It was okay, yeah still rookie style camera angles but don't worry you'll get better, it just takes some time. We've learned that too, we still need to get better.
I've seen your stuff here a lot, so I'm surprised you're still having the rookie issue with camera work, specifically showing sections twice. Also, the breathing seems unnecessary, and why the hell does he need to find a new Mongoose at the base when he just parked it? Finally, it just seems like the same, boring old story. Your trailer should try to attract as many people as possible, and I'm not interested in your series based on this.
I wanna throw up... I should make a video of what I hate about this machinima. i.e. camera work, fading into scenes, voice work, killjoy of everything.
Halo 3 was designed with Machinima in mind games like oblivion and fallout where not even though it is possible to make machinimas with oblivion and fallout Halo 3 is still the best
And by the way...am I the only one who thinks that these Halo 3 machinimas are starting to get old?
Okay, Halo 3 got the teather mode and it's easy to do machinimas with it...but come on! I'm tired of staring at the same freaking maps, the same freaking characters...it's the same old same old. Use some other games already!
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Wow. I remember seeing the very first Red vs. Blue around the time that making machinima was fairly new, and nobody really knew what they were doing. And even THAT was better than this piece of shit.
Yeah I know it rocked, but lets be honest. The camera work and voice acting were pretty shoddy, and it cant compare to some of the good machinima we have now. But this...whatever it was supposed to be, is just terrible on all fronts.
3/10 I suggest you use more forge constructed maps otherwise we all know what Valhalla looks like. its hard take the machinima seriously when all he did was drive base to base. Keep working on it though
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mmm. the way the music stoped was bad. I realy did not care for him at all. ?? what's going on? need mor plot develement. see if you can make the video wide screen to fit the player.
Why are all these machinimas about crime-fighting? That's kinda stupid. Halo is probably one of the worst games to do a crime-fighter on. The voice acting was pretty bad, and the camera wasn't steady. Not really promoting a series here.
Dear God, this proves that they'll let just about anyone produce machinima these days, Now I understand they're fairly new, but seriously, this is a terrible start. Not saying I could do much better, but the voices, camera work, picture quality and the dialogue need to improve.
Btw was it the REAL OptimumForge Productions? cuz in there other videos its 10x better than this crap what did someone try to fill in for them? because there work like the how to... series is way better than this
Just because Machinima is having a dry spell from good films, doesn't mean everyone should take it so extremely! Machinima still has some good films, and if you are thinking, "OMG it's all made in Halo!" then take a look at the "More From: machinima" section. There are only three or four videos made in Halo! Plus, Halo is the easiest game to make Machinima's on, what with theatre mode and cusom games, so quit your complaining, and just wait for the good stuff to come back!
Poor acting, camara angles were ok, no music to fix most of the scenes, there was no resistance when he plant the bomb, hard to follow the plot, and overall this was horrible seriously does machinima just let ANYBODY to join and post there machinima's here?
god damn, all you commenters are faggots, "get better or im unsubscribing to this", "I wasted two minutes of my life", it wasnt that fucking bad, jesus christ, 4/5
Machinima just isn't what it used to be. And to all those people who say things like "its always halo 3! God!". Halo really is the best for machinima. It's just, machinima isn't the same! I think to many people are making it...
And that is why halo is the best, because people can help you with it. Halo is pretty much what started machinima, As in Rooster Teeth with Red Vs. Blue.
maybe machinima should just keep with arby n the chief and gman squad maybe some sims 3 vids cause machinima juat got crap this year! is better improve with the time or i'm unsubbimg!
sorry but unless the series itself is a quantum leap better then you'll get no good feedback.
voice acting, music, acting, plot, the dialogue itself, camera movement. all these you need to be good, and original where possible, for a decent machinima! And sorry but none of them worked for me in this machinima, and apparently everyone else feels the same. keep trying though
This whole video actually makes me laugh, whoever made this is an idiot. Breathing noises, horrible voice acting and a stupid song choice. Worst Machinima i have ever watched.
