Great concept! Needed tighter editing. Can totally drop the first time about bullying with the sac lunch- doesn't move the story forward and we get it right off the bat, so watching the 2nd time around (the stronger choice) is mundane. Pacing could be slightly faster at spots.
Great concept! Needed tighter editing. Can totally drop the first time about bullying with the sac lunch- doesn't move the story forward and we get it right off the bat, so watching the 2nd time around (the stronger choice) is mundane. Pacing could be slightly faster at spots.
shayb26 2 years ago
This is really really good :)
Thanks you for sharing this with us. :D
ProjectmeTV 2 years ago