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  • One of my fave stories but Joeryll must be! I'm so sad!

  • great story.....anyone know what song this is by chance?

  • kill me. seriously. i don't get it. i really don't. -- im crying & my heart is like tearing to shreads. thanks a lot. your a great writer, but seriously, m life is like over. ):

  • joe is soo sweet(:

  • i don`t want kevin and sheryll to be together! :((

    JOE AND SHERYLL PLEASE!

  • noooo :( i want sheryll to be with joeee :'(

    great series , love them ;D !

  • damnit !

    i didnt want kevin & sheryll to get together.

    i hope she gets back with joe.

    ughh !

    your series is amazing, btw.

  • OMG K CONFUSED!! WHEN WERE JOE AND SHERYLL APART?!?!!? omg I CANT BELIEVE NOW KEVINA ND SHERRYLL AGAIN?!! oh wow. DRAMA!! I LOVE IT!! YOUR AWESOME!

  • ok i luv all of them but really im devistaed tht sheryll went with kevin!! poor joe

  • Ha ha ha ha

  • i wanted joe to go crazy

  • NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

    y cant joe and sheryll be together

    uh i hate kevin

    but not in real life

  • NICK: At least I know one thing in life right now that won't change.

    SARAH: What's that?

    [Nick bent down to touch his lips to Sarah's]

    FRANKIE: Hey. What about me?

    [Frankie appeared right next to Sarah]

    SARAH: [Laughing] You can have a kiss too.

    [She bent down and placed a kiss on his cheek]

    NICK: Let's go get some ice cream and a girlfriend for Frankie

    awhh. frankies little crush just never seems to get old with me. haha. "]

  • NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IM MAD. MAD MADM ADM D. UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOO no nono. see this story just kinda go f***** up because ugh NOOO. I WANT JOE WITH SHERYLLLL!!!. ahh man.

  • HOLY CRAP THIS CHAPTER FRICAN SUCKED

    JOE AND SHERYLL!!

    not kevin...eww

  • ur a jerk and kev is awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee­e fake fan

  • yeahhhh right kevin should not be going out with sheryll anyway shes too young but i do lovee the series and im not a fake fan im just not a Fan of Kevin...i love nick and joe:)

  • ok learn the def. a real an luvs all 4 jonasess equally... which u dont... sooo... figure it out

  • and im not the only one who doesnt think kevin should go with sheryll and i dont hate kevin, i just like joe and nikc better and fyi frankie might be a jonas brother but hes not in the band "jonas brohters" so yeah thats the def.!

  • oh my snap. i can't believe joe let her go with kevin. i mean i know he just wants her to be happy. but i mean come on! they are a great couple (joe and sheryll). this blows...

    but i love the story ^_^. even though i cried with joe. before joe was crying i was already crying. it's so so sad. i hope they end up together.

    sarah + nick

    joe + sheryll

    kevin + sam

    frankie + someone (lol)

    i really really do...

  • mooooooooooooooooooooooooo

    joa and shreyll kevin and shrely grass me outtt dont do thisiss

  • NO NO NO NO NO0 NO NONOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

    i HATE SEEING KEVIN AND SHERYLL TOGETHER...CHANGE IT OR I WILL STOP READING

  • she can do wat ever she wants one reader isnt going 2 change her!!!! ur such a loser!

  • Omg. This chp is such a pisser. And now I feel like an idiot because I actually teared up! I mean wow! Thats really lame. Stupid Kevy! He just had to get in the way!

  • great now im crying which isnt good i wanted sheryll and joe not stupid kevin and sheryll ugh reading about joe cryign made me cry now i hate sam kevin and SHERYLL ill only like sheryll if her and joe get together

  • Ok you won't believe this!! As I read this chapter I was listening to my playlisy on I-tunes and just friends came on!! How perfect of a song is that?!?!?

  • wow i never thought this would happen i feel lame lol but this chp made me cry fer real i honestly feel so bad for joe =( this story is so goood though! you make it so real =)
  • [Nick bent down to touch his lips to Sarah's]

    FRANKIE: Hey. What about me?

    [Frankie appeared right next to Sarah]

    SARAH: [Laughing] You can have a kiss too.

    [She bent down and placed a kiss on his cheek]

    NICK: Let's go get some ice cream and a girlfriend for Frankie

    i saw that coming

  • NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­O!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't believe you just did that!!!! joe and sheryll are meant to be....:'(

  • omggggggg

    NONONONOOOOOOOOOOOO

    kevin and shyrell don't make it!

    i wish it were back like how it started!

    joe and shyrell, kevin and sam, sarah and nick!

