Avril Lavigne - "Girlfriend" [literal music video version]

[MCRxGreendayxMcfly]

Haha that made me laugh pmsl

[melissaduke76]

LMAO! Being a douche isn't one of the tenets of Taoism! =D For the record, I think your videos are hilarious. Your lyrics are clever and witty, and that is the entire point, isn't it?

[CeilingofStars]

Aww thank you sweetheart :)

[bulabulapesci]

Why the sound quality was a bit suspect, the lyrics were pretty good! Made me laugh :-)

[KiwNT]

try again lol

[TaoandAgain]

dumb...poor quality....no effort at all or worse maybe just NO talent for making videos at all..geeze even the original is better than this. Try a little harder next time,or maybe just try or maybe the best thing to do is to pawn your equipment - or sell it outright...

[Android18uk]

WTF, like you could do any better? The lyrics are actually very inventive and clever.

[CeilingofStars]

Aww thanks Android. :) Also, that kind of rhymed. ^_^

Also, TaoandAgain - #1 bitter people make me ;( and #2 You might want to recheck into the tenets of Taoism...pretty sure being a douche isn't part of the deal.

[TaoandAgain]

I tell you what...you move along, and I'll try to get this thing out of my head ok? I'm the one being hurt here and I don't even like that aging teen whore

[CeilingofStars]

Lol sounds like a plan :)

[albaby00]

This was an actual video? Sheesh - and I thought Bette Davis Eyes sucked.

[Android18uk]

LMAO, nice!!! you did the lady gaga literal video too right? I recognise the voice, that was funny too.

[TheSeletar]

The audio is quite bad and doesn't scan that well, but I like some of your lines. I was totally pissed off with Avril Lavigne when the third album came out.

[valvatricuspidalis]

Hope that she doesn't get salmonella! LOL XD

[whataboutredlorry]

Wow.... that video was terrible.... how awful.

[angiekje]

hehe who neeeds fe-mi-nism... good point :D

[TearsofaGhost]

zombie. zombieeee.  Flamingo!!!!

[ffishfinger]

if only this was in good quality!

[exoneuk]

Clap clap clap clap shimmy shimmy shimmy - BEST LINE EVER! XD

[MaxPayne72]

The audio is truly horrible.

[emorypaine]

wow...i just realized how bad i feel for the red head

[Dahdaly1]

FLAMINGOO!!! lmfao 5/5

[EMMAxVONxSTRATTEN]

lmao omg that was pretty damn awesome. 5/5.

[abbyrennie]

omg lol flamingo!!

[Nikias]

The lyrics are funny but the audio quality could really use some work.

[deathbykoolaid]

funny lyrics...

I have never seen this video before, its effed up.

[TheHammerOfJustice1]

not bad...

[movinupandout]

flamiiiingo!

hilarious, good job :D

[mickydeman]

ya.. umm... lyrics weren't too too bad, but you really weren't singing very well,

[ppppoill]

Brilliant Lyrics

[Burinnu]

The sound isn't great, but I love the lyrics!

[ALCUBILLA23]

what??? this sucks buuu!!!!

[SuperHells]

haha i actually really liked that one!

[haillex0]

LOL! zombie, zooommmbiieeee!

[LittleWhiteKitten]

hahahaha zombie!

[chemicalism]

That was awesome - redo it with better audio and it'll rock even more!!!

[roxNRG]

really try to get the qaulity level up it could be a real good one just crappie qwaulitie;)

[PinballWiizard]

lmfao you did a really good job.

[DivineAna]

Haha, that is awesome! I've been going through a bunch of the LMMV genre, and a lot of them suck-- you've actually done a good job with the lyrics. It's true a version with better sound would be better, but eh-- I still enjoyed it. Especially how pumped Avril looks with the "Who needs feminism?!" comment at the end. Awesome destruction of this ridiculous video.

[dag0012]

bad quality sound

[OHBOYitsMegan]

hahahha "my head is in a dryer."

[Joeangel70]

lol dis is a stupid video

[NinjaKiwi911]

i like the lyrics. try and make another version with better sound

[PlaidmanUTube]

It's good, need more confidence in the delivery :)

[SaySimonSaid]

lol

[go8smosh]

lmao i loved it

[badam420]

good lyrics but this bitch cant sing for shit ^-^

[emanuelzhimrules]

hahaha fucking funny!!!!

[crazyasacoconana]

That's pretty funny, but the sound is bad quality. Also, maybe put the subtitles in yellow?

But good anyway!

[gayx7face]

the quality is terrible, but the song is fucking hilarious! I don't think I've laughed as much with the other literal vids than this one. great job!

[RockinJm262]

needs better sound but ill give it a 5 cus it was funny

[caramelxkitty13]

haha! even if the sound was bad that was so fucking funny!

[dant697]

omg that was soo funny

[doggiedog142]

i dont even care if the terrible sound quality gave me a headache, that was fucking hilarious!

[carmenkaylynne]

The lyrics are great! I laughed throughout the whole thing!

[teom78]

Terrible sound...

I really can't enjoy the song...

:-(

[unitard08]

terrible!!

[KateB819]

This one had me laughing every few seconds.  Great job, lol

[GlitterGlamRock]

Awesome job, but the sound is the only put-down. Great lyrics, I could see this become a featured video once the sound is better(:

[ParadoxAndPlaid]

this is really good! but the sound quality isn't too great. I've always been so angerd by this music video. good job.

[IPulledTheTrigger18]

"hope she doesn't get salmonella"

classic

[kidparkerbanned]

My head is in a dryer.....I rick rolled

[skom624]

writing was awesome!

