more than just amusing or nonsense it is a poem on the irrationality of the expression and therefore the world, this simply states, "Brilliantly" how some images cxan capture you without, at first glance, making sense, the sense of it all is literally on every image, the sense of the unknown.
I like the visuals and the sound of your voice in this video. The specifics of the visuals I like especially, as by having chosen a rainy day, you get the unwilling/unknowing participants actors in this little clip to be anonymous under umbreallas mostly in a very 'befitting' way.
Cute all that trotting backwards and forward.
Sorry, I am more visual and auditory, except for voice sound = so perfect here. I almost got nothing of the meaning of the poetry.
thank you very much for your comments. you really do "get" what is important in this piece for me. as for what the words might mean, since it's a surrealist poem, it could mean nothing rational at all!
So, can you tell me as I now know the 'essence' of surrealist poetry.... what makes a person write poetry without meaning or rationality? The sound of the letters combined into meaningless words? As rain would fall ....are words to ears? In that case your visuals are very fitting indeed. So interesting!
interestingly, one of the beginnings of surrealism came when a man was trying to write a poem (or draw a picture, i don't remember), didn't like it, then tore up the paper, and when it fell on the ground the image or word-order hit him as perfect. "chance as an aesthetic principle", someone called it.
i'm glad you liked the sound and the scenes, because i really wanted them to work, since the poetry, while interesting, is very nearly nonsense - though, as is sometimes said in shakespeare, the ravings of a mad person can have a deeper wisdom hiding in them - and even if the ravings are not wise, they may be amusing. i find this poem amusing.
What's the name of this poem?
mediageneration65 2 months ago
the picture at the beginning is hilarious. great poem. great job.
SuperJewbot 4 months ago
Good job! Thanks :)
witek205 9 months ago
@witek205 Thank you!
dadasopher 9 months ago
Awesome! Thank you for posting.
Laviedusurrealisme 11 months ago
more than just amusing or nonsense it is a poem on the irrationality of the expression and therefore the world, this simply states, "Brilliantly" how some images cxan capture you without, at first glance, making sense, the sense of it all is literally on every image, the sense of the unknown.
GANDUL1965 1 year ago
Nice images
Poemsapennyeach 2 years ago
PS: Tie my veins in the bath? Should one? I think, I am just tired, dear friend.
I also meant in my first comment, I am more visual "than" auditory, or the sentence makes no sense.
lol and umbrellas, are not umbreallas... but does it matter ... hmmm (I think I am one of the 'mad birds' of this poem).
ArtNatureMusic 2 years ago
I like the visuals and the sound of your voice in this video. The specifics of the visuals I like especially, as by having chosen a rainy day, you get the unwilling/unknowing participants actors in this little clip to be anonymous under umbreallas mostly in a very 'befitting' way.
Cute all that trotting backwards and forward.
Sorry, I am more visual and auditory, except for voice sound = so perfect here. I almost got nothing of the meaning of the poetry.
How plebeian of me. :)
ArtNatureMusic 2 years ago
thank you very much for your comments. you really do "get" what is important in this piece for me. as for what the words might mean, since it's a surrealist poem, it could mean nothing rational at all!
dadasopher 2 years ago
okay, now I am learning here :)
So, can you tell me as I now know the 'essence' of surrealist poetry.... what makes a person write poetry without meaning or rationality? The sound of the letters combined into meaningless words? As rain would fall ....are words to ears? In that case your visuals are very fitting indeed. So interesting!
ArtNatureMusic 2 years ago
interestingly, one of the beginnings of surrealism came when a man was trying to write a poem (or draw a picture, i don't remember), didn't like it, then tore up the paper, and when it fell on the ground the image or word-order hit him as perfect. "chance as an aesthetic principle", someone called it.
dadasopher 2 years ago
i'm glad you liked the sound and the scenes, because i really wanted them to work, since the poetry, while interesting, is very nearly nonsense - though, as is sometimes said in shakespeare, the ravings of a mad person can have a deeper wisdom hiding in them - and even if the ravings are not wise, they may be amusing. i find this poem amusing.
dadasopher 2 years ago