Dragon Ball: The Legend of The Seven Demons Episode 22, Unexpected Help

[TheSpritingMasters]

5:37 Me: AND HERE COMES UUB

5:41 Me: i so called it

[Simgr101]

as for you. Try to get some other people being the hero like some of the minor characters to do something. It is really poor in my oppinion where you have all the sidekicks being douches who just sit around with their mouth's open never accomplishing anything except going oh goku's so great etc. Overall I'd say at the moment 95/100.

[Simgr101]

Ok, I finally decided to catch up on your series, lol. So far it is pretty good but I still think you need a bit more than just the demon's being your huge plot. You should have something else. I'm not sure what though, lol. Say with the remake of BK that I'm doing. I have that the Cold family were actually Saiyans who were corrupted. Kakarot is evil. A demon lord who I start as minor but will grow to be the biggest threat possible etc.

[yamisupersaiyan]

@Simgr101

Simgr, is this the end of my fan fic? Is this even close to the end of my fanfic? I already know all of what you said. i appreciate all the help you've given me. In this beginning, I have little to no plot twists. I HAVE 7 DEMONS TO GO THROUGH and this is only the 2nd. Just in the next few episodes, you'll see a couple of things you didn't see coming. As for Krillin dying, you're in for a disappointment. With all due respect, your ruining my fan fic by listing these suggestions

[yamisupersaiyan]

@Simgr101

Also, I do plan to route quite a few things as dbz went. This is my show and I'm putting in what I loved from dbz and not what i hated. I'm sorry if I'm sounding a bit harsh but you're like the 7th person to suggest things to me. Don't underestimate my ability lol. If you have anything else to comment, PLEASE send it through a PM. Thanks

[fastkatthing3lol]

nice vid and maybe a weird question but are you dutch?

[adarius5]

i new uub was gonna save the day

[estebeast]

wats the song on 4:35

[yamisupersaiyan]

Super Android 13 theme

[drippa6]

Loved it but i didnt like the ending dialoug lol I thought Uub wuz black lol.He looks black, lol

[willkilz2]

@drippa6 thank you i thought the same thing

[TheShiningGundam]

Awesome Episode lmao at uub and 13"s conversation excellent job keep it up

[courtjestersc46]

Yea like Bardock said, the cursing kind of came out of no where. It didnt really seem to fit the rest of the episode. If you're gonna curse, have the character cursing steadily throughout the whole time. Otherwise, it comes off kind of weird.

o_O

[courtjestersc46]

besides that, cool episode though

[XxxBardockShinigami]

nice ep, but watch the language, I didn't really like that last dialogue

[yamisupersaiyan]

sorry Bardock but the language will stay. The japanese show had a lot of cursing and it just makes his threats stronger. Also, in funi's dub of the movie it cursed a lot

[XxxBardockShinigami]

not only on the jap dub, on the latin dub (which is one of the best IMO) they cursed as much as on the original

[DBZKingallday]

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