  • OMG. I'm wailing right now. Seriously.

    Like, that pathetic thing between screaming and sobbing.

    But without the tears.

    I love your storybook-Joe-dude. He's so great.

  • Nice Job! I LOVE them!

  • that was sooo sweet at the end...nick and sarah are the perfect couple i hope that never changes!!!

  • This chapter made my cry. The only thing that made me cheer up is when Nick said he would do a flip!! Poor Joe!! Oops, I fixed it but I accidently put Poop Joe instead of Poor Joe!! Now I'm laughing!! : )

  • I want Joe and Sheryll to be together! Not Kevin and Sheryll I almost cryed when that came up!

  • girl you must be taking lessons from the fgreatest authors in the world or your the ones teaching them you really know how to shake things up! keep it up!

  • i feel bad for joe but i like kevin with sheryl

  • how sad. joe made it look like he was happy for sheryll but he is really hurt. poor joe. i'm still crying. joe and sheryll really belong together. (how did u ever get the idea of making this story. it's sooooooooooooo good)

  • everything is all wrong!!!!!!!!!!!1

    the only thing that actually makes sense is nick and sarah and frankie is mkaing his move!

    and i love nick so that doesnt help =[[

  • your stories are amazing. honestly you should be an author. you are incredabaly talented.=] i was reading some of the comments and i was like wow your a powerful writer b.c you made me and about 29387423 other ppl cry over this. you are amazing.=]

  • i don't think i've reached that many people but maybe someday:)

    <3

  • your stories are amazing. honestly you should be an author. you are incredabaly talented.=] i was reading some of the comments and i was like wow your a powerful writer b.c you made me and about 29387423 other ppl cry over this. you are amazing.=]

  • your stories are amazing. honestly you should be an author. you are incredabaly talented.=] i was reading some of the comments and i was like wow your a powerful writer b.c you made me and about 29387423 other ppl cry over this. you are amazing.=]

  • =[

    i've been reading all of these chapters starting today

    and i'm really depressed now.

    i dont like kevin.

    =[

    i want joe and sheryll to be together they're sooo cute.

    and dont even think about breaking up nick and sarah cause i think i will actually cry.

  • that was soooo SAD......i'm REALLY criyng right now and i am REALLY NOT A SENSITIVE PERSON!!!!!!! i feel soooo sorry 4 joe!!! :(

  • noooo!!!!! joe and sheryll and kevin and sam and nick and sarah !!!!

  • OMG ITS 3:05 A.M. HERE AND IM CRYING!!! POOR JOE!!!

    xx

    taylor

  • This isn't supose to go this way.

    Sheryll is supose to be with Joe and Kevin is supose to be with Sam.

    Im heart broken </3

  • YOU MADE ME CRY!!!!This is all wrong it's joe and sheryll not kevin and sheryll there just way better!! They need to TAKE A BREATH!-People change and PROMISES are broken-

  • NO No NO NO NO!!! Sheryll and Joe!!! Its all wrong. NOT KEVIN & Sheryll!!

  • what dis song it beautiful it brought a tear to my eye lol nahh literally

  • JOE AND SHERYLL!!!PLEASE!

  • Sarah and Nick... Sick?

    WTH?

    Lol. Theyre not sick. I think theyre a great couple.

    Narah... Near a ---. ...

  • and Sheryll and joe are Shoe. lolz. Sheryll and Kevin are Shevin or Keryll.

  • Ha ha ha  ha.

    Boot.

    What names could Boot be?

  • i feel so bad for joe! oh no! sheryll hurt him! Now im gonna hurt her! lol. jk.

    i love you joee!

  • no no no how could you!! jk jk fantastic stories hurry up with 68 plz!!

  • OMG I feel so bad for joe! i just want to hug him!! if i were sheryll i would just b friends with both of them! ok mb i'd b friends with kevin and date joe! lol!

  • I'm always there for you JOe! You should put me in the story! Plz post the next 1 soon! I must find out what happens! AAHHHHH!!!!!!

  • put 68 up plsss!!

  • poor joe =( i wish i could give him a BIG hug =(((

  • Hey! What's up? I love your seris! I started reading them 3 days ago! Awesome!

