Someone See Me

[seanallenmccoy]

Brilliant.......please consider the possibility of an agnostic vision where we simply don't know, but are allowed to hope in our ignorance......seanallenmccoy

[VisionGhostPoet]

Brilliant? Nah, pleasantly fallible! Thank you!

[fellowtuber123]

I just GOTTA come back and watch this again!!! Just amazing VG, just absolutely amazing...

[VisionGhostPoet]

Wow sweetheart, thank you :)

[yamicazie]

You should check out John Frusciante's Will to death......... its a song about a guy only having death as a reason to stay alive, and he sings about people getting slaughtered and stuff, its a powerful song man, really check it out and tell me what you think. (honestly i think you could write some good powerful songs man really i truly believe that)

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thanks for that, I'll check it out, thank you!

[TrishB323]

Hey, decided to get on and have a look at your stuff after you gave me your user name on Friday. very deep poetry! Very well portrayed.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Oh its you hi there!! Thank you so much!! :)

[fellowtuber123]

When I close my eyes and just listen to this, I swear, it takes me to a whole other place...The music with the combo of you voice just...takes me away...

[VisionGhostPoet]

That's the coolest thing I've heard all day, thank you so much!!

[fellowtuber123]

You're very welcome! :-)

[Morgana0x]

Great poem and video. I love the lines 'No more a place for me in this world Oh god someone see me'.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you very much! :)

[jsmxwll]

This reminds me of when I read "Johnny Got His Gun" a while back. Much like the internal monologues of Joe Bonham. Very well done. -Max

[VisionGhostPoet]

I'll have to check that book out, thank you!

[AsjaVampire]

I want to thank you, that I could see this, that I could hear this.

I can close a dark period of my life now...

I have big respect for you, for your way of sharing so much beautiful poetry...!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Ok that has to be the most incredible thing anyone as ever said to me so far in relation to my work, thank you so much!!

[AsjaVampire]

Oh my god, how beautiful

Never been so wordless after listening to a beautiful poem

I recognize some things in this, things from my past...

Really, I'm wordless 'cause it's so beautiful

[VisionGhostPoet]

Im so glad this touched you, it means a lot, truly, thank you so much!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you very indeed Melinda!

[fellowtuber123]

Very, VERY well done. Brilliant!!! Just absolutly brilliant! I liked the echo effect too. How do you do that anyway? :-)

[VisionGhostPoet]

I used GoldWave and PowerDirector! Thanks for your kind comments petal!

[fellowtuber123]

Ah, thank you.

[jasminmommy]

very deep ...

brilliant work ;) 5*****

[slushpuppy777]

I LOVE your style of videos!!!

[VisionGhostPoet]

I really appreciate you saying that, thank you!! :)

[Zrina11]

Amazing. Loved it.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[mermel112]

Very well done

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you! :)

[fred00021]

wow so good i like your style

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thanks Fred, glad to have you on board!

[CalmRage1]

wow, this was very good! u definetly have vision as i have been at that point one time in my life! - fuzzy soul tiger, Mr. PJ

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!!

[SmilingMoonBreeze]

hiya, saw this video on my recommended, hope you are fine. hello.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Recommended? Thats very cool indeed, thank you so much!!

[LadySionainn]

Riveting, intense, compelling and mysteriously honest.

Your words make me proud to be a writer myself. Well done my Irish friend ^^ <3 xx

[VisionGhostPoet]

Wow, thank you so much for that.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you for your comment, much appreciated!

[tinySpectacle]

What a great poem and the video adds just that right touch of storytelling. Excellent.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you so much petal!

[leftgreenthumb]

Perhaps we are speaking to each other in our poetry, cause this one spoke to me! :) Great work.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Aw thank you!

[FlamestrixWindfyre]

Beautiful, simply Beautiful!!!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[XaveJamesGrey]

Nice editing all around.. images, audio, words. Enjoyed it.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thanks James!

[IvyBedouin9]

This piece is very strong get gentle like that embrace from the angel. Wonderful video, I must go wash the knot away from my throat with a warm cup of tea.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you Ivy.

[viudanegraaa]

Awesome !!!! 5*****

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[Nigelcf]

Fantastic poem i totally relate to.

[VisionGhostPoet]

I think more people do than they care to admit, thank you Nigel!

[saintfletcher]

I see you, and I've been there. 3 times, and I nearly left this world overdosed, flatlined only returned by frantic doctors insisting that it was not time. I remember the faces of the ambulance drivers and doctors giving me narcan. They were the angels. In all cases they were ready to run away as some get violent as they don't want to come back. But I just lied there and said "you are an angel". I was so embarassed, I never did it again after the third time. Blessings FLETCHER

[VisionGhostPoet]

It really is not worth it, I remember myself how stupid I felt I went through it. Stay safe my friend!