Great video!! Dont listen to these guys man, people have to start machinima somewhere right! I enjoyed it, lots of cool camera angles, music was intense, and I wonder if Tom is going to be ok.
crap voice quality, music dito, shaky cam is way too much. geez, buy a descent mic be4 makin this shit! and if your already at the shop, buy some tallent plz. thx allot.
I like it. Finally someone gets to the more serious side, all the others are funny. We need atleast one thats more.. Deep. 5/5 im looking forward to it!
you guys need to work on a good plot not start it with so you know the objective then and have him drive over to a base with no resistance and plant the bomb plus get out with no resistance and btw the voices sounded to close together and to people who think machinamas have to be funny they don't you can make an action series machinama, take deus ex machina for example, not funny just full of action even though hes not finishing the damn thing yet
SUCKED!
gskillet123 2 years ago
This is halarious...this isn't serious right?...It's supposed to be funny right?...
SH474M 2 years ago
:) i love how people freack out caause its not perfect lol
mastergrunt369 3 years ago
It was okay, yeah still rookie style camera angles but don't worry you'll get better, it just takes some time. We've learned that too, we still need to get better.
-Kkayzaam
Halomega26 3 years ago 2
tips from me to u
1: get some friends to help u
2: have some one else do the camera
3: do some editing because puting music in isnt editing
IcyMeteor101 3 years ago
it sounds like the same voice for every part too.
bbman10pwns 3 years ago
this is pathetic how they try to make it cool but only make it a crappy home machinma
and how he tried to copy sarge's voice is lame
extremegamemaster 3 years ago
Ok really...
Im a huge RvB fan but your one of those really gay ones that think all machinima is coping. I didn't hear anything like Sarge's voice.
PS:All war movies have the old southern Sergent, what people don't know is that RvBcopied that from countless other movies as a joke.
SaintBrown852 2 years ago
u know u r right. I was really prejudged back there and i just seen too many crappy machinmas and i apolgise if i offended anybody.
extremegamemaster 2 years ago
roflmao
Kheperan 2 years ago
i love how he tries to make the camera move like digital ph33r does, but clearly sucks at it. Lol.
1/10000000000
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GUNSL1NG3R7 3 years ago
I'd like to see you do better.
rafayealmeida 3 years ago 5
I've seen your stuff here a lot, so I'm surprised you're still having the rookie issue with camera work, specifically showing sections twice. Also, the breathing seems unnecessary, and why the hell does he need to find a new Mongoose at the base when he just parked it? Finally, it just seems like the same, boring old story. Your trailer should try to attract as many people as possible, and I'm not interested in your series based on this.
halofan332 3 years ago 2
Jesus Christ ppl, calm down, it's just a promo.
wooplisy 3 years ago 2
GAY
REXDEX360 3 years ago
Lol
Rexer974 3 years ago
I wanna throw up... I should make a video of what I hate about this machinima. i.e. camera work, fading into scenes, voice work, killjoy of everything.
gamer00100 3 years ago
LAWL! Poor camera work...all that moving made me sick to my stomach...literally...I just threw up...wait...EPILEPTIC SEIZURE!!!!
Level4Prototype 3 years ago
Umm... No?
BicentinealFilms 3 years ago
wow, kill urselfs now or someone will probably do it themselves
EoMProductionsVideos 3 years ago
i hope they dont make this into a series
halokiller 3 years ago
this is more funny than it is serious just saying
VID3OTHI3Fproduction 3 years ago
Halo 3 was designed with Machinima in mind games like oblivion and fallout where not even though it is possible to make machinimas with oblivion and fallout Halo 3 is still the best
Britishrage42 3 years ago
sure why not
Upoopmainia 3 years ago
Doesn't look very interesting - shaky cam when nothing was happening and the guy panting was over the top. Nothing grabbed me.
