My Immortal; The Series Part 1!

[FR3DKRU3G3R]

my sides hurt from laughing so hard - this is brilliant!

[SofritoBeans]

I think Ebony should be introduced to Bella.

And then Bella should sick her werewolf/vampire boyfriends on this girl.

so...much....horrible grammar......and.....overall crappiness..ugh.

[XxHIARAxX]

pfft so awesome. XD the sex scene was funny XD

[fluffydevil13]

i love you.

[ImmaFcknUnicorn]

Oh meh GAAWWD em lyk crein!!!

Haha this is so funny, you guys are great XD

[Plottoberry]

I LOVE YOU ALL SO MUCH. hahahahhaha

[Georgie604]

omg that was amazing

[katanarieka]

I love her valley girl accent.

[tehSnark]

Depressing book = Twilight

[Afrokoopa]

the depressing book should had been "Teh little Prince" =P

[Bitama]

I just love Draco's first appearance...

[CalebNaquin]

I don't like him better than YOUUU!

[AiyorisA]

I want her freakin outfit when she goes to the concert. LOVE IT!!! Anyway, ya'll did a ridiculously good job.

[lookielouE1705]

4:38 Dumblydore says what we are all thinking.

[userbunnylaura]

I watched the ending on repeat... this video is hilarious. PLEASE MAKE MOOOAARRR

[VisionWiz1978]

*is laughing*

[maximusx3]

Oh dear lord, this is amazing!

[NekiiFTW]

Oh my god dat ending man

[TDIGuy9876]

This is much better in video, rather than writing. Faved.

[LukaOfTheBel]

ME GUSTA!!!!

[BlizzardtheWolf97]

This is just one of those so-bad-it's-good type things. Me gusta. XD

[riffraff430]

I AM CRYIGN

[TheLadyBloodwing]

Best portrayal of their love scene yet...Also, your Dumbledore was highly amusing.

[Moollythecow]

This is really stupid and funny at the same time.....GOOD JOB! :)

[alexisSRR]

i hope you checked your smoke detectors. it sounds like the batteries are dead.

[Shesaz]

DUMBLYDORE

[TheLoBrooks]

I love how the 'human blood' is Kool-Aid.

[Doofe2012]

It's really sad that someone actually wrote this.

[ImmortalHeartBreaker]

Lmao , can I marry them? ;D

[avila053]

I can't get over how stupid the fanfic is and this video just made it even more stupid.

I love it. xD

[TheRepublicOfUngeria]

DOWN THE STREET NOT ACROSS THE ROAD, MAKE IT COUNT!!! :P

[TheRepublicOfUngeria]

you mean fair use?



[WaddleBuff]

How do you stop in the middle of an orgasm? It that even...physically possible?

[paraplegicgiraffe]

I had to stop it when music started. It's too horrible.

[OrganicPomegranate]

This is amazing.

[guitarz928]

I haven't laughed this hard in a while. lol thank you!

[CaptainEvvie]

oh my god i love you people so much please marry me :P

[CLR836]

Gay and WHAT THE FRICK

[Echosong07]

I just. I can't.

I have lost the ability to can.

[Mauwable]

nobody cares what ebony is wearing....*text flies by*

[ldrocks66]

@MistressOfTheDecay lol they didn't make this up. if you have a problem, take it up with the girl who wrote the bullshit called my immortal. named tara gillesbie. they're just making fun of that.

[1236sason]

they are so lifeless i mean how they act the charcater the characters themselves but it is all true the fanfiction sucks and it was intetionaly made to suck

[marsisamazingilys]

@1236sason

*face. fucking. palm.*

[MsSeeingdouble]

@MistressOfTheDecay you Do know that this is a parody of the my immortal fanfiction right?

[Svperstarr]

IF YOU DON LIKE DIS U ARE A STUPID FUCKIN PREP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

[awfulgreythings]

I even took off my BRA.

[KKbook]

OMG

YOU'RE SMOKING POCKY 8'D

[doglover12345andfr]

WOW! XD

[WolfsStorm]

I think 4:28 may be to XXX for youtube.

[BrainChild42]

I COULD be mistaken, but I think this fanfic was written by a troll

[MsWooWoo11]

CIGARETTES AND DRUGS.

[WatermelonCutie1999]

Amazing! :-D

[Kitsune3190]

almost cried laughing

[teshanovic1]

Professional Idiots! LOL!

[candygirl52793]

What's funny is that this series makes the fanfic out to be of much better quality than it actually is.

[VenusFray]

@thatawkwardmuggle Oh, well, yeah. I thought you meant to this specific video.

[VenusFray]

@thatawkwardmuggle It was. -.-

[BlackFeather713]

I love your necklace

[scrabblan]

You guys just roll with the stupidity of it (though the sex scene was genius).

Embrace it more, actually speak the mispelled words, cause im sure it say "Dumblydore" at the end. Make this as bad as the fic.

[milo201]

o god.

[Casandraelf]

this is lulzy. here's hoping for more

[JaystaOuO]

OH MY GOD LOST MY SHIT AT THE SEX PART

I LOL'D

[CdrCactus]

She reminds me of Julie Powers from the Scott Pilgrim movie.

