Kavi Sammelan, Part 3

[sharmaji21]

subject is gud but presentation could be much better......

[badalinynr]

writing is good but presentation could be lots better better!

[aryanstrange]

yeahs lots betters :) ...

[anumeadowlark]

Hi Sharmaji, AryanJi and Badalji

Thank you for your comments. I agree with you that I could have presented much better. My well wishers also say the same thing. But the thing is that I was born and brought up in a conservative family. Writing romantic poems and then reading them in public is a challenge for me. Writing poems is just a God gift to me.

[gtm228]

highly negetive apraoch.... so sad

[anumeadowlark]

Hi friend, thanks for writing a comment on my poem. I just wanted to tell you a thing for long time that first of all, all the words in my poem is my imagination. Secondly, I believe that when it comes to express your feeling no approach is right or wrong, negative or positive. All people are not the same.