this is really nice :D i've been singing this for contests. try adding a few dynamics, and try to hold out on all phrases. ummm... this is just really nice in general... also, try and get it energized... do you know the english translation? act it out in your singing! thank you for sharing your beautiful voice.
Just work on your breath control a little more, and that should help with the end of your phrases, as well as intonation. Its tough to record with an accompaniment CD as opposed to a live accompanist, which explains the timing issues in some spots. Great dynamic contrast though! :) What year are you? Fantastic job!
Thanks for the critique, I've been working on breathing ever since I started studying with my current teacher. breath control is a monster I haven't overcome just yet.
This recording is actually almost a couple years old. I did this my sophomore year for juries. (and have uploaded pieces from my junior recital!)
I'll be beginning my senior year in voice next semester.
nicely done! you keep the energy up throughout the song and you tone is nice. the high notes are good. I noticed two things though: your onset in the beginning of each phrase is a little forceful (not all phrases are marker with < in this song) and the rhythm: after "v'amero" you are coming in late. good job otherwise!
This is one of my favorite Italian songs. I am singing it next semester for voice. I think you did a great job. Alot of girls did this for juries at my school this past semester.
You have a lovely, refined soprano voice. I can hear the cultivation.......
Marmalade000000 2 years ago
this is really nice :D i've been singing this for contests. try adding a few dynamics, and try to hold out on all phrases. ummm... this is just really nice in general... also, try and get it energized... do you know the english translation? act it out in your singing! thank you for sharing your beautiful voice.
heartheartcrush 2 years ago
I'm impressed! And, by the way, I absolutely love your little bird icon. It's clever. :-)
baroquemongoose 2 years ago
Just work on your breath control a little more, and that should help with the end of your phrases, as well as intonation. Its tough to record with an accompaniment CD as opposed to a live accompanist, which explains the timing issues in some spots. Great dynamic contrast though! :) What year are you? Fantastic job!
lineyg 2 years ago
Thanks for the critique, I've been working on breathing ever since I started studying with my current teacher. breath control is a monster I haven't overcome just yet.
This recording is actually almost a couple years old. I did this my sophomore year for juries. (and have uploaded pieces from my junior recital!)
I'll be beginning my senior year in voice next semester.
Sing4Him714 2 years ago
brava
redlaxmi 2 years ago
great job
BlkOnyx21 2 years ago
nicely done! you keep the energy up throughout the song and you tone is nice. the high notes are good. I noticed two things though: your onset in the beginning of each phrase is a little forceful (not all phrases are marker with < in this song) and the rhythm: after "v'amero" you are coming in late. good job otherwise!
lynxoid84 2 years ago
careful not to just dump the end of your phrases. but good job
abigailjcharles 2 years ago
Well done, you're doing the same as me, I hadn't had a lesson mine yet, but it's a nice song to sing for fun.
KARINADIVA 2 years ago
this is beautiful!! you have a lovely voice. i am soprano as well, and i am singing this song! you sang this well.
musicgirl792 3 years ago
thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!
haha. i'm doing this for s&e and my director never recorded the voice part.
i was like dying trying to get a start on learning it because we aren't really given any help with the text or any of that jazz.
so thanks again!
:].
Moothellama 3 years ago
this is really good!
the only thing i have to say is to watch your tone.
it sounds swallowed,as though it's shoved to the back of your throat.
open your mouth more & really pop the sound out.
great job! =)
kmehxo 3 years ago
This is one of my favorite Italian songs. I am singing it next semester for voice. I think you did a great job. Alot of girls did this for juries at my school this past semester.
PrestonPickett 3 years ago
Good job!
I could listen to your song forever.
Keep it up.
reydogoloyugo23 3 years ago
Hello from Japan!
I like this song very much, and your voice is beautiful soprano!
waytohome 3 years ago
:) thanks!
Sing4Him714 3 years ago
Nicely done!
You have a nice voice and I know how hard it is to sing with the accompaniment track.
It would sound nice if you try to make the trinos.
Keep working!
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roseLrossi 3 years ago