man dont let tha haters put u down ur good and u can only get better from here and u look 17 to me lol ;) keep it up i like hearin songs that rep a story ya kno inspiring songs like this one !!!
you have some good rhymes dawg, and errthing but like your flow is garbage and your not gonna make it big if thats what you think. im not a hater but im jus speakin the truth real talks bro but keep doing your thing
i see what you mean...i didn't practice this rap that much..i just found the beat and really thought my lyrics would work well with it..your comment is really on edge of hating especially concerning me making it big or not but i agree with the rest..
you should get someone to rap your lyrics for you
cburlet 1 year ago
you should get someone to actually give a crap about what you say...oh...snap
pkgermay 1 year ago
My Life is such a good song. Rap music is very cool.
I like the lyrics between 1:19 - 1:44. Never stop dreaming! :)
Good job!
DestinyOfALie 2 years ago
tht was hot man... u had some reely tight rymes... props dawg
Football480 2 years ago
have u eva tryed putting ur voice thru the thing tpain and lil wayne use u shuld try
guitargrindin 2 years ago
dude ur the shit man u r awesome u got some talent man. i might be white but i know good rap when i hear it
guitargrindin 2 years ago
where r u from lol
haris1says1no 2 years ago
if u wanna make ur own check my COOL EDIT PRO 2.0 for free thats what i use i have a tutorial to get it for free,
filthy shit man keep it up
SupaStarStudios 2 years ago
respect bro
nigaa 4 life fuck all haters
killandor 2 years ago
man dont let tha haters put u down ur good and u can only get better from here and u look 17 to me lol ;) keep it up i like hearin songs that rep a story ya kno inspiring songs like this one !!!
Mand3314 2 years ago
hahahaha wtf???
i thought it was a lil kid hahaha
Hyprkid82 2 years ago
hey man, i'm 17 btw haha
ur the first person who ever said l looked younger than my age as opposed to older hahaha
pkgermay 2 years ago
mad respect for gettin ont eh beat, just advice, again, work ont eh flow quality homie. use adlibs to youre advantage.
jacob123149 2 years ago
thanks man!
just like i said to damaster13, this was an old rap when i was just beginning to learn technique etc.
appreciate the comment tho
pkgermay 2 years ago
i see. jut so you know im not bullshitting when ig et thenext chance i will send you my work.
jacob123149 2 years ago
kk, sounds good
pkgermay 2 years ago
yaaa my bad im not a hater, keep it up though brahh
damaster13 2 years ago
you have some good rhymes dawg, and errthing but like your flow is garbage and your not gonna make it big if thats what you think. im not a hater but im jus speakin the truth real talks bro but keep doing your thing
damaster13 2 years ago
i see what you mean...i didn't practice this rap that much..i just found the beat and really thought my lyrics would work well with it..your comment is really on edge of hating especially concerning me making it big or not but i agree with the rest..
thanks for the advice!
pkgermay 2 years ago
good message son.
MovieMicah 2 years ago
thanks man. love the support and advice!!
pkgermay 2 years ago
This shit is Fire man keep it up. 5/5
tghetto5 2 years ago
thanks bro for the support!!
btw, i saw your vids earlier today and loved it!!!
suscribe!!!
pkgermay 2 years ago
damn man this is some deep shit. it sounds kinda like mos def wrote this. u should make more songs like this
ericbeyer1 2 years ago
hey thanks man..i'm working on alotta stuff right now so yes, there's more like this to come
btw, thanks for the support..it's always appreciated!!
pkgermay 2 years ago