Namaskard 3 years ago
Doesn't look promising at all...sorry.
And by the way...am I the only one who thinks that these Halo 3 machinimas are starting to get old?
Okay, Halo 3 got the teather mode and it's easy to do machinimas with it...but come on! I'm tired of staring at the same freaking maps, the same freaking characters...it's the same old same old. Use some other games already!
WirierBen300 3 years ago
sadly their arent many other games that can be used.
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Bobstickman13 3 years ago
If you're going to make a camera shake, DONT DO IT WHEN THERE ISNT ANY ACTION! The camera work was very lame.
And who the hell starts panting after a little bit of running?
If you are going to make a promo video, at least make it look good the first time.
Team117veteran 3 years ago 2
Alright, I just watched this again.
I THINK I GET IT!
See, this show is like Lost, BUT WITH A TWIST!
See, in Lost, the survivors are Lost. But in this show, YOU are the one who is lost. So now we can all go on with our lives.
aflyingturd 3 years ago 3
lol
KyleProductionz 3 years ago
GAY
funyongod 3 years ago
COMPLETELY SHITTY!!!!!!
HAWKstriker2470 3 years ago
It wasn't bad if this was their first attempt at a machinima
thelegendofbob 3 years ago
unfortunately, it isnt their first machinima
linknut888 3 years ago
....yikes. lol
thelegendofbob 3 years ago
Hopefully their last then man. Or may God help us all.
aflyingturd 3 years ago
...It wasn't.
SH474M 2 years ago
Where was the point when you were making this that you thought it was good?
This was god awful. Please don't make another. I beg you, please.
Cheezburger2012 3 years ago
Totally Lame work!!!
gilligan7777 3 years ago
Lame.
antwilliams86 3 years ago
wtf only halo 3 vids now?? and they suck aswell (in MY opinion)
Shamanmanwow 3 years ago
that sucked
utubeisasnake 3 years ago
lame i jabbed my eyes out with a rusty spoon
HoribiFuckis 3 years ago
ANOTHER HALO MACHINIMA??
WTF!?!?!?!?!?
Seriously this is going way too far.
LordFeckington666 3 years ago 2
the voice acting and no guards in the base drive from base to base, it was crap....
DannyJiggles 3 years ago
WTF? this is supposed to be dramatic? lol
RoadieRunProductions 3 years ago
Wow. I remember seeing the very first Red vs. Blue around the time that making machinima was fairly new, and nobody really knew what they were doing. And even THAT was better than this piece of shit.
KnathanofCydonia 3 years ago
yeah, but thats a bad example, cuz the 1st Red vs. Blue rocked, and all the rest too :P
Anyway, it wasn't that bad, but i was expecting something funny at the end
MrStoopid801 3 years ago
Yeah I know it rocked, but lets be honest. The camera work and voice acting were pretty shoddy, and it cant compare to some of the good machinima we have now. But this...whatever it was supposed to be, is just terrible on all fronts.
KnathanofCydonia 3 years ago
yeah... your right
MrStoopid801 3 years ago
hrrmm
campusmoviemaker 3 years ago
wow these friggin videos are all the same.
x13cody13x 3 years ago 2
gay
P4kiPoontangLover 3 years ago
epic fail
denzel5111 3 years ago
3/10 I suggest you use more forge constructed maps otherwise we all know what Valhalla looks like. its hard take the machinima seriously when all he did was drive base to base. Keep working on it though
Rascul 3 years ago
lame.. Machinima seem to publish anything..
Wakroy 3 years ago
i know right
utubeisasnake 3 years ago
with the camera are you trying to give the effect of a cameraman with turrets having a nervous breakdown?
Just2hotGim 3 years ago
thomas? thomas? THOOOOOOOOMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSS!!!!!!!
hax0rboi 3 years ago
camera needs a lot of work.
good job on the guy sneaking up on the agent.
the voice at the end going AGENT THOMAS was kind of annoying.