  • hey omnj i want more that was so good

    i love it post more more more

  • this was the best chapter u ever made. It was so touching. This makes me want to give Joe a BiG grizzly hug! I <3 that sheryll's with Kevin and Joe loved her so much that he did that to make her happy, but please promise me that Sam and Joe won't be together!

    p.s. *I LOVED the music! It goes GREAT with this chapter*

  • omg that was good 68 68 68

  • ohmyjonas. i cannot wait until sixtyeight. hurry please!

    <33.

  • lol the ending is funny about frankie but OMJ hurry!!! i'm dying just waiting here!!

  • OMG FRANKIE IS SOOOOO CUTE!

  • more more more!!!

    hopefully tonite?

  • one thing i love about "cruising on a jb love story" is that it doesnt make fun of Miley. But I LOVE it sooo much.

  • nooo you better put sheryll basck with joe like make it look like sheryll is not happy with joe and kevin gets a little upset because joe and sheryll are both uspet adn kevin asks are you still in love with joe and she starts to cry and says yes and kevin gets a idea to bring sheryll and joe back... wht yall think?

  • yes!! i want sheryll and joe back!!! please!! that would make a good story... great idea!!

  • no, no, no, you czn't do that. this would be the perfect ending if it was a movie. I loved it!! <3 Keep posting.

  • o.m.g!!!!!!!!!! so are joe and sam gonna start dating?? that would be weird

  • nooooo kevin cant be with sheryll thats just...wrong

  • i love your stories you are soooo good!

  • NICK: Let's go get some ice cream and a girlfriend for Frankie.

    that made me smile

  • OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG plz plz plz plz plz plz plz get frankie a gf ill be her my names adrianna. Anna for short PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ

  • She turned around to say something to Joe, but he was already rounding a corner. His hand to his face hiding the tears he didn't want anyone to see]

    this line had me @ frieking tears woman!!!!!i'll always♥yur stories!!!!!

  • im so glad that joe and sheryll are good now!

    its great that the drama between them has died down....for now? :] haha, excellent!

  • aww.. poor joe but im happy for sheryll and kevin i almost cried

  • lol..luv nick and sarah..but all of them are jerkish for doing all that to joe they keep throwing these hard hits at this poor boy..kevin and sheryll should b ashamed i think they r stupid for thinking everything is allright..luv these!! ugh!!

  • nnoo

    :(

    xD

    i wanted joe to be with sheryll and kevin to go with samm

  • you know since joes by himself now..you could make me with joe...my names tiff:D

  • aww. i feel so bad for joe. i almost stared crying. :( i think sheryll shouldn't go out with kevin. she should of stayed with joe.

    yeah. and whats gonna happen between joe and sam now?

    addd the nextt one.!!!

  • OMG! KEVIN AND SHERYLL ALL THE WAYYYY! =).

    but, i feel really bad for joe! ='(.

    but, he shouldn't end up with SAM!

    i don't like her.

  • OMG! KEVIN AND SHERYLL ALL THE WAYYYY! =).

    but, i feel really bad for joe! ='(.

    but, he shouldn't end up with SAM!

    i don't like her.

  • i miss josheryll

  • i was crying when joe came to sheryll, i was not tearing or watering, i burst out with TEARS!

    POST MOREE

  • please post the next one today

  • loved itt =]

  • ADD THE NEXT ONEE!!!!!

  • woah... joe and sheryll!! but keving and sherylls fine too. whats gonna happn to joe?? post the next one soon

    love your stories!

  • love it!

  • omg!!!! im happy for sheryll and kevin but what about joe and sam? :( i dont want anyone to be sad!! cos i like when people are happy :)

  • noooo!!

    i wanted joe and sheryll!!

    and kevin and samm !!

  • lol i like the ending lets get some ice cream and a girlfriend for frankie :D nd i ttly LOVED the chp!!!!!!!!! amazing as usual!!!

  • joe and sheryll please!

  • please post the next oneee

  • aww poor Joe:( good episode though hurry with the next one!

  • ok so as much as i liked Joe and Sheryll, it was making them both really unhappy and i didn't like that. Now Sheryll is happy and Joe will be,and as long as Joe can find another girl soon I will be happy. lol

  • I know that was going to happen!! Kevin and sheryll forever!!!

  • no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no nooooooooooooooooooooooooo keep joe nd sheryll together!!!! kevin is suposed to be with sam!!!!!!! plz plz plz plz plz!!!!! im gona die!!!!

  • Yay!!! Kev and Sheryll!!! Thanks!

  • ew u suck! joe and sheryll!!!!!!!!!! stop being a jerk!

  • I'm not a jerk and i dont suck. Anyways i just said that because its my opinion on the story.

