Re: Def Jam Poetry - Dante Basco "Nikki"

[peepeedoing]

Peace And Love.

[12omer12]

immense

[kashfields]

Blessings to you and thanks for comin thru!

[ForeverMeForever]

WOW I really really love this.

[kashfields]

Thanks so much!

[amoebic42]

peace and blessings.

[kashfields]

Thanks for comin thru on the poetry tip.

[KoolAidBloodz]

clean nostrols lmao

[kashfields]

Thanks, I try :)

[mikoOWNz]

Nice, man.

[tahjholme5]

dis nigga so lame..

get some publicity..

ur in your fuck mothers room..

she let you on the compter cuz

he cleaned the kitchen...bitch ass

lame nigga...and u fuckin suck..

[kashfields]

you funny dude. your face is funnier.

[bigoverpac666]

Damn...

This is great. Good job. :)

[kashfields]

Thanks so much for taking the time to give me a listen!

kashan.

[lordheartsme]

love this!! thanks for uploading.

[kashfields]

Thanks 2 Hard, I appreciate your comment~

[chrissy2hard]

ok so im a poet as well and i find it hard to enjoy text book poetry with rhythm that people use with it and i heard it slightly in here but i did enjoy it for the most part keep up the goood work

[Corkie227]

loved it :-)

[kashfields]

Thanks so much!

[kirienito]

holy crap you have big nose wholes : )

[kashfields]

LOL! I love it, I know!

[straightjacketjoe20]

Spizack, by continually reposting on a wall that isn't even Your own, doesn't that make you just a bit of a hypocrite??? Stop wasting your time trying to insult someone else's creativity when you don't even have the stones to put your own work up up for criticism... if you don't like his work, be more constructive with your time and go read a book about something you DO like. douche.

kash, keep writing, with a little work on your delivery, i think the poem could be pretty solid.

[kashfields]

Thanks, Straightjacketjoe

Me and lilspizack have worked it all out. We have an understanding but thanks for your comments, though!

[kashfields]

thanks for noticing:)

[lilspizack]

This shit sucked

[StraitSomali613]

IF your gonna say a negative comment at least make it a constructive criticism man. 1) it doesn't make you sound ignorant 2) it will help the person out

[kashfields]

Thanks, wow-I appreciate that, I tend not to even respond to ignorance, but it's cool that you decided to.

[lilspizack]

How am I sounding ignorant? I expressed my opinion. I didn't make ignorant statements or try to fix him.

I think the ignorant one here is you buddy, because you said I sounded ignorant when I just put in my opinion. Just because you don't agree with it doesn't make me ignorant.

[kashfields]

I think it is ignorance when someone can not express themselves through relevant vocabulary other than using a four letter word, but do you.

[StraitSomali613]

That is what I meant. kashfields Pretty much said exactly what I would have said ....

[lilspizack]

How is using a 4-letter word ignorant? It's a word isn't it? What if I use a 6-letter word to describe the video?

This video is stupid.

Just because you don't think it's shit, or that it sucks, doesn't make me ignorant. I chose to use a 4-letter word to describe the video, but hey, there's a shitload of other words I can use you wise-ass.

So maybe you should get off of youtube and do something with your life.

[kashfields]

Please if this is your day to come in and comment on something that deals with someone living their own life in a negative manner then obviously your brain capacity is limited or run by someone else's decisions. Believe me, I have so much more going on than this poem. If I gave you my name all you have to do is google it, but it's not that serious. Just enjoy your life in spite of what anyone has to say, I wish you the greatest that it could possibly give to you.

[lilspizack]

Dude, you're a douchebag.

You just wanted to sound like a smartass.

[kashfields]

Thanks, you've already decided I am stupid, so if you want to continue with the name calling that is fine as well. Be blessed & best to you:)

[lilspizack]

Once again, trying to sound like the wise guy. You're so fake it's not even funny.

[kashfields]

You don't know much about a genuine person, I mean exactly what I said. In spite of what you think about me, i wish you the absolute best.

kashan

[lilspizack]

If you were genuine, you would stop responding to my comments. You just want to have the last word. You're genuine douche.

[ahotdolphin]

keep it up! me likiy

[KitTytHekIlLeRPzyKo]

nice work brah brah...

that shit was deep makes me wanna write even more...

[ThePHENOM987]

hahahahaha. is that t-pain? lol. j/k. dope sht, bro.

[Mombaa33]

hahaha, i also thought it was t-pain at first =P lmao!

ur poem was very good btw o.O

[moneymasterjet]

right on.

[flipinoy2k]

woah... i like this response...

[KingDan18]

nice work dude..

[seagreen20]

i like it man....you make me want to write too...hehehe

[bboyhitokiri]

nice work man. lol makes me wanna work on my writing and write another poem. lol keep it up bro.

[kashfields]

Man, you should always be writing, but thanks for the love-I actually have this poem in a contest right now at famecast(dot)com/kashan. check it out and give it a vote if you have a minute!!!

[bboyhap]

nope

[pamanis]

keep it up ma brother good very nice

[kashfields]

Preciate you coming in and commenting...

kashan

[ozair77477]

good job, ur good man!!!

[kashfields]

I appreciate you coming in and commenting...

kashan

[failedvlogger]

nice work

[kashfields]

thanks...k

[y0u2ub3]

pretty good, keep it up

[kashfields]

thanks, will do!kashan