NewScapePro 3 years ago
Agent Thomas got pwned
rafis117 3 years ago
wow your camera man was on speed or something cause he was FUCKED up :P
ebenheart 3 years ago
That was O.K. i guess a 3/5(MAYBE)
thor655 3 years ago
Looked like a missing episode if you ask me.
SmileyReborn07 3 years ago
3/10
DDragonn01 3 years ago
i think i pissed my pants.
PurpleDinosawr1 3 years ago
i wont too see more arby n the cheif
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williamjberry3 3 years ago
The camera work is the only impressive thing I see about this machinima.
OLDSKOOL511 3 years ago
voice acting and camera angling isn't that good but...
4/5
StarkilerUnleashed 3 years ago
mmm. the way the music stoped was bad. I realy did not care for him at all. ?? what's going on? need mor plot develement. see if you can make the video wide screen to fit the player.
Don't give up. just work a bit harder.
noobking111 3 years ago
Why are all these machinimas about crime-fighting? That's kinda stupid. Halo is probably one of the worst games to do a crime-fighter on. The voice acting was pretty bad, and the camera wasn't steady. Not really promoting a series here.
1/5.
Thyunda 3 years ago
The whole Talking into their hands to make it sound like a radio was so real i almost shit myself
nachtatix 3 years ago
eh...I've seen better. No offence, but this is kind of a pathetic attempt at......well, anything.
RabidmonkeeX75 3 years ago
Dear God, this proves that they'll let just about anyone produce machinima these days, Now I understand they're fairly new, but seriously, this is a terrible start. Not saying I could do much better, but the voices, camera work, picture quality and the dialogue need to improve.
Dyl0n88 3 years ago
Music sucked + Film angle sucked , and the actors sucked.
Great movie ! 1/5
Xshady0 3 years ago
no civilians hurt no civilian casualties? any different? lol
Steam56 3 years ago 2
Btw was it the REAL OptimumForge Productions? cuz in there other videos its 10x better than this crap what did someone try to fill in for them? because there work like the how to... series is way better than this
dogsoldier123 3 years ago
Horrible logic.
DCStream 3 years ago
wow this is gay
OptimumForge Productions should fucking kill themselves
andrewkiv93 3 years ago
wtf????
dutsca 3 years ago
Just because Machinima is having a dry spell from good films, doesn't mean everyone should take it so extremely! Machinima still has some good films, and if you are thinking, "OMG it's all made in Halo!" then take a look at the "More From: machinima" section. There are only three or four videos made in Halo! Plus, Halo is the easiest game to make Machinima's on, what with theatre mode and cusom games, so quit your complaining, and just wait for the good stuff to come back!
BibadyBobady 3 years ago
good point
and it was not horrible its ok
monkeyrocke 3 years ago
Sack the camera man
FailSlapLOL 3 years ago
Poor acting, camara angles were ok, no music to fix most of the scenes, there was no resistance when he plant the bomb, hard to follow the plot, and overall this was horrible seriously does machinima just let ANYBODY to join and post there machinima's here?
dogsoldier123 3 years ago
god damn, all you commenters are faggots, "get better or im unsubscribing to this", "I wasted two minutes of my life", it wasnt that fucking bad, jesus christ, 4/5
TechnicalFilm 3 years ago
it really wasn't bad
4/5 is right on the nose. good rating!
monkeyrocke 3 years ago
oo, bad rating
TechnicalFilm 3 years ago
Fuck this sucks! I wasted two minutes of my life. This is so Gay. The music is gay and most of all your gay for this shit.
rafandres123 3 years ago
Machinima just isn't what it used to be. And to all those people who say things like "its always halo 3! God!". Halo really is the best for machinima. It's just, machinima isn't the same! I think to many people are making it...
