Hey I love ur story. And I like how ur video was so organized and stuff but I thought u could improve the color of the words that u put on the slideshow cuz it was pretty hard to read on the screen. Anyways, other than that, it was really good. Keep it coming!!!! Oh and will u add me as a friend on here?
@1256394 thanks for the feed back! I like knowing how to improve my videos. If you check out the next episode i believe the text is alot easier to read. And OF COURSE I'll add you as a friend! :)
@jenny16713 yeah the lettering looked better on my system and then when i uploaded it kind of was harder to read! Sorry next episode will be nicer! promise. :)
@twilighttttttttt Its exactly like the book, just a different situation. So Edwards a vampire and Jacobs a werewolf. Haha. And I know the pic is awesome! :)
GOD! NOOOOOOOO! IM JEALOUS I DIDNT THINK OF IT! LOL! IT WAS TRULEY AMAZING! PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT ONE! PLEEASSE??? *PUPPY DOG FAC* I HOPE EDWARD CULLEN DIES! :) LOL BUT BELLA NEEDS TO BE HAPPY ! SO.. HMM I WONDER HOW THIS PLAYS OUT?!??!?
wow UMMMM WOW! im speechless...i was thinking that Edward will come back & thats wat happened. it kinda creeped me out but umm...this will be a fantastic story! :) <3 cant wait 4 more! :P
This is a really good opener!!! Ur a pretty good writer 2!!!! i really enjoyed it and found it extremely interesting!!! This is a good storyline....watch the blue writing....otherwise, keep up the good work!!!
OMG, OMG, THIS IS AMAZING, IT'S AWESOME, IT'S BRILLIANT, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT EPISODE?
Why did he come back? Everything was going great for Bella with Jacob, and now all of a sudden after a year, he just shows up out of the blue. I'm team Edward but that's just maddening because it's been a whole year, and now he just decides to come back and ruin her life again. UGH!!
Are Jacob and Bella a "thing".
909Gabi 2 years ago
Hey I love ur story. And I like how ur video was so organized and stuff but I thought u could improve the color of the words that u put on the slideshow cuz it was pretty hard to read on the screen. Anyways, other than that, it was really good. Keep it coming!!!! Oh and will u add me as a friend on here?
1256394 2 years ago
@1256394 thanks for the feed back! I like knowing how to improve my videos. If you check out the next episode i believe the text is alot easier to read. And OF COURSE I'll add you as a friend! :)
thelionthelamb77 2 years ago
Awersome!!!!! Can't wait for more!
chewingum942 2 years ago
thank you very much and i love your serie
jenny16713 2 years ago
this an AWESOME episode!! can't wait for the next!! i want the next!! great first episode!!
TWiliGHTssessed94 2 years ago
@betheoneimwaitingfor OF COURSE! thanks for watching! I'll definitely subscribe!
thelionthelamb77 2 years ago
amazing story!!
Prettylila999 2 years ago
love it can't wait for the next
idkWhoIam100 2 years ago
omg, this's awesome and if you don't mind to make those words more BIGGER ,can't for more
jenny16713 2 years ago
@jenny16713 yeah the lettering looked better on my system and then when i uploaded it kind of was harder to read! Sorry next episode will be nicer! promise. :)
thelionthelamb77 2 years ago
I have a question.
-Are they all human?
-Btw, that picture of Rob is amazing. :)
<3
twilighttttttttt 2 years ago
@twilighttttttttt Its exactly like the book, just a different situation. So Edwards a vampire and Jacobs a werewolf. Haha. And I know the pic is awesome! :)
thelionthelamb77 2 years ago
Oh, okay. :)
And Bella knows everything...?
twilighttttttttt 2 years ago
@twilighttttttttt yup she knows everything
thelionthelamb77 2 years ago
Great job. :) Please, update soon!
Merry Christmas! <3
Is it a B&E story or is it a B&J story?
twilighttttttttt 2 years ago
GOD! NOOOOOOOO! IM JEALOUS I DIDNT THINK OF IT! LOL! IT WAS TRULEY AMAZING! PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT ONE! PLEEASSE??? *PUPPY DOG FAC* I HOPE EDWARD CULLEN DIES! :) LOL BUT BELLA NEEDS TO BE HAPPY ! SO.. HMM I WONDER HOW THIS PLAYS OUT?!??!?
~~~~Katie
edwardmakesmefaint 2 years ago
wow UMMMM WOW! im speechless...i was thinking that Edward will come back & thats wat happened. it kinda creeped me out but umm...this will be a fantastic story! :) <3 cant wait 4 more! :P
codynero8 2 years ago
WOW !!! That was really good cant wait till the next
hcullen74 2 years ago
OMG!!! i want to know what happens next!
hope its a BEDWARD story!!!!!!!!! or at least not a jacob and bella....
nessieandbedward4eva 2 years ago
wow!! I love it!! more, more more!!!
I hope it´s a BellaxEdward story because I HATE Jacob ;)
brujalba23 2 years ago
good loveit
PeaceLoveJoyHappines 2 years ago
It was GREAT!! keep them coming!!!
ceciblue023 2 years ago
love it!!!!
xoxobunnybooxoxo 2 years ago
i luvt sooooooooooooo much nxt nxt
sasha92410 2 years ago
great more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lolkelpseedslol 2 years ago
This is a really good opener!!! Ur a pretty good writer 2!!!! i really enjoyed it and found it extremely interesting!!! This is a good storyline....watch the blue writing....otherwise, keep up the good work!!!
carleejrocks 2 years ago 2
OUTSTANDING!!!!!!! I guess i have a new fav. series
laughalot52 2 years ago
I love this new series. I can't wait til the next episode!
alicecullenfan110 2 years ago
i agree it was amazing but watch the blue text
astwtlover 2 years ago
THAT WAS BRILLANT!!!!
TaylorCullen5643 2 years ago
OH MY GOD!! this is incredible i love it!!
ArIrIz 2 years ago
OMG, OMG, THIS IS AMAZING, IT'S AWESOME, IT'S BRILLIANT, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT EPISODE?
Why did he come back? Everything was going great for Bella with Jacob, and now all of a sudden after a year, he just shows up out of the blue. I'm team Edward but that's just maddening because it's been a whole year, and now he just decides to come back and ruin her life again. UGH!!
imonmeds 2 years ago
THAT'S GREAT!! i love it!!
:)
Majda311288 2 years ago
Soo good! only that it was hard to see the blue text.
mathiiildaB 2 years ago
@mathiiildaB I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for letting me know about the blue! It'll be better next time :)
thelionthelamb77 2 years ago