SERVER Part 1

[The79Machine]

So far so good man!

[doodskater77]

very well done, your short film/animation has inspired me to start working on a post apocalyptic film

[editioncollector]

VERY GD STORY, MITE WORK BETTR IN FILM, NOT STOP MOTION

[PointOfTimeStudio]

Not bad very artsy...I would have to say either back off the mic or use a pop filter for DIA to many plosives...Other than that very good...

[dhatje]

Thank you, this was good to watch. Well written, nice use of music, watchable visual storytelling.

[boacnstrictr]

really great

you should write a book

it would go better when you can imagine the layout yourself instead of the picture slide show

good photography though

[DuskMarksmen]

My favorite shot was 6:50

[CONSTRINGACY]

omg who makes this junk!

[retro808]

Nice story, but all clothes and equipment look disgustingly new and clean ^_^, I think it ruins the atmosphere. 

[HomoGnosticus]

@retro808

Second that. Learn2 appropriate costumes.

[jtgoalie2351]

incredible writing! any tips for a fellow writer?



[patrickgordon99]

@jtgoalie2351 Write your script and then write it again and again and again until you have it down to exactly what you want. It's never perfect on your first attempt.

[OneSixthBeauty]

i laughed and no, it's not a compliment.

[SlimFitSam]

i think this is hugely inspired by afterworld

[patrickgordon99]

Interesting. I have never heard of "Afterworld" until you just referenced it. I just checked out the website and it's really cool, I watched the first episode and plan on watching more.

So, no, not influenced by that project at all, but thanks for getting interested in it! Cool stuff.

[SlimFitSam]

@patrickgordon99 it's such a good sort clip series of the post apocalyptic genre.

i really like how you yourself, have created a unique piece.

[SlimFitSam]

@SlimFitSam  *short

[thepiercompany]

superbe work man! i'm making too a post apocalyptic film, when I finished it I would like to see your comment. the antigas mask is awesome! do you painted the american flag?

[ghedhi]

This is really cool, quite impressive that it is all still photos!