LinkOkamii 3 years ago
no Oblivion and maybe Fallout are the best, only problem is you cant do it with mant people.
xPurpleDrinkx9001 3 years ago
And that is why halo is the best, because people can help you with it. Halo is pretty much what started machinima, As in Rooster Teeth with Red Vs. Blue.
LinkOkamii 3 years ago
Your fucking stupid. Quake Movies were the orginal machinimas.
ninjaguy4 3 years ago
Probably not good ones though.
LinkOkamii 3 years ago
1:17 "Mongoose...Gota find a mongoose.."
Well you could get the mongoose you arrived on?
superblob2 3 years ago
EPIC FAIL OMFG THIS IS CRAP why always goddamn halo try other games wtf..
MetalFtw15 3 years ago
ya. wouldn't CS or sumthing like that be better for a cop team?
h1tmn26 3 years ago
maybe machinima should just keep with arby n the chief and gman squad maybe some sims 3 vids cause machinima juat got crap this year! is better improve with the time or i'm unsubbimg!
JukaDominator 3 years ago
Ooooo! A threat!
superblob2 3 years ago
dude 2 words: EPIC FAIL!
sorry but unless the series itself is a quantum leap better then you'll get no good feedback.
voice acting, music, acting, plot, the dialogue itself, camera movement. all these you need to be good, and original where possible, for a decent machinima! And sorry but none of them worked for me in this machinima, and apparently everyone else feels the same. keep trying though
SpartanJ55 3 years ago
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Is this suppose to be a joke?
GenerationXS 3 years ago
Why does the guy breathe so deeply after less then 10 seconds of running?
ninjaguy4 3 years ago
lol i was wondering the same thing
Kl0wn0fde4th 3 years ago
always halo....
dakids666 3 years ago
How didthis make it up. Your Camera work is atrostios its worse than mine!
CountHavok 3 years ago
horribly gay music and noises and storyline gay gay gay gay gay
jeffydude2008 3 years ago
lol retarded camera angles xD makes it look funny / shockingly crap xD
teChDr4g0n 3 years ago
the breathing is too unrealistic. Why would he be breathing so hard after walking 5 steps?
FinalFlameXD 3 years ago
This whole video actually makes me laugh, whoever made this is an idiot. Breathing noises, horrible voice acting and a stupid song choice. Worst Machinima i have ever watched.
GenerationXS 3 years ago
this sucks.
thecelloslave 3 years ago
FAIL
Stigsnake5 3 years ago
God the Camera Angles ;.;....
SpookyJaw 3 years ago
what software do uu use to record you gaming
jamsta97 3 years ago
EPIC FAIL!
digitlecat 3 years ago
not very good voice acting but gl =D
tremlin1 3 years ago
haha! 2 stars! LOL!
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this shit sucks
darkerego 3 years ago
it was ok but not great
psychomaji 3 years ago
hahahaha lmao i love all these vids
spezzaemeryfriends 3 years ago
Horrible voice acting
RiffRaffFreak 3 years ago
horrible camera
retardnumberone 3 years ago
horrible all around lol
RiffRaffFreak 3 years ago
bad voice acting
greatspartan246 3 years ago
2 thumbs down
gameexpert3 3 years ago
Great video!! Dont listen to these guys man, people have to start machinima somewhere right! I enjoyed it, lots of cool camera angles, music was intense, and I wonder if Tom is going to be ok.
AnimusVolatilis 3 years ago
this is exactly what arby n the cheif takes the piss out of
harleybristowabc 3 years ago
retarded
SgtvVv 3 years ago
that was kinder bad voice quality was poor. and where did that sniper come from?
