Sounds like something i have thought about... just not with.. Joe... or anyone with a name. Haaha.. yea i think everybody has those times:) yup. i didn't even lissen to the song... i don't even know how i came to here... weiiiird.
Sorry about all the controversy about the "rated r" stories. My intention in making these was not to have "sleeze" oozing out of them. I have created these purely for entertainment purposes. If a parent is upset by these, I apologize, but I cannot control who reads these. I have made every story that contains adult content clearly labeled and asked that you not be offended. I'm sorry for any offense, but perhaps you should monitor your children more carefully if you're worried about this.
We just weren't expecting this change of direction from appropriate young teen writing to adult explicit that's all. Abercrombiegirl is signing off until she's older. You are right. It is our job to protect her.
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my dad dosent even no wat youtube is my dad dosent even know r password to log on and we dont have one ha ha hes not stupid he just dosent use the computer EEVR!
This is the Dad of Abercrombiegirl14 who is also Abercrombiegirl34 and several other names evidently. We didn't mean to start a "curse fest" with the group. Abercrombiegirl is 12 years old and we gave her some latitude to see if she could handle the responsibility safely. We did monitor what she was doing (sorry kids, we do have ways to do this) and up until this one change in the story, everything she was doing was appropriate.
This is the Dad of Abercrombiegirl14 who is also Abercrombiegirl34 and several other names evidently. We didn't mean to start a "curse fest" with the group. Abercrombiegirl is 12 years old and we gave her some latitude to see if she could handle the responsibility safely. We did monitor what she was doing (sorry kids, we do have ways to do this) and up until this one change in the story, everything she was doing was appropriate.
Wow I'm so disappointed. My daughter has really enjoyed reading your writing and I've felt good about letting her read on the internet - even felt that you were inspiring her to write. She's little - and now that you've turned this into adult content (and she read it, thanks) I have to go back to sensoring... Too bad you couldn't just keep to terrific, interesting, fun...had to jump on the sleeze wagon)
Well, thats why it says 'RATED R' On the page, which obviously means that it isnt meant for children. If she's little, then YOU should be the one monitoring her. She shouldnt even understand this stuff.
OK just so EVERYBODY knows.... that was my mom and i have no idea how she got my password to my account... im 15 years old and ive told my mom to fuck off ok?
it was good.. was that their first time? for girls the first time is a pretty painful experiance.. but in a good way! though the impulse is strong to want to go fast it is utterly to much to do...it is also so tight it can hurt the guy too... messy business sex is!!
i never knew you could make joe sound so SEXY... I'm waiting for his delicate look and SEXY body! luv joe soooo much. i just don't wanna have to think about having sex with him tho.
you know wat fantasywriter you should write a love story about kevin i love kevin he so cool i noticed no one writes a love story about him if you do can you make him fall in love with a girl named adrianne (my name) lol
AS YOU'VE PROBABLY HEARD, THE JB HATERS ARE TRYING TO GET JB REMOVED FROM YOUTUBE! WE HAVE TO STAND UP FOR OUR BOYZ! THEY TOOK BURNIN UP (but we got it back, haha! in their face!!!!) AND NOW SOS GONE! THEY ARE STEPPING UP AND TAKING ON A BIGGER TASK! WE HAVE TO KEEP JB WITH US ON YOUTUBE! TO THE HATERS: REMEMBER, JB FANS NEVER GO DOWN WITHOUT A BATTLE! **put this under EVERY video you watch**
What if Joe And Demi saw this LOL
LoveLikeWoah1001 1 year ago
I found myself actually leaning closer and closer towards the screen!!! haha x
MyHeart2JoeJonas 1 year ago 3
my love
rabeell 1 year ago
that was a pretty damn hott description
SupernovaPrincess 1 year ago
love you am
sk8mental201 1 year ago
love youtube
sk8mental201 1 year ago
wats this song??
michellengo7 1 year ago
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA sorrry. and i thought my life was pathetic. yours is clearly more pathetic. ahhh :) what a relief.
" FASTER JOE FASTER!" hahahahaha i just peed myself.
xjessicaxashleyx 1 year ago
LMFAO.
I just died a little bit inside laughing at these comments :)
BAHAHAH, the dad/mom... Really?? Lmfao.
I cant wait til that girl gets knocked up :)
CouldILoveYouMore 1 year ago
Love It
Look At Mine Too :D
MsStoryMaker 2 years ago
omg, mine sounds exactly the same!
oops im drooling... :p
puppymuppyabc 2 years ago
lol.. :] hahaha.. this is funny.. hilarious!!! passions..