[elviradark6]

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[VisionGhostPoet]

It's looking good sweetheart, looking good! :)

[elviradark6]

ohh yeah =)

[PaulBradford13]

I really enjoyed this.

[VisionGhostPoet]

It makes my day all the more so, when I hear things like this, so glad you liked this. Thank you Paul!

[onegroovycharmer]

This was a very expressive poetic emotion captured on video...intense & moving...stirring the darkled senses of sorrow within each of us.....wonderful poem....

Peace, Love & Inspirations

Vickie

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you very much for a truly ideal comment, much obliged to you! :)

[ALOHASTELLA]

...it can seem deathly peaceful on the other side ....

however...

those who remain are the ones the will bare the pain of the loss of the loved ones untimely death...

very profound ...

deep ...

moving ...

creative...

thank you for befriending me...

[VisionGhostPoet]

Your welcome and thank you for your comment, much appreciated.

[NewBrazdolph]

Robin? you´re ..not....dead..are you?

[VisionGhostPoet]

How could a ghost die? hehe :)

[ALOHASTELLA]

especially ...a VISION of one... (ghost)

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you! :)

[JaneLearmonth]

oh,,,and 5* and a fav' ;)

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thanks!

[JaneLearmonth]

This resonates very deeply with me. Brilliant. MORE MORE MORE!!

[VisionGhostPoet]

This was perhaps the deepest I've gone I think, oh yes there will be more.

[Kabuki0009]

Very powerful stuff I love it, an excellent piece all in all*****stars; ) + faved

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you very much, yea this was my first stab at movie making by myself, it's ok but gonna get to grips with all this new software! Cheers :)

[Kabuki0009]

Then it's damn good for a first time stab, btw what new software are you using?

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thanks, I use, CyberLink Power Director, Goldwave Sound Editor and Multiquence.

[dashpoet]

Very strong video, terrific title.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you Dash! :)

[samdougken]

GREAT POEM GREAT VIDEO.

It's in caps because I love it!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thats cool, thank you so much!

[xxxSunbeamxxx]

This is powerful. Anyone that has ever stepped near that thin line between life or death or been close to someone that has will be able to identify with this. You really capture amazingly well that sense of invisibility one can feel in moments of desperation.

Great job, sir. 5 stars seem hardly enough but they are yours - with an extra sunbeam or two thrown in to light the darkness a little :)

Sunbeam :)

[VisionGhostPoet]

Wow! Thank you so much for your comment! Oh and well done on your exposé in all those newspapers, thats great!

[xxxSunbeamxxx]

Oh - thank you kindly for that 'well done'....:) It is all a lot of fun - I am a very lucky lady :)

I see in the comments this is an early attempt for you in movie making - you have real talent in this - I can hardly wait to see how your creativity blossoms forth in future vids...I'll be watching!

Sunbeam :)

[VisionGhostPoet]

I wont fail to deliver sweetheart! I'm going to take a risk and ----> *kiss*

[MessiahChaos]

very well put together, imagery fit so well.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you very much MC.

[elviradark6]

so sad...suicide leaves so much pain behind..

excellent, wake up call

[VisionGhostPoet]

That's true, thank you!

[liz1060]

Very well developed video and a thoughtful viewpoint for a multi-faceted subject.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you so much for saying that Liz!

[MrDaMan]

100% great production VG, good coverage of a timeless theme. We are all grains of sand alone on the beach. :-)

[VisionGhostPoet]

But also we make the difference of aesthetics and draw the crowds come rain or shine! Thank you! :)

[hswatnik]

The guy sleeping in his bed is realistic-

[VisionGhostPoet]

That would be me! :o)

[fuzzylogic27]

Very thought provoking and emotive... liked it very much.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you so much!

[gronkar66]

I feel something when I watch this. And I've felt like this before. I remember: It was when I watched "The Bladerunner" for the first time! and I love the movie! Beautiful!

[VisionGhostPoet]

One of my fav movies. Rutger Hauer's character right at the end when he released the dove, like a soul winging it's way to the heavens at the moment he died. I remember that feeling well! Thank you!

[johnburnap]

i see you and feel you!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[klmbaby4]

Dayum...that was deep!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[13thDimension]

i sEE

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[rozeboosje]

Is this based on reality? In that case I hope things are looking up a bit.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Oh no all is well! Thakss

[ladyofire]

Very interesting...the vocals are awesome...Bravo!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you sweetheart!