Good stuff bro I entered ur contest. Didn't know u lived in TO.. im in scarb.. I did a track for this cypher too.. but yah the North York line caught me off guard hah
Don't too bad. The only thing I really noticed that you should work on are the metaphors, or the word choices for them. They weren't bad at all, they just seemed kind of basic, and dated. Either way, this isn't bad. Just keep working and I can see you doing a lot better.
Also work on your emphasis/emotion a bit more. That'd help.
If you get a chance check out my entry. Any feedback/critiques/criticism would be awesome, I'd really appreciate it. Peace!
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sik man keep it up, if you get a chance check out my vid,
btw sub'd n thumb's up'd
InkcorperatedMusic 2 months ago
killed it man gave you a like peep mine out
ernie23ful 3 months ago
Good stuff bro I entered ur contest. Didn't know u lived in TO.. im in scarb.. I did a track for this cypher too.. but yah the North York line caught me off guard hah
primetime0144 3 months ago
Good stuff man! killed it dude, definitely got my sub. I'll be checkin back for more stuff. Might try and get into your press play contest hopefully.
GoGoGadgetPinkPacket 3 months ago
Don't too bad. The only thing I really noticed that you should work on are the metaphors, or the word choices for them. They weren't bad at all, they just seemed kind of basic, and dated. Either way, this isn't bad. Just keep working and I can see you doing a lot better.
Also work on your emphasis/emotion a bit more. That'd help.
If you get a chance check out my entry. Any feedback/critiques/criticism would be awesome, I'd really appreciate it. Peace!
TotalKaosE 3 months ago
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Check my 16 out to this beat.
whoisaplus 3 months ago
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I had to hop on this cypher, check it out !
JJayFrank 3 months ago
you live in north york?
where at
KseyvcikN 3 months ago
@KseyvcikN York Village.
JAYRENZmusic 3 months ago
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come on my channel watch the video of beatbox please :D !
italiano6200 3 months ago
hey man you mind if ii call you out
Happii4rmphk 3 months ago
@Happii4rmphk Why would you do that? I just did the cypher.
JAYRENZmusic 3 months ago 16
@JAYRENZmusic
i guess a top person like yu can only do one take lol' but okay its kewl
Happii4rmphk 3 months ago
Killed it Jay!
Check out my contest to win Dr. Dre Beats Headphones!
OfficialVedoMusic 4 months ago
Download link?
0Aguada0 4 months ago
ive got you shook, michael j fox movie night
LOLOL too good
georgeofthedesert 4 months ago
LOL @ the michael j fox joke.
StringsCrusader 4 months ago
me neither, this is great !
brianl13ful 4 months ago
went in yooo
--Chico C--
chicocmusic 4 months ago
T.dot , you know whats upppp !
CheckitRozon 4 months ago
let me in on the cypher my ninja ;)
MistahhKryzzTdot 4 months ago
nice flow, and nice lyrics more impressive than most your age.
TheWayOutProductions 4 months ago
Nice
1LostMy0therAccount 4 months ago
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Cristian7hiphop 4 months ago
shoutouts to North York! yeeeee TORONTO! dope
TheSoundlotKids 4 months ago
ok!!!!
T74G 4 months ago
Nicely done.
insaneme3 4 months ago
BODIED!
CallmeSixx 4 months ago
Thanks so much guys!
JAYRENZmusic 4 months ago
Dope Bro!
DopeBoyzMuzic 4 months ago
sickk verse! and very visually appealing ;)
Raedelz 4 months ago
Tighttttt!
xDDEVENY 4 months ago
Killed It Bro! But You Shoulda Called Me OUt Haha.
PedroFloresss 4 months ago
Nice shit homie
J0nen 4 months ago
Shwag. This was dope!
-ProdiJay
ProdiJayMusic 4 months ago
@ProdiJayMusic Thanks brudduh!!
JAYRENZmusic 4 months ago