ColeLene47 2 years ago
lamo
9021cutiepie 2 years ago
Haha this just makes me laugh
NickJonasLuvaGal7 2 years ago 2
I can't stop laughing!!
TheWebkinzTelevision 2 years ago
My knight in skinny jeans. LOL! Love it. :)
hollywoodifyable 2 years ago 4
wow that happened rather fast lol
good job, this chapter got me hooked.. i mean, why wouldn't it? xD
DizFiz 2 years ago 2
aww snap
metrojonas116 2 years ago 2
Sounds like something i have thought about... just not with.. Joe... or anyone with a name. Haaha.. yea i think everybody has those times:) yup. i didn't even lissen to the song... i don't even know how i came to here... weiiiird.
Riannajean13 2 years ago 4
what song is playing
ebee225 2 years ago
Say OK by vanessa hudgens :)
kiweequeen 2 years ago
Sorry about all the controversy about the "rated r" stories. My intention in making these was not to have "sleeze" oozing out of them. I have created these purely for entertainment purposes. If a parent is upset by these, I apologize, but I cannot control who reads these. I have made every story that contains adult content clearly labeled and asked that you not be offended. I'm sorry for any offense, but perhaps you should monitor your children more carefully if you're worried about this.
fantasywriter101 2 years ago 6
GREAT STORY!
TaylorParker91692 2 years ago
ok then... whats up with all the nasty comments?
xxcrzychic96 2 years ago 2
We just weren't expecting this change of direction from appropriate young teen writing to adult explicit that's all. Abercrombiegirl is signing off until she's older. You are right. It is our job to protect her.
abercrombiegurl4 3 years ago 4
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take a chill pill 12 to you dont see my dad in my acCout do you MANWHORE
teamdemiselena9697jb 3 years ago 8
hes just tring to b a good parent! gosh! maby ur dad does when u dont no stop being bitches
awsome2gether 2 years ago
no he doesn't he fpnt know my PASSWORD AND HE TRUSTS ME ASLONG AS I DONT GO OUT AND DO IT !!
teamdemiselena9697jb 2 years ago
ok just sayin im sorry if affended u
awsome2gether 2 years ago
it's k =] hehe
teamdemiselena9697jb 2 years ago
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my dad dosent even no wat youtube is my dad dosent even know r password to log on and we dont have one ha ha hes not stupid he just dosent use the computer EEVR!
peachshakes 2 years ago
man dude chill
that dude was write take a chill pill you MANWHORE!
joejonaslova10102929 2 years ago
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This is the Dad of Abercrombiegirl14 who is also Abercrombiegirl34 and several other names evidently. We didn't mean to start a "curse fest" with the group. Abercrombiegirl is 12 years old and we gave her some latitude to see if she could handle the responsibility safely. We did monitor what she was doing (sorry kids, we do have ways to do this) and up until this one change in the story, everything she was doing was appropriate.
abercrombiegurl4 3 years ago
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This is the Dad of Abercrombiegirl14 who is also Abercrombiegirl34 and several other names evidently. We didn't mean to start a "curse fest" with the group. Abercrombiegirl is 12 years old and we gave her some latitude to see if she could handle the responsibility safely. We did monitor what she was doing (sorry kids, we do have ways to do this) and up until this one change in the story, everything she was doing was appropriate.
abercrombiegurl4 3 years ago
well sir you better stop and trust your daughter just let her be and dont be a b*tch manwhore
teamdemiselena9697jb 3 years ago 5
hmm
abercrombiegurl4 3 years ago
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Wow I'm so disappointed. My daughter has really enjoyed reading your writing and I've felt good about letting her read on the internet - even felt that you were inspiring her to write. She's little - and now that you've turned this into adult content (and she read it, thanks) I have to go back to sensoring... Too bad you couldn't just keep to terrific, interesting, fun...had to jump on the sleeze wagon)
abercrombiegurl4 3 years ago
Well, thats why it says 'RATED R' On the page, which obviously means that it isnt meant for children. If she's little, then YOU should be the one monitoring her. She shouldnt even understand this stuff.
NewYorkiChic 3 years ago 6
ummm........i kinda agree with both of u.
jonaslover296 3 years ago
shut the fuck up lady
sharpaylover656 3 years ago
OK just so EVERYBODY knows.... that was my mom and i have no idea how she got my password to my account... im 15 years old and ive told my mom to fuck off ok?
abercrombiegurl4 3 years ago 6
wtf? well your daughter shouldn't be on Rated R stories if she doesn't know what sex is sir.
