How To Rap With Punchlines, Similes & Metaphors Part 1

[shady691]

this isnt a how to video!!!! CUNT FACE!!!

[dizzyafropuffable]

never been a arnold but u benidict (been a dick), triumphin like u winnin shit

niggas rappin like dey nice got me laughin like im ticklish

take a second look at dis, lyrical murder no witnesses or bodybags

as haters spit my name, i watch it spread like a shotty blast

i split BrickZ as i hammer bars wit hands i lead, lyricaly apply pressure wit ease

45 have his face meltin like pizza cheese..

[MrJeremiah56]

spyda do you remember PRIMO the white rapper you did some freestyles with and made a couple beats for a few years back? i used to come in record boy on klein with a big indian dude name Kane? I listen to the stuff we did together all the time. glad to see your still doin good. Hit me up man our raps are off the hook these days. jeremiah_edwards@att.net youv.e came a long way from selling cologne at the flea market dog BIG UPS!

[Ijerkkkk1]

dayum

[deathsk8er101]

That's awesome

[TargetHHH101]

That was beast

[IMNDEEP]

yo wisem86!! u ran that track and rhyme was tight as hell fam!!

[RapperNamedQUICK]

six sense like a nickle and penny.....beats weezy thats for sure lmao

[realcrunk]

nice!

[bpad68]

"I'm like Rodney King as far as beats go"

Ouch lol

[garybatesrsc]

Ya know ya boy get silly on these hoes like I'm soulja boy, then these girls get bare(bear) like Corduroy, cause they can picture being with me like a polaroid.

HAhaha now enjoy your laughs and pick out the wordplay and be in awe. Now when you listen to a rap track, try to understand how they are putting together their lines and you will better be able to appreciate the work they put into them.

[garybatesrsc]

Punchline raps are easy to do. All you do is come up with a double rhyme (ab,ab) with the last part of the rhyme, being part of the punchline. Then connect the two double rhymes and if you use. If you use wordplay like double meanings, and contrasting words, then that adds to the depth of the bar or line or whatever you call it. Soulja(A rhyme) boy (B rhyme), (A rhyme)Polar-oid (B rhyme) (A)Cordur-oy(B). Get the point of AB,AB,AB

[Casetopfloor]

check my rap and vid!1 month of writing and 197 hrs of editing "TSUNAMI"

[SonnyA89]

Greatest rap metaphor i've ever heard was on It Ain't Hard to Tell by Nas;

"I drank mo-wet with Medusa gave her shotguns in hell from the spliff that I lift and inhale, It ain't hard to tell".

Translation: I drank with medusa and instead of her turning me to stone, I give her a shotgun (method of smoking bud) and got her stoned.

Nothing tops that shit right there.

[Fredfiness]

@SonnyA89 Oh shit, that's deep. I didn't even look at it like that.

[DankulousTV]

@SonnyA89 damn i never thought of it that deep wit the stoned part that's a good interpretation

[stealthyo8]

im throwin words at cha that you cant understand/ don't you understand ill beat u like a bully in the playgrounds./

have you turn up missin like a girl from outa town/ you need to keep your eyes open when i come around/ because i can sniff you outa like a prison hound.

[TheLambo170]

haha i had made similar punch line with fl

[ishmaelreed123]

im on my sixth sense like a nickel and penny

[MrsNickxxJonas]

I wonder if he's spitting freestyle

[Statistiico]

You can't deny the gifts inside me like cracker jack lol

So ruff

[BsmJahsh]

raw like eddie murphy eatin on sushi? dang

[PeculiarPhenomena]

"

"...and microphones, i rock so many

I got a sixth sense like a nickel and penny

this can go to yours truly

raw like Eddie Murphy eat on sushi..."

[XxTheGreenDeathxX]

i want a mp3 :D

[Thomas59385]

didnt spyda man just battle john boot?

[vipvinnyd]

i luv this show~!

