Persuasive Speech on the harms of Pop

[1quickWS6]

speech is garbage

[sissynana86]

Hi there! I'm from Oregon and had to view a Persuasive Speech for my SP 111 course. I chose yours. I thought you did a pretty good job of projecting your voice, making eye contact, and your rate was nice. My biggest suggestion would be to work on adding more transition words or phrases between topics instead of just saying "Juice", etc to introduce a topic. Thanks for posting your speech online for everyone to view and learn from.

[kcfrierson]

A lot of us in the DEEP South just call it a Coke...even if it's a Pepsi, Sprite, 7-up...makes no difference..we'd probably still call it coke any how...LOL!! BTW..we were told to watch this as an assignment for our public speaking class :)

[Proverbs1533]

liter of cola

[LostBoyRebel]

here in california we just call it soda

[MockEmpire]

good speech.. it's a conspiracy i tell ya!

pop

[jkane1341]

POP......... sounds like a slang word. 

[MoniRokse]

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[jmmjman252]

yeah it's pop. soda is something you bake with..

[kpopgrrl]

@jmmjman252

No, that's baking soda.

[Gixbit]

Gunna go home today and tell my kids they're gunna get brain tumors and die or get fat and undesirable to the opposite sex.

That'll fix them.

[xxxismeny]

yo your speech was freakin awesome

[EonPerchx]

Pop sounds so weird. Soda. 8)

[hannahk426]

Coke if you're in Oklahoma

[bossyboots221]

awesome dude, i'm doing my 11th grade english research paper on pop

[SuppaSapien3]

Nice job. I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!

[liuchaquan]

I was hoping it was a speech on the harm of pop music!

[hannahk426]

LOL!!!!!

[Gothicmoocow]

I call it pop and soda? i live in az... 0.o? then again my sista lives in chicago.. /idk.

[silverleaves]

Yeah, and it's Pop in Michigan. Deal with it. I honestly don't see why it's such an issue.

[insertsongtitlehere]

Lol, yeah at first I was like "pop?" but then I saw this comment and I understood. (I'm from the DC area).

Other than that little confusion, this is good!

[hannahk426]

It's not an issue. It's just funny that we all call it different things. Good subject for a persuasive speech by the way.

[papastiffy]

its soda damnit. they call it pop in like montana.

[bentonwood22]

carbonated beverages.

[xander222]

it's soda damnit.

[xander222]

it's soda damnit.

[pimpsta220]

hi louise,sose,sophie,reuben,keen­en

luv yues.

good aftermorning..

[DamDisIsShiznats]

SODA! Haha Pop... weird...?

[cocotour07]

good subject and well written but you could have rehearsed it more. i got a little annoyed everytime you said uh/um, which happened a lot

[tinyK10]

hahaha... are you from the pittsburgh area!!! lol... you say pop! haha. nice.

reminds me of my brother. =p

[howslyfe]

my friend down here whos from michigan refuses to call it anything other than pop. good speeches, i have one due in a couple hours which i need to start so... thanks for the inspiration.

[papastiffy]

lucky jerk, you wrote this seven months ago so your done with yours, i have one due tomoro and im getting nervous just watching these speeches on youtube =[ damn i hate these things.

[jaimesandoval1988]

Are you conveying that all sugar drinks are nefarious to the body or just soda "pop"?

[siesprowse]

I am a Junior at Abilene High School, in Kansas. I am taking this night class public speaking thing for college credit. I found this by searching for "Very Good Speach" on the youtube search engine. =P

You did quite well, by the way. Much better than I could do. I am very nervous whenever I do any sort of speaking.

[kittykarla55]

Pop! Cute! I didn't know what the speech would be about, I was looking for a speech to critique for my speech class. In texas we just call it soda. You might want to consider using regional slang in speeches, but here in texas it would be a good intro. Everyone would think that it's cute.

[silverleaves]

Wow, two people in one day wanting to critique my speech, very cool! Yeah, we always call it pop up here in Michigan. I thought I mentioned soda once or twice, sorry about the confusion!

[SammySoSideMcBicuit]

@kittykarla55 soda is considered slang in certain places...they are both considered the same thing...i know what they both are

[poetx213]

gjob.

[royalicecream]

nice job

[AJSchwem]

You forgot the most important part!

As all things bad for you tend to be, pop is delishus.

[silverleaves]

... delicious? lol

[AJSchwem]

DE-LISH-US.