Jonasfamilyseries 2 years ago
imagine if joe read this........AWKARD!!!
Superstarlexie07 3 years ago 38
omg i can just imagine the look on his face! that would be hilarious! lol
joejisahottamale 3 years ago 7
omj that would be sooooooo funny
aliciasayzhi 3 years ago
HIL-AR-IOUS!!!!!!!!! he would probably freak out.
jonaslover296 3 years ago 2
yeah when he reads these fanfics i wonder how he feels lol
number1JBandJoefan 3 years ago 3
definitely AWKWARD!!!!!
MusicLuvr78 3 years ago
he read one of them lol look it up jonasbrothersmusic read one f these lol and it was a jemi one wich only meanss ....lol
nickjluva97 2 years ago 5
where? and when? tell me what to look up.
jennlovesjonas95 2 years ago
lol anyone can add it to say that on any video... its really simple... it want real..
cassiekearns 2 years ago
@Superstarlexie07 hahahahaha ha *cough cough cough cough cough* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *cough* ~cassandra
prankpatrol89 1 year ago
Guys joe jonas will be like thirty before you're old enough to have sex with him.
gothica100o 3 years ago
depends on how old you are. but mostly yeah :) if he was still sexy, i would still do it with him. i mean come on, its fucking joe jonas!
jonaslover296 3 years ago 5
it was good.. was that their first time? for girls the first time is a pretty painful experiance.. but in a good way! though the impulse is strong to want to go fast it is utterly to much to do...it is also so tight it can hurt the guy too... messy business sex is!!
lilmizrenae321 3 years ago
lol
NICKJSBRIDE 3 years ago
damn, that sounded good.
JoeJonasluva87 3 years ago
Harder, damn it!!
oh no, it was awesome,
TinnaxD 3 years ago 2
woo! go joe! lol i think u should add more details
Strawberryfun99 3 years ago
GOD DAMN!!!! that utterly turned me on! that makes me want to want him even more!! i wanna have sex wit him when i grow up!!!
lolcullenchick101 3 years ago 26
TELL me about it! XD
TheCrushinDarkness 3 years ago 3
ha i do tooooo!
jbluvsme4ev 3 years ago 3
@lolcullenchick101 I'll join that club! :D haha xx
MyHeart2JoeJonas 1 year ago
ohmygod
i SO want to have sex with him!
NeverLetGo414 3 years ago 15
i never knew you could make joe sound so SEXY... I'm waiting for his delicate look and SEXY body! luv joe soooo much. i just don't wanna have to think about having sex with him tho.
joejonasisinmyhead 3 years ago 3
WOW, that was ummmmmm, so fantasized and prob so fictional but yet fascinating, gr8 job, i liked it and btw GO JOE!
Smiley2miley55 3 years ago
hahahahaha*cough*hahahah.
jonasandbeatles4luv 3 years ago 3
oh god. if that was me. wow.
i would be like joseph harder NOW!
lmao.
xoilovejoexo 3 years ago 5
haha!
lol
nice
OJDgirl14 3 years ago 4
hahaha
wow go joe lol
roachrena 3 years ago
damn i want to be adriana like so badley!!!!
by ht w way i dont really think that the sex scene sounded like joe but very detailish
lolcullenchick101 3 years ago
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its really good! what does it mean when you say "he pulled himself in her then out then in and out faster"?
RaveenaSweta 3 years ago
they were having sex
poly820 3 years ago
hahahaha raveenasweta lol
brittnitt 3 years ago
hahahah lol
brittnitt 3 years ago
lol
ecoffee123 3 years ago
haha wow!!!
yupdatsmealy 3 years ago
lol
dirtty!
but interesting :P
OJDgirl14 3 years ago
what is waist??
ximecoolslp 3 years ago
like the hips
ecoffee123 3 years ago
ok thanx (=
ximecoolslp 3 years ago
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what is the significance of the allusion to the knight archetype? what do the "skinny jeans" symbolize? I must know.
How long did you go over this scene in your head before you found the words to express it to the world?
YOU DIRTY FUCKING WHORE!
shebaum92388 3 years ago
Did I make you read the story? No.
Did I put a warning on the title of the video? yes.
