doyoulikepenguins]

3:36 "i though you love him" xD 

[Kayessify]

Lol i kinda expected anna to have scars left on her face, and jeff telling her she's still beautiful or something liike that instead.

[buggi1999]

Venassa pisses me off when my webcam works again im gunna make a pic of Jeff and Anna beating her up

[XMapleG33K]

.. I'm not lame I was just waiting for the CREDITS :'(

[SuperKimxD]

-subs-

[thecomputerdork02]

i wanna see a noobs vid

[ilyCandyCanes]

you know what i learnt. When you tell someone is cheating on you...All ways bring a weapon wit you...

[o0BlueMagixo0]

*finds vanessa* *beats her up* im done with this girl.

[buggi1999]

*grbs shot gun* *goes to vennassa* Time to die bicth *shoots* that felt good :3

[thecomputerdork02]

@buggi1999 im with ya! lol i wanna killllllll her!

[buggi1999]

@thecomputerdork02 IKRRR

[thecomputerdork02]

@buggi1999 YEAHHHHHHH I WANNA BLOW HER BRAINS OUT...OH NO I WANNA BEAT HER TO DEATH!

AND SAY "DIE VENNASSA DIE!" THEY GO BUT A BAT FROM TARGET AND A RABBID BUNNEH AND BEAT HER WITH A BAT WHILE THE BUNNEH IS EATING HER FACE SLOWLY TURNIN HER IN TO A ZOMBIE THEN I COULD KILL HER AGAIN THE SAME WAY!

[buggi1999]

@thecomputerdork02 LOL

[Starrkinnel]

:[[[! I FEEL REALLY SAD!! BUT WHT HAPPEND TO THE GIRLS THAT DIID THAT? :///

[Starrkinnel]

:[[[! I FEEL REALLY SAD!!

[TTNiuNiu]

De fite wasss sooo funny lol. "Get 'er" taking turns? LOL

[DaJoshDude]

Jeff came to the park fast o.o

[JazzOnWonderKing]

at 7:00 im like awww damn it. in every love story some1 dies! buuut i guess not. GOOD JOB. =]

[KateFantasizes]

dam u and ur sad music i nearly cried xD

[iLuhvFood]

during 6:16, i would have been like "phuk this" and phuking take a gun out and shoot them. >:D

[MisturTVBunny]

Lol so weird cuz my name is vannessa , but with one 'n'. Anyways, This is awesome and a story with no death ! :D

[XxRedCamelliaxX]

Hm... what kind of boy would just eavesdrop and watch Anna getting cut by some ganged-up girls. O u O Jeff would! :D

[lovergirl12367]

:3 aww This is Every girl's Fairytale :3

[KeifaCrystal]

so umm already sub you so plz sub me back .btw this vid is touching

[imSariseria]

LOL I kept watching in the end cuz I love Lady Gaga D:< gosh.

[shen10589]

so totally nice story thank,

[ChocoChipsFan]

SONG IN THE BEGGINING? D: tell me cuz i subbed :) u also made a newb very happy here lol

[mapleZ5]

The characters are moonwalking half the time xD

[1123animelover]

such a nice story :3

[MsDarkfoot]

omg im literly crying such an AWESOME STORY

[irugaejudia]

Short Story of 10 minutes. LOLOLOL

[allstarweekend123456]

and they all lived happily eva after sorry, i just had 2 say tht!!!

[lovemumndad]

where the heck are the credits?

[lovemumndad]

where t the heck are the credits?

[phyphy2207]

OMG VANNANASA  HAS A GANG OF BAD GIRLS THATS HORRIBLE IF I WERE anna i would PUNCH VANNANASA and walk away!!

[hvinh2204]

I LOVE THIS STORY!MY FAVE PART IS THE ENDIN!

[Axiss360]

you scared me at the beggining :'(

[Cellopianist]

Such a lovely ending <3

[Misamiyukoyakuro]

no all of us do wanna c it ;) love ya noobs~! cuz im a noob at everything too :3

[nkaujhmoobhaam]

Yeah ! Love the ending =D

[kena266177]

VANESSA IS A WHORE!

SO IS HER MAN-STRESS!!

F THEM BOTH!

[fanny628628]

Actually The Vid Made Me Sub To Ya So Yh F3 And If You Were A Nub ..... THEN WHAT WOULD THAT MAKE ME???????? A NUBER OR NUBEST????!!!!!! In tha end you're awesome :D

[xEmagination]

Eheheh, I watched til' the end ;) xDDD

[Sydney1212bunny]

what font did you used

[Happy2Walker]

Finally , NO DEATH love story!

[nickyash1]

@Happy2Walker IKRR :DD ITS GREAT AINT IT

[DiaryChu]

I AGREE

[lily5901]

this is one of the first i saw with no death

[23meara]

@Happy2Walker i agree



[ChangShuMei1]

anna can't she run??? cannot run or too fat to run?

[April12me]

stupid vannesa -.- lying like pfttt only ! no brain . then , when breakup wit jeff,wanna kill anna -.- WTH ?

[XzacharyTendoX]

@6:42 When vannesa tried to stab anna

It looked like the scar was on vannesa :3

[EsteeVevo]

@XzacharyTendoX It was a scar

[ebelphanpy]

@XzacharyTendoX it really look like it :D on 06:42 the scar WAS on vannesa's face :P

[raze359]

i wonder.. jeff saw the whole scene of anna getting hurt.. why didnt he go up and help?

maybe letting him noe some martial art or smth?

[XxFinnishChick101xX]

I LOVE YOUR SENSE OF HUMOR!!!

[samiball1000]

.... uhm ... one question.... how did that uhm venessa person get to that other place faster that that uhm... jeff person o.o

[TsukiiNyaa]

yay!~ i ♥ the river that flows in you and that matches so much with the story :DD

[TrakLyriiks]

Why can't Jeff say that to a mann friend and not a chick ? HISSSSSS.

[PotatoHugs]

I would run to my house , get a bigger knife and chop em' all . x3

[emceryy]

first video without dying :o

Love it <3

[happyfan121]

I'M LAME! <333!

[littledevious]

yup no dyin so i love it

[firekevin456789123]

whats the backgroudn music DX i want that so much the one after pokeface

[iRJellow]

My name's Vanessa...But I'm nothing like her D: honestly</3 I are more like Anna.. -cough-

[mymojoismoney]

i really like the songs u used (: especially the bellas lullaby yiruma remix

[OhhEmmGeeItsStacey]

its not short u kno -.-