[pikachumousegirl]

....You have guts to act this out. I respect you for that.

[GregSep]

BEST. ENDING. EVER.

[mmbooknut]

the name.....THE NAME(ebony darkness dementia raven way) ! it sends shivers down my back; not good ones!

[FunSunGrl]

I love that they are smoking pocky XP

[warrirornunluv801]

This is one of the best abridged live series!

[valmontdracul]

4:27 is quite possibly the funniest damned moment ever put on film.

[ConfusedGender]

OH EM EFF GEE. GET OUT THIS IS AWESOME.

[Quidam]

This right here? This is awesome!

[Chucknorrisaurrus]

lol @ depressing book being Breaking Dawn.

[17sundays]

Read my mind! i was just thinking they should turn My Immortal into a movie! Word for word. I wish i could send u lots of money so that it would be better quality

[Brackenpath]

...then he put his thingy into my you-know-what, and we did it for the first time.

[username42oo]

this is beyond brilliant. Me and 2 14-year-old boys have been sitting on the couch giggling. (I'm the obligatory cool 51-year-old actress mom, just to put things out of perspective.) It would be so fantastic if I could send you thousands of ducats to make more of these. You are all going places if you keep this up. The acting, makeup, camerawork is all very good! Even the sound. You truly put a lot of happy goofy work into it. Keep having fun. Making movies is a neat job.

[CroixAllard]

haha. this makes the terrible fan fiction tolerable. nice sex scene. heh heh.

[TheQwerty99999]

The guy playing dumbledore tried not to laugh XD

[Hrr9271]

oh man guys why havent you made anymore?

[nightlyoko626]

pfffttt you guys have to do more X'D

[ShadowNinjaX3]

What is air.

[fallforsociety]

taylor lautner's blonde face

[missnicointokyo]

I love this so much.

[PalomaRAWRx3]

blonde face

[Notebooked]

'Saw my friends and I had to go away'. Impossible, Ebony doesn't have any friends. That's for prepz whose hearts aren't filled with dakr sorrow n blood.

[sean0395]

WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING MOTHERFUCKERS?!?

[Fr0st1989]

@sean0395 YOU LUDICROUS FOOLS

[antiklaus]

All Mary Sue fanfics should be done this way. Awesome.

[Brightfur10]

Never laughed so hard in my life.

...asses.

[Alekx]

Blond face. Hahahhahahahahah.

This is so good. Dumbledore is the best.

I remember when I read it, I laughed so hard by how he talked.

[BelaCharm]

POCKY!!! :D

Good job you guys! <3

[OddMike]

Aw the girl who plays Ebony/Enoby/whatever is so pretty!

Go figure.

[rogermwilcox]

Cheap cinematic trick:

If you want to show Ebony drinking a glass of human blood, use tomato juice. It looks enough like blood to the untrained eye that you won't have to use pink Kool-Aid with a "(pretend this is human blood)" Post-It Note on it.

[Statuess]

@rogermwilcox But the Kool-Aid and Post-It better matches the level of effort and research that went into the original..!

P.S. Whoever did the '666' writes pretty '6's. :)

[Camillelang]

Oh my god I love you guys so much! This is so beautiful!

[MegaPuffle]

This people who made this video are legends X'DDDD

[16nwb1]

@MyImmortalSeries

Its such a bad story but at the same time it's so funny becasuse its bad! it like strage i like it cause its so bad i cant help but laugh at it. (The story) oh and btw you guys r doing a great job in making this into a seires.

[16nwb1]

LMFAO,

"The stunts performed are done by professional idiots."

[LilAngelBrandix3]

4 in the morning. Everyone's asleep. Trying so hard not to laugh.

I BUSTED A HERNIA.

[weasleychicks93]

@LilAngelBrandix3 I'm not even kidding. I'm in that same situation right now. *dies laughing*

[MermaidBlueFins]

Great job :) I enjoyed this.

[Iwuzhere321]

This is funny, must of be a pretty bad written story.

[BethArnoldMusic]

Can't breathe! This is so funny! And Ebony (Enobt... Wnobiy ect.) actually looks quite cool (minus the black lipstick). You made the worst fanfiction into the best comedy (and bloodytearz666 on fanfiction hates comedy xD)

[CultClassicMashtah24]

2:21 I agree, Breaking Dawn did make me want to cut myself.

[illy711]

You people are my heroes!

[NileBakura]

I nearly died watching this. You guys were fantastic. I love the straw and lid part.

[LitCastsD13]

You people are amazing. xD

[iwannabemrsfelton]

The Good Charlotte concert was so amazing! Her voice makes me laugh, so does Draco's :P

You lot are epic. Thanks for this, the crapness of the story makes my day :D

[DragonBunni]

WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING MOTHERFUCKERS??

The fact that they were only inserting a straw in a lid makes this outburst even better.

