Jarrod Yeomans - Broken Plans (Original) (C)

[oakshroom]

very good man

keep it up!!!!

check out my new jah roots cover

[bloomingpower]

i like your originals dude

[littlebitmore2]

A belated Happy Birthday.

I am enjoying your voice and song. Very clear

and full of feeling

endless starz

will also sub from my mommarox2 channel

[Bluefroger]

Really like this one, Jarrod, i could hear Jack Johnson performing, this!!

Sarah x

[arcticwolf1985]

Jack Johnson is one of my favorite artists!

thank you for such a big compliment!

[cassie0722]

Great Job for your 1st song...thats unbelievable!! I love the lyrics...phrasing needs a little work, and maybe punch up the chorus a little...needs a little varience. But, I'm NO EXPERT!! :)

[arcticwolf1985]

thanks!

this song has evolved a bit since then lol

[totalalex90]

i really love this man keep going (y)

[cdkkiss1952]

Great work..You play and sing very well..Way to go..Many people wish they could play and sing..You have achieved the dream..5 stars and a fav from me..

Craig.

[groberson2007]

I love originals...5*****s

Welcome aboard friend...

[geoff1945]

Jarrod, a sad song but you present it well.

It sounds like a conversation we have all had at some time in life. I'll subscribe for more. 5*

Geoff

[oondyba]

oi bud!

ya come along way since sitting at the back of class with the ipod!

rock on

il be a hire-a-groupee if need bee!

smuffee

[hoffmann9471]

ahh, your composition. ja,  great !

5*

keep it up !

Uncle Pete

[jjfan17]

u wrote dis?

wow u have sum talent!!

[gmhoward]

I dig it.

[AshleyTroxursox]

omg this song is great, you've got so much talent!!!! keep up the good work! :)

[bodhival]

Lovely voice.

Song has a warm, sweet feel - even though it's about pain and loss.

Thanks for sharing this.

[IbanezFroob]

I Love The Progression, And I Think The Percussion Of Hitting The Strings Is a Nice Effect!

8/10 Its a Nice Song, Like the Lyrics, Very Creative!

Keep It Up Man! :D

[bexwasere]

Good First Atempt!! I Would Never wright my own song! Well Done!

[funkyro0ock]

i love da words bt da mal wasnt dat good

hope u get better

keep up bro

luv ya

[bester34]

I enjoyed the chord progression and your strumming. Great creativity

[gersing]

nice tune, great first attempt!

[guitmartiman]

Not bad at all for a first attempt! Keep it up!

[arcticwolf1985]

thank you :)

[aracelina18]

Nice song.This is the 1st good song.

[Belyeomans]

HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!!!

It's like you delved into my soul and found the words to match what I've been feeling for the past 5 years!

HOLY FUCKING SHIT!

This is incredible.

I'm actually crying, I thought I forgot how.

Thankyou.

Love you bro.

[arcticwolf1985]

you are very excitable arent you? lol

[amazongift]

Great song Mate, keep em coming...Mel

[arcticwolf1985]

thanks :)

[Broaart]

You are a good song writer. keep it up.

Thanks for sharing.

God bless you!!!

[arcticwolf1985]

and you too

[brittanyleeann04]

I really like this song:)

[joeyjoejoejunior2009]

Nice song

love that second verse

is there an mp3 or something?

[arcticwolf1985]

yea if u want, just give me ur email

[whippingboy83]

Nice song man...yeah!Only a thing...sometimes it seems that you're playing too fast , but maybe it's only my impression...anyway...this is a good first song...

[arcticwolf1985]

haha yeah first song nerves i think

[pixiie13lky]

Beautiful first song!

Id buy it

[chaz23j]

awesome, um yeh if you want to email them to me, my email is on my channel page! def. room for growth, I love it though. great job!!! :-) You got featured on ijustine's askij show - in case you didn't know! :-p peace out!

[arcticwolf1985]

haha yeah i did know

she messaged me on twitter on Fri to say happy dbay and sorry she couldn pronounce my name lol

[chaz23j]

well hey at least you got to talk to her! haha!

[zogtavious]

Woo!, rewrite ftw!

[chaz23j]

oh and happy birthday!!!! :-)

[chaz23j]

Jarrod! Great job for you first attempt at song writing. I love the lyrics and the guitar progression. I can hear a lot of vocal melody just waiting to be found. One of the things I've noticed as I play my songs and then come back to them after a while, is I find new melodies and more things come together that I like :-) Cheers bro! - I think I may noodle around with your song a bit today, if you don't mind ;-) later!

[LoveMusicForever1234]

Very nice my friend.

Happy day.

[steveelbourn]

Yeh, thats sounds better to me from memory. Im trying to find the original version. what you think?? which version do you prefer???

[arcticwolf1985]

i think i like this one better its easier to sing and i think it sounds better

my original is still up on myspace :)