Sk8er0208 3 years ago
lol Where did it come from
paono2 3 years ago
machinima don't usually do the machinimas personally they merely sponsor what they think is good and that thought is a bit scary
falzarchaos 3 years ago
gay
ManseaM 3 years ago
bad
CaLLMeCauti0N 3 years ago
lame
xue12301 3 years ago
that was a waste of time..
camshaft999 3 years ago
lame
Seas14 3 years ago
crap voice quality, music dito, shaky cam is way too much. geez, buy a descent mic be4 makin this shit! and if your already at the shop, buy some tallent plz. thx allot.
darkravers009 3 years ago
I m serious machinimas need much better camera angels
headshotfilmss 3 years ago
shit
Stevoman1995 3 years ago
is this supposed to be funny or serious machinima
stiggs234 3 years ago
3/5
gurandorin 3 years ago
ehh didnt totally understand camera wernt great
paddyshouse 3 years ago
Hey The music was good... but the rest was crap and made no sense...
Ulldal 3 years ago
4/5
prezi93 3 years ago
more like 4/500
hoyz91 3 years ago
.004/5
gamer00100 3 years ago
/facepalm
mssnor 3 years ago
"agent thomas... agent thomas!..... agent THOMAS!!.... AGENT THOMAS!!!!"
shitty voices and bad narrative
8bassmasta8 3 years ago
ugh . . .
21alt3go 3 years ago
sorry to say this... but im loseing respect fo Machinima
8bassmasta8 3 years ago 2
was this supposed to be fun?
ZProle 3 years ago
man machinima is picking up any old crap nowadays . They need to focus on quality over quantity
manicdemise 3 years ago
True to that man, to many poopy shows.
WuvableKel 3 years ago
Looks kinda stupid.
Sorry.
andrewMAUTHE 3 years ago
funny not ur best 3/5
HALOMastersAKJ 3 years ago
ughh
charlesazn29 3 years ago
machinima what happened to your videos?? they used to be good!!
sookypoo 3 years ago 3
lol! xD
HiddenYuri 3 years ago
heres something to try...AVOID THE RIGHT STICK
gale34 3 years ago 2
im not trin to be mean but that wasnt good
ScubaLemur 3 years ago 3
the camera shaking made me laugh :P
Nice try
DtownPenguin84 3 years ago
Sorry mate 1/5... Nice try though ^^
Tabu1993 3 years ago 2
STOP TRYING TO MAKE THE NEXT REDvsBLUE... jesus
chaosnaska 3 years ago 3
life fail I'm afraid
KaliberKing 3 years ago
rofl...nice try >_>
sethlee0 3 years ago
........-_ - Nope.....
Earthspirit91 3 years ago
now that was COOL !!
HELL NOOO!!!! -5/5
simoghost12 3 years ago
I just have to say 1/5 I hate doing it.
DOABlam 3 years ago
Coo' but I don't get it that much :(
DoubleMoonz 3 years ago
stupid as hell
insider94 3 years ago
awesome! nah just kidding it sucked 1/5
kulemv 3 years ago
just stop telling them its shit cuz they dont need that if u dont like it dont comment or try to make a machinima that actually gets on machinima
EpicJourneyProducts 3 years ago
No civilians hurt, there were only two people.
Ghostkiller911 3 years ago
gaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyy
SpiderShaman3323 3 years ago
make something funny or so...
but what the hek is this?!
dudetube911 3 years ago
no no all wrong quit now!
keyz360 3 years ago
shite...
Ryukensco 3 years ago
I think Halo is the wrong game for machinimas. They look, without exception, all the same imho.
KeuleMedia 3 years ago 2
Fail. I might as well play the game itself if I wanted to plant a bomb...
d34dly4rr0w 3 years ago
I like it. Finally someone gets to the more serious side, all the others are funny. We need atleast one thats more.. Deep. 5/5 im looking forward to it!
mastarceef7 3 years ago
you guys need to work on a good plot not start it with so you know the objective then and have him drive over to a base with no resistance and plant the bomb plus get out with no resistance and btw the voices sounded to close together and to people who think machinamas have to be funny they don't you can make an action series machinama, take deus ex machina for example, not funny just full of action even though hes not finishing the damn thing yet
icool789 3 years ago