cool, i think the beginning needs work, what do you think?
USERNAMEDSOBER 1 year ago
@USERNAMEDSOBER Yup, the beginning is a little weak. Definitely needs tweaking.
jamesnxlivelife 1 year ago
wow...that is pretty awesome james! were u inspired by the slam poetry thing???
kristelrulez 1 year ago
@kristelrulez I've been into slam since high school. I wrote this a while ago actually. Maybe 5 months ago?
cool, i think the beginning needs work, what do you think?
USERNAMEDSOBER 1 year ago
@USERNAMEDSOBER Yup, the beginning is a little weak. Definitely needs tweaking.
jamesnxlivelife 1 year ago
wow...that is pretty awesome james! were u inspired by the slam poetry thing???
kristelrulez 1 year ago
@kristelrulez I've been into slam since high school. I wrote this a while ago actually. Maybe 5 months ago?
jamesnxlivelife 1 year ago