[maazy94]

I want this beat

[TupacMusicNow]

I could either shoot ya straight off the off ramp

Or I can kill you in the shower like they did in concentration camps

[XxTheGreenDeathxX]

@TupacMusicNow hahahahahaahahahhaahha nice one. How bout this. My vids are addictive just like meth, this aint pbat dis the greendeath

[TupacMusicNow]

@XxTheGreenDeathxX How about, I am a great, a lyrical slanger, battle me and I'll end you before ur chance like coat hangers

[XxTheGreenDeathxX]

@TupacMusicNow i aint no rapper but i know how to fight, cutting thu your ryhmes like muthafucking knife :d

[TupacMusicNow]

@XxTheGreenDeathxX My rhymes are hard like the wall of Berlin. I'm a Stingray so back off Steve Irwin

[XxTheGreenDeathxX]

@TupacMusicNow tupca got nuttin on me/kick him so hard in the balls hell bleed

[TupacMusicNow]

@XxTheGreenDeathxX I don't live in prison cells but if you keep frontin I'll go like ACDC and have you hearin hellz bellz

[XxTheGreenDeathxX]

@TupacMusicNow Turn Around Find a beat on the ground/but when i spit them out loud, i ll shake the whole town

[TupacMusicNow]

@XxTheGreenDeathxX I just rhyme and don't pull tricks. If you battle ill choke u til ur blue like the crips

[XxTheGreenDeathxX]

@TupacMusicNow ohhhh shhhittt.. Fuck the world and fuck you too/ youll be hiding scared like a jew...in world war 2

[NotherwiseReturns]

@XxTheGreenDeathxX no man just no.

[XxTheGreenDeathxX]

@NotherwiseReturns i know i failed there

[TupacMusicNow]

AHHH DAAYYYUMM!

[HoytLatte]

he got some bars.

[3294191]

@stevenrivera kanye west I need to know

[WolfNCrow1]

this was really good, Very Creative keep it up

[mcz420]

@vincent3541 who do you listen to

[mcz420]

@vincent3541 who's do you listen to

[vincent3541]

im not hatein i just dont like rap like this,,,you tryna take lil wayne style ,,,real rap is tellin stories i hate that simile shit....smh

[colbinhubbard]

@vincent3541 dude lil wayne stole chino xl's style

[andyeminem23]

@vincent3541 did you just say lil waynes style is similes?! fuck that, similes have been a part of hip-hop for a while, if these new clowns didnt kill hip-hop they probably killed the simile and wordplay of it but dont say its theirs

[queenofda804]

@ImMykey44 Check out K Shine vs Tay Rock- Kay Shine's metaphore was jaw dropping and you'll also like conceited vs arsenal- conceited is a punchline king! Also check out iron solomon vs jin and iron soloman vs math

[alexcage08]

I wuz da 1 who wrote that

[JoDYBR1CKZ]

Kudoz.

Allow me to intro-duce my self, my name is Jody BrickZ.



Punch linez, I spike em'

Drunken master, wit the flo. The microphone, rock it, like nasa...

and the glass alwayz half-full. the other half, just top me off.

ball hard. and never

drop the ball. N u the ring you never got.

I think you must have dropped the call.

[Jaygrosie]

nice i like this

ill add this on my fav

[Kheluva999]

SHIIIT. You need to be famous.

[1993Swagg]

Bringing more rukus than boondocks DAM that shit was fire Jet Gang Co CEO

[FenceDaGreat]

Ya, for real man that was nice! You sound like the mixtape Weezy with all them crazy-ass metaphors. Sure didn't see that one coming, keep up with the good work I like your style.

[lildmain]

I say fuck yo hood like its dick in yo coat.......... Speechless

[LBTProductions]

epic win...

[Fuzzfro007]

son, this shit is crazy good. you have influenced me to do better.

[Kingststudios]

SICKKKKK

[MsJupileR]

@LloydDanny1978 where can i get it ?

[LloydDanny1978]

@MsJupileR

Can get that book at most bookstores, or online at amazon or barnes & noble's website

[realrapshit1]

lol

[dustin187ful]

i aint ceaser milon but i got you dogs trained

[MejJalTok]

"im one bad mother like Britney Spears" lol

[videoboy4444]

@MejJalTok Wavy Boys- Dropping Bombs check it out

[Mr10101100101]

this is crazy

[brnsktingdieskting18]

i've heard way better. Diabolic: "won't stop till the world's inside my palms like Viacom" . immortal technique: "lyrically i'm infinite like possibilities, but you don't have the capability like infertility." , "The grains of my fingerprints rub against mics like match flints....Burn slow like Dutchmaster hits" Jedi mind tricks....this guys got some ill flow though.

