One night for a Lonely Student (Short Film)

[Br0kenSaint358]

I like the long, negative spacey shots highlighting his loneliness.

Aside from that, this relies heavily on cliche's. Have you ever been a lonely college student, sir? There's a lot more to it than shitty Ben Stiller movies and empty inboxes.

[MajicPictures]

i didn't mind the content as much as i minded the absolutely terrible framing, along with so many rules of basic filmmaking broken - and not broken the way scorcese can break the rules intelligently, here they're broken simply because the filmmaker didn't know any better. also, i use the term "filmmaker" here VERY, very loosely.

[Br0kenSaint358]

Oh it's blatantly sub-amateurish/shitty. I found that too obvious to acknowledge in a reply, lol.

[MajicPictures]

haha yes true, I just found it funny when reading the video description - "Very well filmed and very emotional"

[Br0kenSaint358]

I cried watching it, for one hahaha.

[whtdudwitdrdz]

this movie is just like your life, boring

[Jets2435]

WHEN THE FUCK DID WE GET ICECREAM

[AuthenticProductions]

Good job man!

Couldnt help to notice you shot this on your own! Liked how many different shots you got out of just one room. Great POV shots!

[kaanhaylaz]

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[isaacoleary]

nice... good choice of sound track. You should check out my student films

[villagefem]

The Worst thing in the world --Is to watch someone WAITING...nice try....Keep up the good work...winks

[YorkSmith69]

I cannot believe this film has 12,000 views???? I know there is such a thing as constructive criticism, but I really don't think that now is the right time!! How can people be saying that this is good, I quite upset that I wasted 7 mins watching this and then another 2 writing a comment!!!

[Infactor5]

You needed way more shots to keep this interesting. Also, the lack of CU's really brought down the production value.

[OneWingProductions]

Sorry, I agree with the last bloke. 2 mins in and I'm kinda bored. Music is just sort of just lumped on. doesn't justify some of these comments. sorry

[gregorymahony]

Okay.LETS GET THIS STRAIGHT.

You show us the story of a LONELY, BORING, UNSOCIABLE Students life.. and you expect us to be ENTERTAINED by a guy doing nothing for 7 mins. SORRY HUNNIE.. No way. Im a student at uni i make films, im director and a BORING guy doesnt make EXCITING viewing. Your not scorcessi!

[Nunchuck]

oi oi. I'm not saying it was perfect but your the kinda asshole that said " i don;t like seinfeld its not about anything". Fact is when your a student sometimes life is this tedious. I thought it was a nice satirical look at working in between stuffing your face with cheap junkfood and watching movies.

It was self-affacing, fun and didn't take itself too seriously. I hope your approach gets tighter but good job!

[xraytwonine]

i dont get it. are we romanticizing "people who are lonely but it's ok because they believe in god" now?

[namegoesherex]

love it..it's so "real"...all these emotions in one.

[Zeroxysm]

Really enjoyed watching it.

[sparten85]

Hi fellow student,

Great vid! Look forward to seeing more vids in future

[oldman777]

great piece of work. You can feel it when you've been there.

[bobsuruncle789]

thats why you get a 360, porn and cigarettes

[freddysmitty56]

well done, i thoroughly enjoyed watching that right to the end!