Hansel and Gretel (stop motion animation)

[MultiLoren23]

awesome! i used to love this story when i was little!

[kayleighOMG]

this is really good :) the music got a little too loud over the top of the narration but the animation is really cute

[lucycheeese]

THIS IS SO AWESOME

[girlwithafunnyhat11]

You have a wonderful sense of humor, but your narration was a little rough in a few places. Try not to slur your words too much. Aside from that, I greatly enjoyed your take on the story; the faces were probably my favorite part of the animation, especially the witch's transformation.

[SergeantCooper]

@girlwithafunnyhat11 Yeah, I wasn't completely happy with the narration, but I'm mostly being assessed on the animation, so I didn't spend too long on it.

This is really useful feedback, thank you! :D

[MrConcretehumper]

Very good effort. first time i have heard hansel & gretel ever. keep up good work

[blinkeypanda]

This is nice! Very cute, and interesting. I like the addition with the faces, it's soo cute. Sorry, i'm no good at feedback, my vocabulary is limited to cute and nice

[the0ryyy]

joe it's michael d00d, if you want i can help you gain a LOT of subscribers! (got 563 subs since last september) i'll put you in my other channel's box, because you deserve way more than 24 subscribers, also amazing work :D

[SergeantCooper]

@the0ryyy That would be awesome! Cheers! :D