Creative & Practical Writing Tips : How to Write a Business Report

[jerrycho13]

that stare pierces my soul

[XrealtimemachinimaX]

Why the fuck am i even searching this shit i feel like ill go into a comma if i watch anymore zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz­zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz­zzzzz

[drochalsey]

Praise & Critique:

A plethora of good information and briefly outlined instruction on your topic. Kudos.

However, if your going to do an "unrehearsed" video presentation; you might consider taking a speech course (or just a little locutive self-discipline) to eliminate your "umm's," which tend to detract from (what is otherwise) a nicely informative presentation.

[revoluchon]

Thanks, Laura. Very concise and straightforward. I really liked the sentence "flowery language". Is that encyclopedia in the back the Childcraft encyclopedia? I had that when I was a kid..."El mundo de los niños."

[InversionporInternet]

Interesting information.

[wongbryson]

urm.... urm.... urm....

[leegleze]

ZZZZZZZZZZZZ. Umm ... This is one of the ...umm ...most boring .... umm ... and under-rehearsed ... umm .... videos I've seen in ...umm ... a long while. Show a little enthusiasm, Girl!

[max2shay]

awesome

[Janepenson]

It's bear in mind, not bare in mind. Maybe you didn't write the subtitles but it would be a good idea to check them!