Carol_Arschin_Levy

[ijsnyder]

Regarding the previous robotic comment, I don't think that this sounds at all robotic - rather quite well-phrased and passionate.

I think, however, that you can work considerably on relaxation - your wrists in particular look stiff. This will improve your sound, and rid yourself of the "robotic" appearance.

[larchmontmark]

I think the prior comments perhaps give a wrong impression.

This is excellent, beautiful playing, with great command.

The prior comments don't disagree with this.....but they don't emphasize the positive as much as they might have.

(In the name of "full disclosure".....I'm sort of an old friend!!

Look for my e-mail, Carol!)

This is a wonderful submission, especially considering that it's from someone who hasn't yet been in any of the amateur competitions.

[diabolicsuggestions]

You're obviously an accomplished pianist, but this was a little bit robotic.

[pianolover81]

Overall well done... yet it seems to me that the Ginastera could be more "free" in the rythm. Some more rubato, without exaggerating, would be welcome I believe.

Also, the pianissimo parts should be played more ppp, hardly hearable, more subtle.

I've played this piece many times, and it's harder than it seems, especially for memory.

Overall I think you should try and play with more contrasts in both pieces.

Good luck with the competition!!

[carollee88]

Thank you. I appreciate your comments.  Carol