[itzFundamental]

@brnsktingdieskting18

saying Jedi Mind Tricks is pretty broad

which emcee from JMT was it that said that?

cuz there used to be Jus Allah & Vinnie Paz & Stoupe (the producer)

but now its just Vinnie & Stoupe

[brnsktingdieskting18]

@itzFundamental Jus Allah on "sacrifice" from violent by design

[nastyboyzey]

i give him a 2 for metaphor creativity...

he keeps saying like every dam bar! wint deny it if he works on a lil more creativity his rhymes could go somewhere but just speaking on the metaphor aspect uuuh "like" can be used by anyone for anything so go far beyond tht n try not to use it..take it as a challenge to see how well u do witout tht word...same goes for "so"....Ex: im so cold that.....

take 'so' n 'like' off

[AK47Dynasty]

@nastyboyzey

metaphor is comparing 2 things by saying something is another, a simile is comparing 2 things using 'like' or 'as', most of those were simles not metaphors and you basically have to use like if you don't then it wouldn't make sense Ex: My game shine through the darkness a night light. put like before a and it makes more sense.

[xTheRiddler45x]

whats the name of this song?

[DowntownClown69]

my friend Trevor said this the other day 'Im the best but play for the worst like Danny Granger dont call me raciest, im one sixth black like a power ranger" XD

[eyadmadani]

god damn !!!

[henndog718]

I cant front this is hot yo son bless up keep going ,..

[Augastine1]

most of them are similes not metaphors

[CapcomBoyzJerk]

word this guy can fuking spit aye yo i hope i hear more from you u sick dawg real tlks 'other cats aint saying nothing but im talking like garfeild' favourite line.

[chrisadam08]

this shits hella DOPE!

[da1nonlyswiipe]

"I'll put a bullet through ya head and call it a headache"--Tippy Johnson

[selamnafikir]

i hope u enjoty this

[PeteyMan]

Nice!!!!!!!!!

[bosman1988]

sick!

[AMCpresents]

they say im one bad mutha .... like britney spears omg thats a bar ana half!!

[DolleLovez]

>.> my name is britney

ps.im black

IM NOT BAD >:O THIS MAKESS MEE FEEELLL MAD AT MYSELF

(i still like the song tho)

[lucasdasilvamaria]

"When it comes to giving Jesus props i must say / i dont have ebough bars like a cellphone in a subway"

[123batmanuel]

nice



[watdoejebigtime]

can someone explain me the sixth sense like a nickle and a penny line?

[Thaillest10dimes]

@watdoejebigtime look...a penny is 1 cent, and a nickel is 5 cents which equals six cents, cents sounds like sense (its called wordplay) i hope you see it.

[watdoejebigtime]

@Thaillest10dimes hahaha nice yea i see it now, but i just didn't know how much a penny and a nickle were worth. tnx

[HoodstarofSIB]

@watdoejebigtime hes comparing cents w/ sense and a nickle and a penny equals 6 cents which sounds like sixth sense

[kcolin6701]

cross me u dont wanna jump that hurdle, ill put a shell in ur back like a ninja turtle

[ColdBoi]

I got punchlines no proms involved, scientology flow you can say my rhymes evolved.

[thegamestight]

LMFAO im like rodney king as far as beats go LMFAO thats the funnyest shit i heard tonight

[RunFromUs519]

@thegamestight Binary Star said a line similar to this... 'Rodney King aint never felt a beat like this'

[vnt95]

wat's the beat/song? it's hot as fuck!

[mrajman34]

damn he ripped that

[babysunghodversion1]

shit is nice b

[spcruggs]

this is fuckin tight!

[CASSakaNice]

Nice...check my metaphors out.

[sikz1234567]

"Your whole crew is my feast. My crew is X-men so call me BEAST"

I just made that up is it good?

