I like how everything felt natural. It seemed like a genuine doc... some of the genuine audio may have been a bit extreme. Though the film did keep me curious as we learned a little more, and the end still piqued my interest, though I left a little unsatisfied. I think I may need to watch it again to pick up on some details. Over all good work, though! Please check out my submission 'Interview with the Recluse', it also has some documentary-ish injections :)
58.5/100 Interesting submission, it makes you stay till the end to find out what the purchase was. In the maybe the juice wasn't worth the squeeze, It drags a little but the concept of a fake documentaery is very funny, next time try to find a concept that is comedic on many levels, good luck.
Did you maybe take into account that the audio from the boom, the rough lighing and lack of cinematic mise en scene may have been intentional? If it looks too polished it takes away from the cinema verti look. If I really did catch someone out in a parking lot for an interview would I have ran out to the nearby highway and stopped the cars for crystal audio? would I have taken time to set up a softbox on someone who wasn't enthusiastic about doing the interview in the first place?
I decided to not use any of those things for a reason. I appreciate the constructive criticism for sure, but I think that the genre of the short should be taken into account.
fucking awesome. This blows all your previous work out of the water. Great editing, great music choice, great script. All the actors were convincing too! Don is discrete and hilarious.
I like how everything felt natural. It seemed like a genuine doc... some of the genuine audio may have been a bit extreme. Though the film did keep me curious as we learned a little more, and the end still piqued my interest, though I left a little unsatisfied. I think I may need to watch it again to pick up on some details. Over all good work, though! Please check out my submission 'Interview with the Recluse', it also has some documentary-ish injections :)
Da3vid 3 years ago
Great Job Guys!! I loved it!!
SpidermanDan87 3 years ago 3
based on the rating criteria this is my review:
Lighting 3/6.25
Sound 3.5/6.25
Editing 3.5/6.25
Cinematography 3/6.25
Acting 9/12.5
Script 6.5/12.5
Originality 17/25
Overal Impression 13/25
58.5/100 Interesting submission, it makes you stay till the end to find out what the purchase was. In the maybe the juice wasn't worth the squeeze, It drags a little but the concept of a fake documentaery is very funny, next time try to find a concept that is comedic on many levels, good luck.
Critic5000 3 years ago
Did you maybe take into account that the audio from the boom, the rough lighing and lack of cinematic mise en scene may have been intentional? If it looks too polished it takes away from the cinema verti look. If I really did catch someone out in a parking lot for an interview would I have ran out to the nearby highway and stopped the cars for crystal audio? would I have taken time to set up a softbox on someone who wasn't enthusiastic about doing the interview in the first place?
dontknow252 3 years ago
I decided to not use any of those things for a reason. I appreciate the constructive criticism for sure, but I think that the genre of the short should be taken into account.
dontknow252 3 years ago
made me laugh!
very well done!!
beatrixkiddo487 3 years ago 2
Nice teaser. Makes you want to see more.
robsargeant 3 years ago
wow not bad, interesting concept, hope you make it to the finals, We have a video too, it's called "IceBreaker" tell me what you think.
JoelLaFlamme 3 years ago
Awesome!!
JulieHutch05 3 years ago
Great job, guys!
dnlmicky 3 years ago
wow you guys are SUPERSTARS!!!!BOOM BOMM ON THE KICK DRUMB BABY!!!HAHA....THE EX GIRLFRIEND IS MY FAV.
browneyedchick06 3 years ago 3
Awesomeness! I love this video!
randomnessperson123 3 years ago
Below comment was me, Alex.. not Julie. lol
Kazper2 3 years ago
I love the outer-space-like music, mixed with the down-to-earth concept. Fantastic! :D
JSchape24 3 years ago
Loved it man, great job!
bfirooz1 3 years ago
fucking awesome. This blows all your previous work out of the water. Great editing, great music choice, great script. All the actors were convincing too! Don is discrete and hilarious.
FanOFlavoredShampoo 3 years ago
Oh wowzerz! thanks a bunch buddy! :D
dontknow252 3 years ago
lol, that was so awesome. wow, you are pretty damn creative.
Davjs 3 years ago
Thanks David! :D
dontknow252 3 years ago
Very Cool, good job
Kurt265 3 years ago