[mika113]

cant......... breathe............too.......f­unny........lololololololololo­lololololololololol

the twilight book omg and the straw and lid this vid is awesome lolololololololol

[o5pr3y]

Funny thing is, that footage is from a real Good Charlotte concert, and is performed by their entire remaining fanbase.

[EmoSamyChan]

Lol this shits great makes my day XD

[jakespaltensperger]

Omg! Props for the actors I would've never been able to do tht lmao! "muthafukas!!"

[YeaILikeMCR]

Love the twilight depressing book

[AntiTwilight101]

I CANNOT BREATHE. HALP

[mypunksnotdead]

4:38 FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[RedPaganPunk]

This was just so amazing xD You guys win the internets.

And the girl who portrayed Ebony was actually hot. Js...

[hollyhock18x7]

. . . why is there a cardboard cutout of scarlett o'hara?

[Frameshift13v4]

Oh, my god. If I was rich, I'd fund the hell out of this to get it on Sundance or IFC. lol

[destined521]

I will send you a million dollars worth of air that I'm wasting because you're making me laugh so hard. =)

[skadiyoko]

@cottoncandygirl412

Um, no. It was ciggaretts AND druGs, duh. You must be a fuukin flamming preop, bic.

[LMTR14]

great stuff!

[TheKnittingJudge]

best fic ever tbh

[treblemaker21]

Hooray for random gone with the wind cut outs!



[cnt4giveAvadaKedavra]

depressing book= breaking dawn xD

[msmochilla]

me gusta.me gusta mucho

[ringthebellamy]

Lmaooo the sudden sex scene.

[edgeofthewoods]

LOVE THIS! PLEASE MAKE MORE PARTS!

[SidArthuraSutton]

OH MY GOD dracos so hot in this

[kiwi961000]

you are awesome

[HolderofSalvation]

I love how Ebony's narrator sounds like one of those headcanon stuck up bitches. XD

[arcdragon224]

This was actually really excellent.

[Theredtail95]

ROFLMFAO

[Lupinequeen13]

Oh wow. I was laughing for about a minute. Well done guys.

[demonsrcool]

PLEASE MAKE MORE YOU GUYS ARE SO GOOD !

[BigMowma2010]

lol this is great, plus the girl playing Ebony is Adorable :3

Keep it up, pweez!

[mynameisnotimogen]

BEST EVVAAARRR! SUBSCRIBED! made me literally lol and my 11 yr old bro is just like wth?

[AbbieChwan]

the girl is too pretty to be enoby. |D;

anyway eue

dying dying omg

[twigirl49]

ZOMG! I'm laughing so hard i fell out of my chair! HAHAHA!!!!

[ladycucumberington]

Best sex scene EVER

[XLolitaxholleighX]

LOVE the cardboard cutouts!

[nightmaregem]

OMG OMG OMG XD

I'm laughing so hard I can't breathe...

I mean, really? The girl is obviously on drugs... and she doesn't even know the correct term for a guy's thingy. IT'S PENIS, GET IT RIGHT. D:<

[ElunaProductions]

That....... looks very much like the forbidden forest.

I cracked up.. 

[evacormac]

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[brady6723]

I read a depressing book *Twilight book* My thoughts exactly.

[HeeCawRoo]

Oh god

this is wonderful. XD

[thevocalover01]

i can only imagine how fun this mustve been :P

[pompapartygal]

Depressing book: breaking dawn.

Me: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA BREAKING DAWN?!?! HAHAHAHAHA :DD

[Sajere12]

"And I read a depressing book."

She's holding Breaking Dawn.

I find this to be the epicest win ever.

[BajsMumien]

This is good. Really good.

[HakuReina]

More please! xDD

[HakuReina]

LMAO

[generosos87]

I love how "Dumbledore" looks like hes trying really, really hard not to laugh.

[Eren748]

OMG, this gold! I love your cold, vitriolic portrayal of Ebony, so in-character!

[SasuSakuLuvr98]

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING MOTHERFUCKERS?!"

Dumbledore is the most badass character in this entire story because of this single sentence.

[clamzcoolio]

SO spot on....love it!

[sulfuricSHAME]

Ignore the fanfic Draco looks hot in this

[Tocxica]

This is so much more coherent than the fic that it makes me sad.

...maybe I'll go cut my wrists. U kno, cuz i'm goffik.(*brain hemorrhage* )

[whatsthematterscared]

PLEASE MAKE MORE

[NaMeLeSsnOOblol]

lol shed be hot if not for the bitchyness

[dragonestea]

When she said "I saw my friends" all I could think was "kickin in the front seat, sittin in the back seat"

[hpfannumbah3]

Heh, Twilight's the depressing book. True dat.

[FellPonyz]

Hahahaha omg, make more. I'm crying this is so hilarious

[darkpeppermint]

This is really great. I demand more than just 2 episodes.

[RandomLazars01]

Those 3 dislikes must be Enoby, B'loody Mary Smith, and Draco.

[LilxPipi]

How do you smoke strawberry pocky? Looks funs :D

[RoronoaZor0]

This is freaking awesome. I can't wait until you get further into the series, especially if you literally interpret each word

[Southfield1000]

it was...Dumblydor!