[pantslesswrock]

Great writing.

[devorameoutedecifro]

"Who needs feminism"?

Pure gold!

[selenya]

Funny!!

[chibicelchan]

Pretty sure that's a sign of a concussion!

LMAO. AWESOME.

[patpettite]

Keep trying as you seem to have something, but the sound ....not good

[samalarina]

awesome lyrics! you only spent 1/8 of the time writing them? the sound does kinda suck but maybe you should try singing with a karaoke track so the actual song isn't in the background.

[ThePeachMagnolia]

"Who needs feminism?" Lol.

[eringobragh91]

Haha, I love the lyrics. Too bad the sound wasn't the best, but I love your writing!

[morikahjo]

woah..wth!!! I just realized wen watching this video that they are in a portipotty at the end! are they gonna do it in there or what?!?!?!  LOL

[MsNova25]

i actually prefer this one to "true colors", despite the sound quality. it's not as classic a track, but it's more accessible and the lyrics are funnier (and while the "true colors" one just mocks the video, this one mocks the vid AND avril - hysterical!). i concur with everyone who's suggested doing it again with a karaoke version if you can - it'd be up there with dascottjr's LMVVs! :D

[CeilingofStars]

Aha so that makes the difference. You can't make fun of Cyndi Lauper! Maybe I'll look into doing some Ashlee Simpson...or God forbid, Paris Hilton ^_^

[kc0902]

"CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP SHIMMY SHIMMY SHIMMY"

Great video. I loved it all but that part really stuck out.

[hsr89]

HILARIOUS!

[TiagoNomad]

I thought I wasn't going to like that at first, but I did. That was very good. If you ever manage to find a karaoke version, I'm pretty sure it will be perfect. ;)

Oh, and nice lyrics too. I doubt Avril could come up with something as intelligent. Kudos to you.

[missbriteside26]

this is great!!

[dantedoomsday]

"Hope that she doesn't get salmonella." lol

[theherofactor]

The sound may be a bit iffy, but the lyrics are amazing! Great job!

Zombie!

[Tifani]

I loved this! Zombiiie, Zombiiie, Flamingo!

I agree, though, that maybe a karaoke track would've been an improvement. I ended up watching with the sound off because the original vocal track was distracting. I had trouble reading the subtitles in pink, though.

[xxdevious6angelxx]

Not bad, dub out the real lyrics in the bg and it'd be totally kick ass, but not a bad one.

[CeilingofStars]

Wasn't possible, I tried. :( It was all center-panned.

[shamandalie9]

you should totally try and make a better quality version of this, the lyrics you made up are f'ing amazing and if it was better quality I think it'd prob end up being played on tv like the total eclipse of the heart video!!

[CeilingofStars]

Oh wow, thank you so much. :) I'll think about it, but probably I'll just keep making new ones (check out my Cyndi Lauper one!) and hopefully improve as I go. ^_^

[koala1209]

i mean afer 3:26

[koala1209]

and the scene after 2:26

[koala1209]

the Golf course scene was SO FUNNY.

[beatmania3rdmix]

1:48 = Ashlee Simpson at the Orange bowl gesture!!!

[itubeyoudont]

lol at zombieee zombieeee lol great job!!!

[PopeKurt]

not bad; i certainly laughed.

[kckthx]

Tif! That's awesome! lol! Gabe approves as well.

[CeilingofStars]

Thank you my love :D

[cowsgohippo]

Ahaha, my dad laughed at this one.

And he's hard to make laugh!

I love it.

[Kyubikarnage]

lol XD

[terrafreaky]

GREAT stuff, VERY funny!! :)

[CeilingofStars]

Thanks so much!

[FlamestrixWindfyre]

kick ass job on your first video and what a video to start off with!!! I'm quite partial to Avril myself!!! Thanks for entertaining!!!

*w00t*

[CeilingofStars]

Haha thanks! I know I love her too, but sometimes she makes me shake my head in disbelief, haha.

[DeviaSol]

This completely cracked me up. xD

[CeilingofStars]

awesom ^_^!! <3

[Bhilithinn]

It's very clever :). And very hilarious. The only problem (as I'm sure you already know) besides the audio quality is that the original song is clearly heard behind your vocals.

[CeilingofStars]

Thank you so much! :D I know, couldn't find a karaoke version that didn't have the background vocals, and it's all center-panned so I couldn't remove the vocals without making the sound quality worse, haha. :)

[lauraism]

hahahaha that was hilarious xDDD

[CeilingofStars]

Thank you love. :)

[WCityMike]

Great job, although I think you need to take another shot at the audio ... not because of the singing quality but because of the recording quality and the rustle towards the end.

Hilarious parody lyrics, though, and that's what sets you apart.

[CeilingofStars]

Thanks :D

I know, the audio really does suck, but I did like 20 takes, and unbelievably this was the best one. O_O The problem was that the background track sang all through that "rapping" part and so I had to get the mic closer to me during that part so you could hear me...sigh...

Sorry for the novel, haha. Next video will be better, I promise! I'm glad you like the lyrics <3

[kdawgjr]

i lol'd

[CeilingofStars]

That makes me feel good. :)

[dascottjr]

That had a healthy supply of terrific going on. Bravo! The pink letters were a nice touch. Welcome aboard! :-D

[CeilingofStars]

OMG dacott, thank you so much!! You are my inspiration, and on the fast track to becoming a celebrity; it means so much to me that you enjoyed it. <3!