Great Job!! I loved it! everyone did a great job and acted very well. The story line was one of the best parts to. Who ever did the makeup did an awesome job!!!!
For starters, i dig your acting alot man. I like the bully vs underdog storyline. Kudos to the use of Steve Miller Band. The amount of participation is impressive too. Lots of actors and actresses. I enjoyed your use of text, which scrolled across the entire screen at scene changes. Editing was very clean without any jump cuts to be seen. Overall, for your first film ever, this is very impressive! In the future, i would try to get some close ups and other kind of shots. But overall, awesome bro!
The director is always the one in charge. hes is the one who develops the actors charactors and coaches them as well as getting the videographers to do what he wants to see.
in the beginning i felt as though it was hard to tell what was going on. to fix those probs get closer to what you want the viewer to see( remember they know the setting because of the opening shot). And dont think that a bad camera should slow you down. oh and adding backround music could improve this greatly. if you go on to google you can find all kinds of royalty free music to download. Great potential with the story and keep at it.
hey, not bad, but there is room for improvment. whoever was doing the directing should be more assertive with the actors to get more emotion from them. its tough but will help a lot. also get more cuts in the video, more close ups of thier faces so you can better visualize thier emotion.
Awesome video, this is great for your first video. The only thing I would say is what fitz said about the actors looking at the camera and you need to get more camera angles. Like in the beginining there was to much going on to really catch on to what you should be listening to. But other then that great job man it was great.
thx alot fitz,it wasnt me on da camera,it was an amatuer videographer,i put some input into da angles n all. ur comment(s) help,i still gotta work n learn WMM, we wer also usin a "cheap" video camera, but thx again.
I really felt for the two kids there, good job. I enjoyed that film man, it was a great start. hope what i said helps, its just a few things that i noticed that could make it better. it was already really good, so good job! i look foreword to more:)
with the party that night thing, i might suggest just using the overlap effect, but making it at the bottom or less huge. only a suggestion. Great sense of emotion between characters! I can really feel the anger and jealousy you had when the kid in the tank top was near your girl! Nice shots slow motion, that really showed the climax of the film! the shots on the face as well, that was really swell.
This isn't a bad video, the dialog is pretty good. you can feel what the characters are feeling through their actions, but you may want to have your characters avoid looking at the camera. that is not always an easy thing to do, especially with a lot of people. i might suggest sum more panning and zooming, like really showing the characters faces to show the emotion. its a really great start though:)
Great Job!! I loved it! everyone did a great job and acted very well. The story line was one of the best parts to. Who ever did the makeup did an awesome job!!!!
xoanglxbabiixo 3 years ago
For starters, i dig your acting alot man. I like the bully vs underdog storyline. Kudos to the use of Steve Miller Band. The amount of participation is impressive too. Lots of actors and actresses. I enjoyed your use of text, which scrolled across the entire screen at scene changes. Editing was very clean without any jump cuts to be seen. Overall, for your first film ever, this is very impressive! In the future, i would try to get some close ups and other kind of shots. But overall, awesome bro!
JohnRambo 3 years ago
sez u r a dork
imhotinbed123 4 years ago 2
thx Bombo...whos in charge?
zmoney116 4 years ago
The director is always the one in charge. hes is the one who develops the actors charactors and coaches them as well as getting the videographers to do what he wants to see.
Bombo56 4 years ago
i meant whos in charge of Bombo56 profile?
zmoney116 4 years ago
Im in charge of writting, directing and editing pretty much everything for BomboFilms
Bombo56 4 years ago
in the beginning i felt as though it was hard to tell what was going on. to fix those probs get closer to what you want the viewer to see( remember they know the setting because of the opening shot). And dont think that a bad camera should slow you down. oh and adding backround music could improve this greatly. if you go on to google you can find all kinds of royalty free music to download. Great potential with the story and keep at it.
Bombo56 4 years ago 2
hey, not bad, but there is room for improvment. whoever was doing the directing should be more assertive with the actors to get more emotion from them. its tough but will help a lot. also get more cuts in the video, more close ups of thier faces so you can better visualize thier emotion.
Bombo56 4 years ago 2
Awesome video, this is great for your first video. The only thing I would say is what fitz said about the actors looking at the camera and you need to get more camera angles. Like in the beginining there was to much going on to really catch on to what you should be listening to. But other then that great job man it was great.
monkeyman042788 4 years ago 2
thx alot fitz,it wasnt me on da camera,it was an amatuer videographer,i put some input into da angles n all. ur comment(s) help,i still gotta work n learn WMM, we wer also usin a "cheap" video camera, but thx again.
zmoney116 4 years ago
no problem man, i'm here anytime you need me. i enjoyed your film, it was cool:)
fitzy1234 4 years ago
I really felt for the two kids there, good job. I enjoyed that film man, it was a great start. hope what i said helps, its just a few things that i noticed that could make it better. it was already really good, so good job! i look foreword to more:)
fitzy1234 4 years ago 2
with the party that night thing, i might suggest just using the overlap effect, but making it at the bottom or less huge. only a suggestion. Great sense of emotion between characters! I can really feel the anger and jealousy you had when the kid in the tank top was near your girl! Nice shots slow motion, that really showed the climax of the film! the shots on the face as well, that was really swell.
fitzy1234 4 years ago 2
This isn't a bad video, the dialog is pretty good. you can feel what the characters are feeling through their actions, but you may want to have your characters avoid looking at the camera. that is not always an easy thing to do, especially with a lot of people. i might suggest sum more panning and zooming, like really showing the characters faces to show the emotion. its a really great start though:)
fitzy1234 4 years ago