  • i was just kidding! geez! cant u take a joke??? but still i liked joe and sheryll together!

  • ew u suck! joe and sheryll!!!!!!!!!! stop being a jerk!

  • ew u suck! joe and sheryll!!!!!!!!!! stop being a jerk!

  • Joe and Sheryll forever! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz!!!!!!! FOREVER!!!!!:)

  • YES YES YES!!! kevin and sheryll thank you.

  • dang itt I liked SHERYll n JO3 tog3th3er!!

    i crack3d up at the 3nd..g3t sum ic3-cr3am and a girlfri3nd for Franki3..LoL..that is hyst3rical!

    anywayzzz..WRIT3 MOR3..im AddIcT3d!!!f3rshur3!

  • dang itt I liked SHERYll n JO3 tog3th3er!!

    i crack3d up at the 3nd..g3t sum ic3-cr3am and a girlfri3nd for Franki3..LoL..that is hyst3rical!

    anywayzzz..WRIT3 MOR3..im AddIcT3d!!!f3rshur3!

  • yay!!!!!!!!!!!! the old joe is back.

    this is a really confuding exciting story...

    but i know one thing's for sure!

    IM TOTALLY CRUSHUING ON JOE RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!

  • i liked joe and sheryll and i like kevin and sam i wan them to be together again!!

  • NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sheryll and joe or i will cry =[[[

  • o no joe and sheryll was supposed to be together!!

  • i wanted joe and sheryll :(

    but i guess her and kevin are good too..

  • NOOOOOOOOOOOOO JOE AND SHERYLL WERE PERFECT!

    Kevin and Sheryll.. WHAT IS THE WORLD COMMING TOOO! :( I really hate you right now Kevin.

    -.-

    LOVE YOU JONAS BROTHERSSSSS,

    ( not kevin at the moment )

  • lol

  • Yea Sarah and nick need something interesting with them. Just please DONT make them break up!

  • NO!! what happened to joe nad shereyll!!!!!

  • I liked Joe and Sheryll together......*sniff*

    o well......but if you can....get them back together please.....

    ***Angelica***

  • I liked Joe and Sheryll, but I guess Sheryll and Kevin are okay too. I feel bad for Joe though. I hope he can have his own girl also.

  • aw. i liked joe and sheryll. but i think i'm starting to like kevin and sheryll. but i feel so bad for joe.

    this was a really cute chapter.

    i love it.

    <3

  • NOOOOOOOOOOOO i want sheryll and joe please ill cwy :(.

  • aww how cute! lol but i dont see why kevin got sheryll it wasnt fair..

  • i completely agree wit DrummerChick333 we need sum drama with sarah and nick aka SARICK or NIRAH ...watever makes u happy..great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • PS the ending had me laughing lyk crazy

  • omj i cant believe there together!o i wonder how same is going to take it post the next 1!!!!11

  • :( i liked sheryll and joe together... but i guess its for the best right?

    cnt wait for the next!

  • OMG!!! that was great i like joe and sheryll together but if shes happy i guess its ok i just feel really bad for joe!!!:( LOVE the stories PLZ PLZ PLZ post chp 68 ASAP i can't wait to see wat happens next!!! thanx

  • plz post the next one soon!!!

  • wow that was so good!!

    i never liked kevin and sheryll but now i do =) i just feel bad for joe

    but i just wanna say dont put joe and sam 2gether.. thatd be wrong

  • Haha I love Frankie hes so cute!

    I like Sheryll and Joe but her and Kevin are cute together. But I feel bad for Joe

    :]]]]

  • same here =]

  • I love Joe!

    Kevin and Sheryll are cute

    But what about little Joe :[[

  • aww joe is such a sweet heart for letting her be with kevin..

  • OMG! Such GREAT timing! I just got done with ch. 66 ! haha.

    I hope you'll be an author some day! I'd definitely read your books!

  • I LOVE IT! Sheryll and Kevin are finally together!!!!!!!!!! I am so in love with these stories!!!!!!!!!!!!♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!!!­!!!!!!!

  • Wow! Your S U CH a great writer! Im like addicted on your stories and I've gotten a couple of my friends hooked too =]

    Keep them coming!

    PS lets get some drama with Nick and Sarah!

  • Dude ur so talented its awesome!!!

    And i decided to start a jonas brothers story 2 !!! So please check my story out and tell me wat u think.if no-one likes it ill jst stop!

  • wow really good but i think sam and kevin should get bak together

  • btw i/m so glad sheryll and kevin are together!!

  • YESS FIRST COMMENT!!!

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