If you don't like it, don't read it. It's not that hard.
fantasywriter101 3 years ago
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ohkkkk dis was a bit too fast
but it was er interestin but i thought the jonas brothers can't hav sex before marraige coz of da purity rings??
but dis is a story so yh but it was quite funni too
joejonasgyal 3 years ago
haha same! what is pov?
rihannafans0 3 years ago
POV is short for Point Of View. ;)
fantasywriter101 3 years ago
true me too !! lol
NICKJSBRIDE 3 years ago
lol
NICKJSBRIDE 3 years ago
you know wat fantasywriter you should write a love story about kevin i love kevin he so cool i noticed no one writes a love story about him if you do can you make him fall in love with a girl named adrianne (my name) lol
iLoveYourSmilez 3 years ago
hey i have jonas brother storys and kevin is like the main character right now but the girls name isnt adrianne
jklolsup 3 years ago
wats her secret!? omg!! its killing me! i have to know!!
volleyballorilldie 3 years ago
this is so fuckin good
jonasfanz93 3 years ago 3
holy binder paper!
lindsaykeen13 3 years ago 2
OHH YEAH WHAT ABOUT THE PURITY RINGS??
kendrafuu923 3 years ago
since there are pictures of joe and demi is this demi's pov?
BluePurpleGirl08 3 years ago
no, just random pictures, lol. ;) Demi isn't in this story. The jonas brothers aren't famous in it either.
fantasywriter101 3 years ago
i should know but what is a pov ????
NICKJSBRIDE 3 years ago
Point of view
dancerchica736 3 years ago
thanx...lol im so dum ! lol
NICKJSBRIDE 3 years ago
purity ring?
ohmygoditsziba 3 years ago
doesn't have one in this story. ;)
fantasywriter101 3 years ago
well, he's sweet, he asked her what she wanted lol umm nice chapter
MileyCyrusMusicc 3 years ago
whoa that was fast
iluvjoejonas92095 3 years ago
my bff and I are laughing our asses off rite now!!! HA HA HA HA!!!!
Jonasfan1996 3 years ago 2
uhh that was kinda awquard to read but it was till good lol
ilovenickjonas13210 3 years ago
i was on a different fanfic and i saw this WOW
one word
DAMN!!!!!!! niicee :)
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ATTENTION ALL JONAS BROTHER FANS!!!!!!
AS YOU'VE PROBABLY HEARD, THE JB HATERS ARE TRYING TO GET JB REMOVED FROM YOUTUBE! WE HAVE TO STAND UP FOR OUR BOYZ! THEY TOOK BURNIN UP (but we got it back, haha! in their face!!!!) AND NOW SOS GONE! THEY ARE STEPPING UP AND TAKING ON A BIGGER TASK! WE HAVE TO KEEP JB WITH US ON YOUTUBE! TO THE HATERS: REMEMBER, JB FANS NEVER GO DOWN WITHOUT A BATTLE! **put this under EVERY video you watch**
sweetiemuch 3 years ago 2
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did they really do that?!
JBisMYmainSQUEEZE 2 years ago
haha its a fan fic (:
which means its fictional and not real
roxyteenroyalty 2 years ago 2
HOLY SHIZNITS THATS NR/AO LOL
paramorepop 3 years ago 2
welll.......okayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
bella966 3 years ago 2
yea like that alleygirl said do more rated r stuff!! wow that sounded really wrong! anywho wow the day that they become bf/gf they dod it lol
ginapm121 3 years ago 3
um... intresting.... lmao
imgreeknvme1 3 years ago 4
best chaper!!
uggabubba97 3 years ago 2
my god. i think i just fantasized.
more moremore!~~
RandomGirl2drescue31 3 years ago 3
Wow is all I can say
MAthas723 3 years ago 2
GGGOOODDDD GIIIRrRLLL YOU KNOW HOW TO WRITE!!!!! YA WHAT IS HER BIG SECRET!?!?!? I just eeped with an ah. I want it so bad!! I want joe so bad!!
unforgiveablelove 3 years ago 6
Girll You Better Hurry. These Are Amazing. I Wanna Know What Her "Big Secret" Is!
njkjapR 3 years ago 4
do more rated r stuff plz plz plz plz!! keep posting you rock!!
alleygirl102396 3 years ago 6
HOLYY!!!! That was amazing! I'm so subsrcibing if you do more of this rated R stuff!
Jonas4Life12 3 years ago 4
PLLLLLLLLLLLLEASE POST MORE SOON!
vanessaskaterlover 3 years ago 4