thanks for the feedback, man! this is something we did for a lark. the trick is, it was all improvised. no script. We were rolling on the floor between takes because all of these responses came right off the top of George's head.
We could cut it shorter, but... it was just done for fun. Thank you so much for watching!
2. Make it shorter! over 10 minutes of clever improved lines with two guys in chairs isn't interesting enough for that long. if this was 3 minutes, it would be great.
Sorry if i came across condescending, boss. Just trying to help out a fellow filmmaker. Keep it real and keep up the good stuff.
But a few pointers, you seem like a guy that can accept constructive criticism, and I'm feeling a little chipper.
1. Editing flaw. In the interview there are breaks in the audio where there isn't even any background noise. you can fix this by simply taking room noise and overlapping it with the audio in the digital editor to give it more of a smooth and professional feeling. less distracting.
thanks for the feedback, man! this is something we did for a lark. the trick is, it was all improvised. no script. We were rolling on the floor between takes because all of these responses came right off the top of George's head.
We could cut it shorter, but... it was just done for fun. Thank you so much for watching!
bramity101 1 year ago
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haha, yeah i figured it was improvised. A great improviser. funny as hell. very natural. And kudos on the costume and legit set!
Epic beard, by the way.
BeRussFour 1 year ago
2. Make it shorter! over 10 minutes of clever improved lines with two guys in chairs isn't interesting enough for that long. if this was 3 minutes, it would be great.
Sorry if i came across condescending, boss. Just trying to help out a fellow filmmaker. Keep it real and keep up the good stuff.
BeRussFour 1 year ago
Pretty damn clever, if i must say.
But a few pointers, you seem like a guy that can accept constructive criticism, and I'm feeling a little chipper.
1. Editing flaw. In the interview there are breaks in the audio where there isn't even any background noise. you can fix this by simply taking room noise and overlapping it with the audio in the digital editor to give it more of a smooth and professional feeling. less distracting.
BeRussFour 1 year ago