Nice song, good chords, etc. One thing though, perhaps you could try to be less 'literal' with your lyrics. There are one or two lines in there that just (to me) spoil the atmosphere, and the passion of this song. Keep it up though.
listening to this video makes me cry.... im from vampirefreaks and the press blame us for criminals.. and it hurts that people can blame me for being a criminal when all i do is help people.. it hurts knowing people from there are involved in killings such as this
It upsets me that people such as yourself are cast out from society as "freaks" when you're merely expressing your own freedom. The same thing goes for race. What, are we gonna call every African American who listens to Hip Hop a gangster and a criminal? Well the truth is, we do, all the time. All these associations have to end if have any hope with putting up with each other.
I sympathize strongly with all of you who struggle with your own take on "culture" and who want to be who they want to be and not conform to some "ideology" or "set image".What right does anyone have to single out a group of people who are doing nothing other than envying being free?
I was actally at the shoot-out, I go to Dawson and I was the other side of the Atrium. Normally I sit where Kimveer was, but so luckily this day i decided to change place and go sit with my friend.
this is one of those chance lucky finds...one of my favorite oringals i have found...they should feature it...i wonder how one goes about suggesting that?
It's really good when you see some sort of good come out these horrible acts of violence....such as the heroics of the teachers and security guards that saved kids lives that day....or like this song, its really a bright star in all this dark shit. Thanks man, keep on rocking
dude that was awesome the song I mean and your voice Peace!!!!!!!!!!!!!
flettyflakes1234 2 years ago
respect to you =] and peace to all who lost something. my heart goes out to you. x
Gellvos6 4 years ago
solide
mordakkqwerty 4 years ago
thank you for writing this.
after virginia a lot of negative memories came back to me, as well as fears.
xxemorawr 4 years ago
Sorry for spamming, but why dont you come to Dawson the next 13th September and sing it. You have a nice song and you ROCK!
phoenix1333 5 years ago
Man that was a pretty good song great tune also
thoughtlessmyth 5 years ago
Well I go to Dawson and this happened during my Birthday, I was at the other side of the atrium and I saw some people get hit by the bullets.
phoenix1333 5 years ago
Nice song, good chords, etc. One thing though, perhaps you could try to be less 'literal' with your lyrics. There are one or two lines in there that just (to me) spoil the atmosphere, and the passion of this song. Keep it up though.
TornHamstringUnited 5 years ago
Awesome tune! you really put your heart into it.
butterfly1086 5 years ago
listening to this video makes me cry.... im from vampirefreaks and the press blame us for criminals.. and it hurts that people can blame me for being a criminal when all i do is help people.. it hurts knowing people from there are involved in killings such as this
vampirepriestess 5 years ago
It upsets me that people such as yourself are cast out from society as "freaks" when you're merely expressing your own freedom. The same thing goes for race. What, are we gonna call every African American who listens to Hip Hop a gangster and a criminal? Well the truth is, we do, all the time. All these associations have to end if have any hope with putting up with each other.
sjeanmacleod 5 years ago
the call themselves gangsters
so they put the fals image over themselves
shoottheemokid 4 years ago
I sympathize strongly with all of you who struggle with your own take on "culture" and who want to be who they want to be and not conform to some "ideology" or "set image".What right does anyone have to single out a group of people who are doing nothing other than envying being free?
sjeanmacleod 5 years ago
I was actally at the shoot-out, I go to Dawson and I was the other side of the Atrium. Normally I sit where Kimveer was, but so luckily this day i decided to change place and go sit with my friend.
phoenix1333 5 years ago
Wow great tune, great job. You should send it to the Tragically Hip it would definitely be their next big hit!
rosshamm2006 5 years ago
chills, everytime....
pattygee1111 5 years ago
Canada your stupid fucking gun laws did nothing how much did the government spend 1 billion dollars ON GUN REGISTRATION HA REAL EFFECTIVE
homersbrain13 5 years ago
very inappropriate comment man
bast81 5 years ago
Keep it up man you rock! Good song feels good that people car
RIP STACEY 1988 - 2006
surfadic 5 years ago
wow your amazing
brunette06 5 years ago
ummm-i must have been drunk...originals. not oringals.
pattygee1111 5 years ago
this is one of those chance lucky finds...one of my favorite oringals i have found...they should feature it...i wonder how one goes about suggesting that?
pattygee1111 5 years ago
WOW... very emotional song.. well done :)
desiprince786 5 years ago
It's really good when you see some sort of good come out these horrible acts of violence....such as the heroics of the teachers and security guards that saved kids lives that day....or like this song, its really a bright star in all this dark shit. Thanks man, keep on rocking
dafish3 5 years ago
I literally had chillz at some point while hearing the song.
Thnx man
R.I.P Anastasia, you will alwayz be in my heart.
DjFadios 5 years ago
Très belle chanson sjean!..bea
scripelle 5 years ago
rough song to write but a nice tune...I like it dude!!!
pattygee1111 5 years ago
Keep writing, Sjean...
You rock, man!
luv ya :)
glololo 5 years ago
Love the song!
pyramidred 5 years ago