[BloodyHarry456]

@sikz1234567

not really because there is no link between the first line and the second. yea they rhyme but thats it. i dont see how they link content wise. for example papoose says, "i catch you dancing in the club, ima cock the hammer/ take your top off, turn you to a topless dancer." the lines should be about the same thing

[itzFundamental]

@sikz1234567

i wouldnt say "my crew is X-men"

because in a battle, it would be easy to flip that line on you by saing "your crew is X-men? whatr they now? women?"

or something like that hahahaha

[sikz1234567]

@itzFundamental ....That was pretty wack :T

[itzFundamental]

@sikz1234567

sayin your crew is x-men is pretty wack in the first place

[JACKplusJACK]

this shit was raw

he should get signed

[mpo9]

yea!

[zxcvbnm9874123]

@stickchart. That whole rap is ful of metaphors, so what u talkin bout

[jekhaye]

@zxcvbnm9874123 when you use "LIKE" in your line it's actually a simile an not a metaphor. so I guess what stickhart is saying is that most of the lines are similes and not metaphor..:) anyways this shit is really dope.

[stickchart]

this song is sweet, but those aren't metaphors

[Kwiquittid]

WOW nice punches

[tommythrowsdown]

im like rodney king as far as beats go.....

[stainyce230]

This shit is more than iight

[MrMac415]

this nigga is hella sick wit da metaphors blood..

[thelunatik08]

yeah those arent metaphors...theyre similes if you actually went to school then u would know! a simile is when u use 'like or as' a metaphor is when u DONT use "like or as"

[stretchluv]

@thelunatik08 That is exactly what I just said. Those are similies and I even quoted the dictionary. The point I was making is that rap music and hip hop culture has coined them as metaphors. I said don't be so technical because we could start going into rap songs and correcting grammatical errors and that would be an endless task. Don't be so technical.

[stretchluv]

@thelunatik08 After further review, I just took a quick look at your post and there were grammatical errors in your writing. New word for the group...

Projection: b.The attribution of one's own attitudes, feelings, or desires to someone or something as a naive or unconscious defense against anxiety or guilt.

Maybe it is you who should have hit the books in school instead of trolling around on the internet looking to correct others.

[stretchluv]

@SlickRawss Those are similies.

A simile is a figure of speech comparing two unlike things, often introduced with the words "like" or "as

Don't be so technical.

[CaineMusicTV]

that shit is crazy

[UndaCovaBrotha3]

The greatest playerhater u know its true

gettin more head than shampoo

[cmcbrien]

This is one i made up about my mate on xboxlive

This guy here thinks hes a real mc but is name is luke dempsey 123 did u get the name from a ceral box materoffact you were born from a ceral box your parents are dead there in hell giving the big red guy head

[DNorbsODS7]

@cmcbrien that's the worst thing I've ever read.

[HipHopIsDeadMohsin]

Ill video

[HipHopIsDeadMohsin]

My Flow is like my cum never ending

I am an inventor call me patent pending

[raydominic20]

This is Stretch Luv:

Fly as hell man. So rough so tuff! Still pumping. I'm coming to see ya!

[gohan100100]

I like it.

[UnleashedPitz]

whos rapping ???? SWEET

[izaks14]

fiyah fiyah fiyah

[linzoill]

nice

[listentwice23]

nice guys.

give me some feedback on my rap

[thangQanime]

They say I'm one bad mother...like Brittney Spears.

[itzFundamental]

@thangQanime

lmfao!

[SICkS116]

some good shit this is what the radio needs to bump!

[K1dFr3sh777]

Wow.. just wow...

[BrokenExitProduct]

Dope

[CatalystThaSaint]

HOLY FUCK!!! hahaha thats to sick

[gangstayakuza]

OOOOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH!!!!!

[GunGemini]

FIRE!

[DAvonzoAllDay]

tight

[PromoMan10]

lol

dats hot

one bad mutha ..like britney spears

[YungRizzy1]

Quack Lol

[iseerashonal]

dammmnnnnnnn

[Amino8888]

STRAIGHT FIRE

[caufeey]

You know you are the S@#$ and the Urine for this pimpin